1、基于高考范文指导下 的写作训练专题邀请信,An invitation letter,What does it impress you?,Why is writing so tough?,Input,Output,2004-2015十年高考全国卷作文体裁分析,Brainstorming Definition: An invitation letter is a type of letter that is to invite the receiver to take part in certain activity. It can be formal and informal.,必备句型:Beg
2、inning1. Its a great honor for me to invite you to 2. I take the pleasure to invite you to 3. Im writing to invite you to 4. Id like to invite you to 5. May I ask you to consider coming to.? 6. I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in,必备句型: Ending1.Im looking forward to hearing f
3、rom you.2.We hope that you would come and look forward to seeing you.3. If you are able to come with us ,please let us know and we will wait for you. 4. Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come? 5.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.,Model(模板)： Dear _，I woul
4、d like to invite you to join us to _for_ (内容) on/at _ (时间)at/in _ (地点). We would be honored/delighted to have you there with us.The _(活动) will start at _ (具体时间). Its about_(主题).We will_.(活动具体内容) At around _ (时间), we will_ (具体安排)We would appreciate it very much if you could accept our invitation. Loo
5、king forward to receiving your replyYours sincerely，Li Ming,CharacteristicsBeginning(Paragraph1)：Writing purpose.Body(Paragraph2)：Details of the activity, including the theme, time, place, and some requirements etc.Ending(Paragraph3)：Politely express the gratitude and expectation.,Head (Aim),Body (D
6、etails),End(Expectation),What makes a good invitationletter?,Discussion,揭开高考真题神秘面纱：2015年全国卷1 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： 1.栏目介绍； 2.稿件内容； 3.稿件长度：约400词汇 4.交稿日期：6月28日前 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好。,提炼要点：,1.写信约稿（目的）； 2.“外国文化”栏目介绍； 3.稿件内容：美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文； 4.稿
7、件长度：约400词汇 ； 5.交稿日期：6月28日前；（2-5：具体内容） 6.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Appreciating （品味佳作),要点提炼： 1.写信约稿: 2.“外国文化”栏目介绍: 3.稿件内容：美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文： 4.稿件长度：约400词汇 5.交稿日期：6月28日前 6.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ,25,Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our n
8、ewspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holida
9、ys and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,25,Content,Everything needed included
10、which is related to your view. (内容要完整),Everything needed included which is related to your view. (内容要完整),Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed(结构合理,行文流畅) * Proper linking words between sentences,Everything needed should be included.(内容完整）,Dear Peter, Id like to as
11、k you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part o
12、f the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before J
13、une 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,Step1(head)： Writing purpose,Step2 (body)：Well-organized, smoothly and clearly developed.,Step 3(end)：Expectation,Structure,*GoodEverything needed included which is related tEeeEEEEEo your view. (内容要完整) tween sentences,Good beginning and
14、ending. （好的开头和结尾）,Well organized and smoothly developed. （结构合理、行文流畅）,Proper linking words between sentences. （恰当的连接词）,Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries art
15、icles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school stude
16、nts.You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua,25,* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns.(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化) * No Chingl
17、ish. (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes .(避免语法错误),Language,2010年全国卷1 英语书面表达（满分25分）假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华.你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她给写一封信. 英语演讲比赛 主题：人与自然 时间：6月15日下午2.00-5.00 地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生 联系人：李华（电话484876655）欢迎大家光临 注意：词数100左右;开头已为你写好。 Dear Ms.Smith, _Best wishes,L
18、i Hua,Dear Ms.Smith, I am LiHua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. I sincere hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and a judge.The contest, the theme of it is “Man and Nature”, will be holding in the Room 501 from 2：00 to 5：00 in the afternoon of June
19、 15. Whats more, there will have ten students take part in it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give we some precious remarks. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invite. My telephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to receive your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua,15,
20、2010年全国卷1 英语书面表达（满分25分）假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华.你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她给写一封信. 英语演讲比赛 主题：人与自然 时间：6月15日下午2.00-5.00 地点：501教室 参赛选手：10名学生 联系人：李华（电话484876655）欢迎大家光临 注意：词数100左右;开头已为你写好。 Dear Ms.Smith, _Best wishes,Li Hua,Dear Ms.Smith, I am LiHua, the leader of the Students
21、Union of Yucai Middle School. I sincere hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge.The contest, the theme of it is “Man and Nature”, will be holding in the Room 501 from 2：00 to 5：00 in the afternoon of June 15. Whats more, there will have ten students take part i
22、n it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give we some precious remarks. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invite. My telephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to receive your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua,【分析】基本表达清楚；时态运用恰当；采用了连接手法；内容连贯；准确性不够。,15,A good essay should
23、 be,1. complete （要点齐全） 2. coherent（行文连贯） 3. accurate（用词准确） 4. fluent/clear（表达流畅） 5. various (句式多样) 6. neat（书写工整）,Concluding,Strike while the iron is hot.,2015年全国卷2书面表达假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.出发及返回时间；2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适
24、当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结尾已为你写好。,Strike while the iron is hot.,2015年全国卷2书面表达假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.出发及返回时间；2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结尾已为你写好。,Step 1 analyze the requirements(认真审题) Step 2 draw up an outline(谋篇布局) Step 3
25、 organize the sentences(联句成篇) Step 4 get the article polished up(锦上添花) Step 5 check the mistakes(查漏补缺),Five steps to write an English essay：,Requirements： Genre：Invitation letter Person：The first and second person Tense：Future tense,提炼要点：,1.邀请露西前往养老院陪老人过重阳节（目的）； 2.出发及返回时间：适当增加细节，具体时间、地点； 3.活动：包饺子、表演
26、节目等，意义何在； （2-3具体内容）,Outline： Paragraph 1. Purpose of the invitation.邀请露西前往养老院陪老人过重阳节,OutlineParagraph 2.2.出发及返回时间;3.活动：包饺子、表演节目等； What is the Double Ninth Festival? When? Where? Why? How?(活动具体内容和安排,适当增加细节),Outline Paragraph 3.Appreciation and expectation(感激和期待),Lets take action! Write the invitationletter in 15 minutes.,assess,Please learn to your composition,Homework： Correct , rewrite your articles and hand in tomorrow.,Goodbye!,
