1、中考英语写作指导,中考英语作文评分标准,一类（13-15分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本无语法和词汇方面的错误。 二类（10-12分）：写出大部分要点，语句较流畅。有少量语法和词汇方面的错误。 三类（7-9分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误。 四类（4-6分）：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。 五类（1-3分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较多。基本上没有通顺的句子。只写出一些单词，不知所云。,How to get high points in the exam?,1.
2、要点齐全； 2. 语法正确，段落清晰； 3. 书写工整，语言优美。,Follow the three steps:,What to write? How to write? Make your article better.,1. 要点全； 2. 层次清； 3. 卷面净； 4. 行文美。,Tips：审题,Tips：提纲，时态、句型,【2010南京】书面表达（满分15分） 假如你是王林，你的美国朋友Daniel将来南京学习，他想了解所到中学附近的滨江图书馆（Binjiang Public Library）。请根据海报中的信息，给他发一封电子邮件，介绍滨江图书馆的情况及部分馆区的功能。 注意：1.
3、 电子邮件中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。3. 词数80左右。电子邮件的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Binjiang Public Library Over 900,000 books and 13,000 electronic journals Location: 18 Binjiang Road, Jianye District Open: 8:00 a.m. (Mon. Fri.) 9:00 a.m. (Sat. & Sun.) Closed: 5:00 a.m. (Mon. Fri.) 8:00 a.m. (Sat. & Sun.) Sectio
4、ns: Loan Desk(借书处)， Reading Room, Computing Room, Electronic Resources(资源)，Childrens Story Corner, Book Shop,Functions: borrow & return books search for information on the Internet Dear Daniel, I am pleased to know that you will come to Nanjing.,【2010南京】书面表达,Dear Daniel,I am pleased to know that you
5、 will come to Nanjing. Heres some information about Binjiang Public Library.The library, located at 18 Binjiang Road, has over 900,000 books and 13,000 electronic journals. It is open from 8:00 a.m. to 5:00 p.m. on weekdays. On weekends it is open for 11hours. It is a good place for people to read a
6、nd borrow books.There are different sections in the library. You can not only borrow and return books at Loan Desk, but also read newspapers and magazines in Reading Room. If you want to search for information on the Internet, you can go to Computing Room. You can also buy some new books in Book Sho
7、p.I believe you will find the library useful.Yours sincerely,Wang Lin,【2011南京】书面表达。 假如你是李平，准备参加学校组织的英语征文比赛。请根据下面所提供的信息，介绍今天在你校操场举行的“ONE for ONE ” 图书义卖活动的情况并谈谈你的感受。注意： 1 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 2 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。 3 词数80左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 This afternoon a charity sale was held on the playground in our sch
8、ool. _,【2011南京】,This afternoon a charity sale was held on the playground in our school. Its purpose was to donate books to children in poor areasIf you bought one book，you gave a new one to a child in need at the same timeAll the teachers and students took an active part in this eventEveryone looked
9、 quite happyAs we know，books are bridges to knowledge. If a child in poor areas can receive a better education and get more knowledge, he will have more chances of success. In this way，his life can be greatly improved,【2012南京】六、书面表达（满分15分） 上周日在秦淮河便发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情，请根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的英语园地写一篇题为“A Brav
10、e Young Man”的英文稿件。,注意： 1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3、词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。,One possible version:,A Brave Young ManIt was a nice day last Sunday. Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby. Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. H
11、e looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water. It was very dangerous. Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river. At that time other people came to offer help. Finally, the boy was saved and he was very grateful. People
12、 all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from him.,【2013南京】六、书面表达（满分15分）为了迎接2014南京青奥会，你校在筹备一个丹麦文化角。假如你是南京青奥示范学校阳光中学的李明，请你用英语给丹麦的姊妹学校写一封电子邮件，内容必须包括： 1. 表达你对南京举办青奥会的喜悦心情； 2. 说明创办丹麦文化角的目的：介绍丹麦文化，增进友谊； 3. 请对方提供有关丹麦文化的信息并邀请他们来宁交流。 参考词汇：2014 青奥会 the 2014 Youth Olympic Games ; 丹麦 De
13、nmark文化角 culture corner; 增进友谊 build up friendships 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。,One possible version:【2013南京】 Dear Sir/MadamI am Li Ming from Sunshine Secondary School, a YOG demo school of Nanjing. I am writing to ask for some information about yo
14、ur culture, as our school is preparing a Denmark culture corner to build up friendships between teens.Im very proud that our city will be the host of the 2014 Youth Olympic Games. We are planning to introduce your culture and your life. Would you please send some to us? We would be grateful for your
15、 help if you do.At the same time, we are really happy to invite you and your students to come to Nanjing in the summer of 2014. Welcome to Nanjing!Yours sincerelyLi Ming,2014中考作文写作讲评,书面表达(满分15分)假如你是来自英国某中学的交换生Daniel, 你想参加英文报纸Jinling Daily 广告中介绍的机器人培训班。,ROBOT COURSE Robot course for beginners at Star
16、light School Organized visits to Friendly Robots Company E-mail: robotcourse Jinling. Com,请根据该广告内容，用英语写一封电子邮件，询问与该班相关的具体信息，邮件内容应包括： 培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课； 参观机器人公司的具体安排 你还想了解到该培训班其他信息。,An e-mail Ask for information:,Step1: what to write?,When will the course start and finish?Are there any classes at the w
17、eekend?,培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课；,2. 参观机器人公司的具体安排3. 你还想了解到该培训班其他信息。,What do you want to know about the visits to Friendly Robots Company?,Some more information about the course, such as.,Tips：认真审题，勾画要点,Step2: How to write?,文章分为三部分来写作； 考虑所用句型： I want to know/ I wonder.I would like to knowCould you tell me 注意
18、宾语从句中的语序。,Tips：列出提纲，确定时态、句型。,Step3: Make your article better,写好后检查：作文中应避免的几种常见语言错误： 时态错误（扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在1分左右）。 单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要过关）。名词单复数（细心就可以避免的错）中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让整句不得分）。,作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有12分的卷面整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。,解决方法：先打草稿，修改完善后再誊抄到试卷上。 平时认真规范书写，决不使用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。,What to write? 认真审题，勾画要点 How to
19、 write? 列出提纲 (段落清晰)确定时态、 句型 Make your article better.适当使用连接词变换句式正确使用复合句恰当使用谚语写好后检查注意书写,Remember to follow the steps:,审 编 变 查,连接词 p.59 8B,and, also, too, as well, as well as, both and , not only but also, either or, neither nor, in addition (另外), besides (而且), Whats more (而且),but, however, yet, altho
20、ugh, though, while, compared with,if, unless,because, because of, for, since, as,so, therefore, as a result, sothat, suchthat,like, such as, for example,surely, certainly, in fact, there is no doubt, no wonder, never,first(ly), second(ly), lastly first of all, then, next, afterwards, finally,in a word, in all, in my opinion, to conclude,in order to, so that, in order that,反馈修改,一、语法、拼写 *时态、语态用对了吗？ *单词拼写正确吗？/词组搭配合适吗？ *标点符号正确吗？ *句子结构：有动词做主语吗？ 有好词、好句吗？二、整体结构有错吗？ *文章分段了吗？ *使用主题句了吗？ *是否有利于有效交际？（准确性、流畅性、连贯性）,
