1、第二部分 高频话题写作指导,八年级（下） Units 5-7,难忘的事情 写作导图 云南近四年书面表达的命题与难忘的事相关话题属于高频话题，此类话题主要是描写一件难忘的事。如：2012昆明；2012玉溪；2012大理；2012红河州；2011红河州；2011普洱等。,An unforgettable thing,The things that are un- forgettable,Whats the unforgettablething is,The descrip-tion of the thing,When, where，who,how, why,Your feelings,Excite
2、d， moved, happy, sad, angry,亮点句型速成常用句型：I will never forget the class. It gave me an important lesson.推荐句型： I will never forget the class because it gave me an important lesson. I will never forget the class which gave me an important lesson.,The class which gave me an important lesson is unforgettab
3、le.常用句型：I am deeply moved by what Mike did.,推荐句型： I am deeply moved by the things that Mike did. What Mike did moved me deeply/a lot. I still remember the day last summer when I went for a picnic with my father.,2. There is no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born.3. These magic wo
4、rds touched my heart and I will never forget him.4. In my opinion, friends are the persons who can share happiness and sorrow with us.,典例剖析（2012昆明）A. A true storyB. As a student, I should .要求:请从所给的A、B两个题目中任选其一作答， 分值相同。如选B题，请把题目补充完整再作答。2. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写 规范。,3. 不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guangming Middle School。 4. 词数不少于60。,【审题指导】 细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1. 本题是命题作文。题目是“A true story”。 着重写出自己经历的某件真实的事情以及对 于这件事情的感受。2. 本篇作文的体裁以记叙为主，主要是记叙发 生过的真实事件，时态用一般过去时，侧重描 述给你留下深刻印象的那一瞬间。3. 紧扣主题，词数不少于60个，文中不得出现 实姓名、校名及地名。,【范文点评】,
