1、看图作文,少一个要点：10-11分 少一个要点一个细节：9-10分 少一个要点两个细节：8-9分 少两个要点：8-9分 少两个要点一个细节：7-8分 少三个要点：6-7分 结尾有效；语言准确性；时态；文体；书写整洁,作文评分标准,Points that make a good composition：,内容全面语言丰富结构紧凑错误较少,英语作文四步骤,STEP1：确定文章框架，包括：时态、语态、格式、展开方式、开头结尾等。 STEP2：确定内容要点，包括：主要人物、时间地点、重要细节、合理发挥等。 STEP3：正式开始写作，整理思路成篇，行文连贯。 STEP4：检查全文，主要检查语法以及粗心犯
2、下的错误。,典型问题,1. 读题不清,was / weredid,结尾应与所给的开头和上文能够衔接、有效、切题,典型问题,2.描述图片中要点或细节时有遗漏,3. 语言表达能力有待提高： （1）句子结构不完整 （2）词汇量不足 （3）出现中文式英文 （4）上下文衔接,he was revoked his driving license.不规则动词的过去式和过去分词变化错误drink drank drunkdrive drove drivensee saw seen give gave givenhold held held,出现中文式英文,请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔
3、身上的事。 注意：1.词数不少于60。2.参考词汇：醉酒的 drunk 吊销驾照 revoke a driving license,看图作文的基本要求是：认真审图，确立主题，提炼要点，展开联想，变点为句，连句成篇。要达到这些要求，我们就必须认真审图，善于利用图中人物间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所，以及图中的文字说明和标识来提炼要点；要围绕主题展开合理的想象，切忌游离于主题展开不着边际的联想。,1、认真看图，确定故事主干，确立故事主题 结合文字和图画，主要讲述了什么故事？要表达的主题是什么? 四幅图记述了昨天发生在叔叔身上的事，我们可以确定本篇书面表达的故事主干是：昨天叔叔酒后开车，
4、出事故而受伤，被吊销驾照。要表达的主题是：酒后决不能驾车！,2、围绕主题，提炼要点 围绕确立的主题，仔细看图，初步列出每幅图的要点。,第一幅图：与朋友聚会，喝酒，结果喝醉了。,第二幅图：朋友劝阻；不听，坚持酒后驾车,第三幅图：撞树出事故；受伤,第四幅图：住院；警察吊销驾照,3、合理想象，补出要点将四幅图连起来并结合考虑每幅图中的各个细节进行想象，将隐藏的细节补出来,使故事连贯。 第一幅图：喝酒的地点（可能在朋友家，也可能在饭店），根据喝酒的地点确定是谁邀请谁。可能因为高兴叔叔酒喝多了，喝醉了（为下文铺垫）。 第二幅图：根据他说的话“No problem”可以推断：朋友劝他，他没听，坚持驾车回家
5、,第三幅图：酒后驾车，可以想象开车的情况：酒后驾车，车失控，撞树出事故。根据第四幅图可推断他没有死而是受了伤。警察到现场或者被路人看到，将他送往医院。 第四幅图：因伤势严重，要住院几天；警察对他处罚，吊销驾照，叔叔很后悔。 结尾：这真是个难以忘怀的经历！叔叔再不会酒后驾车了。,4、确定时态，译出要点 确定表达时所用的正确时态，将围绕主题确定的要点和经过合理想象补出的细节翻译出来。 本篇书面表达是记述的昨天发生在叔叔身上的事，故用过去时态来表达。,5、连句成篇，过渡自然对译出的要点和细节通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词或词语使表达连贯，再加上文章开头和结尾的话照顾到文章的首尾呼应。 My unc
6、le will never forget what happened to him yesterday. How he regretted what he had done! This is really an unforgettable experience for my uncle. I believe he will never drive after drinking again.,多使用过渡性词语使句子连贯,表举例：for example、for instance、表补充：besides、in addition、moreover、 whats more 表原因：because of、
7、thanks to、because 表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so 表转折：however、nevertheless、yet,第一幅图：Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends. He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers / alcohol. As a result, he got drunk.,第二幅图：After the meal, it was dark outside. My uncle wanted to drive
8、home. His friends tried to persuade him not to do so, but he didnt to listen to them and insisted on driving by himself, saying “No problem”.,第三幅图：He got into the car and drove away. However, he couldnt control the car because he was drunk. As a result / Suddenly, his car ran into a tall tree. He wa
9、s badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene and took him to hospital.,第四幅图：Unfortunately, he had to stay in hospital for several days because of being seriously injured. Worse still, he was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.,My uncle will never forget what hap
10、pened to him yesterday.Yesterday evening, my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends. He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers. As a result, he got drunk. After the meal, it was dark outside. My uncle wanted to drive home. His friends tried to persuade him not to do so, but he didnt listen to
11、them and insisted on driving by himself, saying “No problem”. He got into the car and drove away. However, he couldnt control his car. Suddenly, his car,ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police quickly came to the scene and took him to hospital. Unfortunately, he had to stay in hospital for several days. Worse still, he was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.How he regretted what he had done! / What an unforgettable experience it is for my uncle! I believe he will never do that again.,
