1、Summary writing2017高考新作文概况PART I 应用文写作： 80 20词 共 15分PART II 读后续写：原文 350词左右续写 15020词PART III 概要写作：原文 350词左右概要 6020A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details 牛津高阶英汉双解词典 读者在 正确理解文章 的 基础 上 , 在 不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构 的 前提 下，用 简明、精练的语句高度浓缩 文章的 主要内容和观点 。It is a brief, t
2、horough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition. 01 What is a summary?Mary is a beautiful girl who always smiles to others.Mary is a girl. Contain the main ideaIgnore the unnecessary detailsa 60-word summaryuse your own wordsin the third personwith a brief s
3、entenceconnection between sentences(句子衔接)02 Requests of Summary WritingStep 1. Determine the type of writing and identify the topic as well as the authors purposeStep 2. Divide the passage 1428Content: “looking through a hole in a wall at a real scene.”Assistance: “By coincidence, oil paints were al
4、so developed ”Step 4. Make an outline of the passagePara 1 Topic Sentence:Idea 1:Idea 2:Para 2 Topic Sentence:Information about perspective: Put forward:Content:Assistance:Step 5. Write the first draftPara 1Topic Sentence:During the Renaissance, new ideas and values gradually replaced those held in
5、the Middle Ages.Rewrite:In the Renaissance, new viewpoints were in place of those hundreds years ago. viewpointsnew ideas and values were in place of hundreds years agoreplaced held in the Middle Ages同义转换Idea 1:People began to concentrate less on religious themes and adopt a more humanistic attitude
6、 to life. Rewrite：Firstly, people focused more on humanistic themes rather than religious ones. Idea 2:At the same time painters returned to classical Roman and Greek ideas about art. They tried to paint people and nature as they really were.Rewrite：Secondly, painters returned to classical ideas, wh
7、ich attached great importance to real people and nature.focused more on 同义转换句型转变短语连接删除细节Para 1In the Renaissance, new viewpoints were in place of those hundreds years ago. Firstly, people focused more on humanistic themes rather than religious ones. Secondly, painters returned to classical ideas whi
8、ch focused on real people and nature. (38 words) Step 6. Revise the SummaryPeople had new viewpoints during the Renaissance. Meanwhile, painters preferred the classical ideas and painted real people and nature.People had new viewpoints during the Renaissance. People focused more on humanistic themes
9、 rather than religious ones. Meanwhile, painters preferred the classical ideas and painted real people and nature. (29 words)One possible version of Para 1Tips lCover all the key pointslWrite in correct languagelUse proper conjunctionslAvoid copying the original sentenceslCount the words (6020) One
10、possible versionPeople had new viewpoints during the Renaissance. People focused more on humanistic themes rather than religious ones. Meanwhile, painters preferred the classical ideas and painted real people and nature.The perspective proposed by Masaccio in 1428 became the typical painting characteristic in that period. With the development of oil paints, people felt like seeing reality through a hole. (58 words)
