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1、新四级考试整个流程 时间:9:0011:20 写作题与快速阅读 45分钟 9:55 收答题卡110:00 听力(35)、阅读理解(25)、完型或改错(15)、中英翻译(5)11:20 收答题卡2选择题务必用2B浓度的铅笔作答;所有非选择性试题(即写作、填空等)务必用黑色字迹签字笔作答,大学英语四级作文四个基本考点,1、 切题-所谓切题是指在形式上诸如段落、字数、文体、格式等方面满足题目要求,并在内容上没有偏差。 2、 表达清楚、条理清晰-本要求考查学生对文章结构的掌握,要求文章主题观点明确,有头有尾,论证说明安排有主次,有轻重。 3、 文字通顺,连贯性较好-本要求考查学生对过渡句和连接词或词组

2、的掌握和运用,要求文章句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯,不突兀。 4、 基本无语言错误-本要求考查学生语言基本功的掌握,包括语法与拼写两部分。,写作的标准分:,35分:条理不清,思路混乱,语言支离破碎或大部 分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。 40分:基本切题,表达思想不清楚连贯性差,有较多严重的语言错误。 45分:基本切题,有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,期中有一些是严重错误。 55分:切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。 60分:切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。 70分 最高分,作文误区,使用太复杂的句型以致出错 太多

3、想象,内容细节过多,文章冗长 书写不规范,高分策略,1.构思简单 少犯错误(考核语言表达能力) 2. 好的开头和结尾开头找好切入点,快速入题,简洁明快结尾不要拖泥带水,适当评论,点睛之笔 3. 用好关联词并列:and, besides, as well as, in addition to, not only but also递进:furthermore, whats more, whats worse转折:but, while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however,合理安排写作的12个句子,第一段 1:分析现象并对现象的影响程度作以简述 2

4、:提出自己观点,注意句子的准确简洁 3:引出下文,留有悬念(模版句) 第二段 1:承上启下,引出后文分析 2:分析原因句1+2+3 (简单6句,符合3句) 第三段 1:总结上文提出观点,加以强调 2:提出设想或建议,提升点睛,常见错误归纳,一、主语错误 1. 主语缺失 1)In our country feels very free. People feel free in our country. 2)In my hometown arent very busy. People in my hometown are very busy.,2. 非名词主语 1)Rich doesnt ensu

5、re a happy life. Being rich doesnt mean a happy life. / Wealth doesnt ensure a happy life. 2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible. Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible. 3. 主谓错位 1)Reading books can acquire knowledge. People can acquire knowledge from books. 2)Now peoples lives cant

6、 leave TV. Now people cant do without TV.,二、谓语错误,1. 重谓语 1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated. In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated. 2)Poverty makes many people cant study abroad. Poverty makes many pe

7、ople unable to study abroad. / Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / Many people cant study abroad because of poverty. 3) There are many people think that. There are many people who think that.或者直接说Many people think that.,

8、2. 非动词谓语 1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it. Some people firmly agree, but others are against it. 2)It is said that the place worthes touring. It is said that the place is worth touring. 3. 主谓不一致 1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English. I have to visit the teacher w

9、ho teaches me College English. 2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data. I use a disk because it holds plenty of data,三、冠词错误,1)In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. In my opinion, the future of the bicycle is very promising. 2) They suggest that we should choose only the good

10、books to read and never touch the bad ones. They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.,四、代词错误,1. 偷梁换柱 1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize. An important thing for the student to remember is

11、that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize. 2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along. / If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone

12、.,2. 指代不明 1)He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed. He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting. / He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed. 2)Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy b

13、urden they have to bear. Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.,五、形容词、副词错误,1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently. What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different. 2)Surprising enoug

14、h, he faces the failure very bravely. Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.,六、分词误用,1) Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem. Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem. 2) Those spirits were just like

15、 an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera. Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.,七、修饰语误置,1) Spoken English is an important part for learning English people. Spoken English is an important part for peopl

16、e learning English. 2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside. To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases .,八、非谓语逻辑关系,1) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, peoples li

17、ving standard has been greatly improved. Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard. 2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once. To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.,九、搭配错误,1) In the past the p

18、rice of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it. In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it. 2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers. Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.,十

