1、如何写好一篇英语作文,与朋友的书信篇,书信文的格式,开头和结尾：Dear friend,Im glad to write a letter to you. .Yours,Maomao,开头金句,1. 首先进行问候：How are you these days?最近怎么样How is it going? 2. 其次进行开场白：It is glad for me to write a letter to you.I heard that you want to know something about .,now let me introduce all these things to you.,
2、内容衔接金句,1. 分多个方面时：First of all,. Secondly,.Thirdly,.Finally（last but not least）,. 2.作为衔接时：As we all know,.In my opinion,.On the one hand,.on the other hand.It is * for you to * For example,. such as. and so on.,总结的话语,1. All in all,. 总的来说2. In general,.,结束语,另起一行 1. With best wishes. 2. Good luck! 3. I
3、m looking forward to your reply.,常见错误,1. 低级语法错误likevery much2. 过于低级句子Im very happy. It is good.3. 切忌为了凑字数重复不必要的部分，显得很啰嗦4. 高级句子想好了再写，不要挑战高难度句子除非你很熟练。5. 时态和语态要时时刻刻保持一致，写完检查！,不会表达，另辟蹊径,中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所
4、造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。,(1) 迂回而行,当汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。,(2) 小词大用,汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。,(3) 借花献佛,有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。,
5、锦上添花，量力而行,(1) 句型多样化，不要I（We）到底，使人觉得乏味。(2)适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词。(3)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。,(4)上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略， (5)字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。,检查,中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：,【注意】此时不宜在卷面上作较大的改动，以免顾此失彼
6、，影响全局。,(1) 格式是否有错。 (2) 拼写有无错误。 (3) 语言是否用错。 (4) 时态、语态错误。 (5) 标点错误。 (6) 人称是否用错。,示范文,Dear sister,How is it going? Im very glad to tell you a big news, I had move to a new school. Now let me tell you somthing about this school.As you know, I used to study in a shabby school in the countryside,It was sma
7、ll and old. I used to bring food from home to school, it makes food become cold and it didnt use to be delicious. I didnt like that school, on the one hand, the school I studied before was so small that we can not have P.E class. On the other hand,there used not to be a library, it was hard for us t
8、o read a book.But now, things have changed. I dont need to bring food from home anymore, we have delicious food for free. And I can play soccer ball, too. The biggest change of my life is that I,can read in our new library. What a nice school it is !All in all, everything is find here. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours, Maomao,
