1、第二部分 高频话题写作指导,九年级（全） Units 3-4,我们的变化写作导图,从云南近四年与我们的变化话题相关书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度如下：1. 实现梦想的目标，心态的变化，如2012曲 靖珍惜眼下；2. 2011大理，成长的经历。,写作范文详见： http:/,亮点句型速成常用句型：My teachers and classmates help me with my English. My English is good now.推荐句型： Thanks to my dear teachers and classmates, my English becomes much b
2、etter now than before. With the help of (Under the,help of) my teachers and classmates, my English has improved a lot now. I have made a great progress on my English with the help of (under the help of) my teachers and classmates.常用句型：I liked playing computer games before. And I played it a lot.,推荐句
3、型： I was interested in playing computer games before, so I played it a lot. I used to be interested in playing computer games, so I always spent plenty of time on it.,1. I used to be a bit shy, but now I become outgoing.2. Day by day, I get on very well with my classmates.3. My life has changed a lo
4、t in the past three years.4. I was fat and short before I came to the middle school.,5. Now, I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school. 6. So I become taller and stronger than before.7. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier.,8. My parents and my teach
5、ers used to worry about me, but now they are pleased with me.9. I am willing to care about others.,更多常用词汇见本书“话题词汇分类速记表”（话题（一）个人情况 话题（三）居住环境）,典例剖析（2011大理）I Am Not a Child Any More提示：在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮！但这还 不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、 帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、 回报亲朋师长？还是成长的点点滴 滴，久久不能忘记。请以“I Am Not a Child Any More”为题记叙你在学习生活中 经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一 个小孩。,要求：1. 请根据所给的题目，用英语写一篇短 文； 2. 词数不少于60词； 3. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 4. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名， 否则以零分计。,【审题指导】1. 对自己的现在和过去作比较，以此说明自己 已经长大；2. 写出自己在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事 情，通过事例来证明自己的观点；3. 作以总结，再次突出主题；4. 词数不少于60；5. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以 零分计。,【范文点评】,