19、、残缺句,1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview. Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview. 2) First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you leave on others is important. First you should show good manners, because t

20、he first impression you leave on others is important.,常用连接词,比较对比关系过渡词语 similarly, on the contrary, on the one hand, on the other hand, otherwise, in sharp contrast, but, however, yet, nevertheless 列举关系过渡词语 as a case in point, such as, first of all, to begin with, furthermore, besides, in addition, f

21、or one thing, for another 因果关系过渡词语 because (of), since, for, owing to, thanks to, as a result of, consequently, for the reason that, therefore, hence 让步关系过渡词语 although, even though, in spite of, despite,强调关系过渡词语 surely, obviously, particularly, in deed, needless to say, most important of all 递进关系 in

22、 addition, also, moreover, besides,whats more 时间顺序 immediately, meanwhile, presently, shortly, since, soon, temporarily, while 方式手段 as, as if, the way,by 目的关系 so that, lest,in order that,写作常用句型,1、 the + est + 名词 + (that) + 主语 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read) 例句: Helen is the most beautiful

23、 girl that I have ever seen. 伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 2、 Nothing is + er than to + V 例句: Nothing is more important than to receive education. 有比接受教育更重要的事。 3、 cannot emphasize the importance of too much.(再怎么强调重要性也不为过) 例句: We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。,4、Th

24、ere is no denying that + S + V(不可否认) 例句: There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认 ,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。 5、 It is universally acknowledged that + 句子 (全世界都知道) 例句: It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺 。 6、 There is n

25、o doubt that + 句子 (毫无疑问 ) 例句: There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问我们的教育制度令人不满意。,7、 An advantage of is that + 句子 (优点是) 例句: An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce) any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。 8、 The reason why + 句子 is

26、 that + 句子 (原因是) 例句: The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 9、 So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (如此以致于) 例句: So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。,10、 The + er + S + V, the + er + S + V (愈愈) 例句: The harder

27、you work, the more progress you make. 你愈努力,你愈进步。 The more books we read, the more learned we become. 我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。 11、 By +Ving, can (通过,能够) 例句: By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 通过做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。 12、 enable + 宾语+ to + V (使能够) 例句: Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够

28、感觉轻松。 13、 On no account can we + V (我们绝对不能) 例句: On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。,14、 It is time + S + 过去式 (该是时候了) 例句: It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题 时候了。 15、 It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而

29、知) It is obvious that + 句子 (明显) It is apparent that + 句子 (显然) 例句: It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知,知识在我们 一生中扮演一个重要的角色。 16、 That is the reason why (那就是原因) 例句: Summer is hot. That is the reason why I dont like it. 夏天很热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。,17、 be based on (以为基础) 例句: T

30、he progress of thee society is based on harmony. 社会的进步是以和谐为基础 。 18、 Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力) 例句: We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. 我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境 。 19、 be closely related to (与息息相关) 例句: Taking exercise is closely related to health. 做运动与健康息息相关。 20、 Get into the habit of +

31、Ving = make it a rule to + V (养成习惯) 例句: We should get into the habit of keeping good hours. 我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。,21、 What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么!) 例句: What an important thing it is to keep our promise! How important a thing it is to keep our promise! 遵守诺言是多么重要的事! 22、 Have a great

32、influence on (对有很大影响) 例句: Smoking has a great influence on our health. 抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。 23、 Pose a great threat to (对造成一大威胁) 例句: Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. 污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。 24、 do ones utmost to + V (尽全力去) 例句: We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life. 我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。

33、,经典开头,1. 直接陈述观点 例1: Nowadays people are coming to realize/be aware thatAs far as I am concerned, 例2: People become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of In my opinion/I think,2. 比较法,例1: When it comes to, some people think / believe that Others argue / claim that the opposite is true. The

34、re is probably some truth in both arguments / statements, but I hold / believe that 例2: Nowadays, there is public discussion / controversy on / about the problem / issue of Those who criticize / object toargue thatBut people who advocate / favor, on the other hand, maintain thatI strongly hold that,

35、3.背景法 例1:People used to think / It was once thoughtIn the past / old daysBut things are quite different. Few people now share this view. 例2:As an old words goes that More and more people have the trend to ,but whether the phenomenon of should be further discussed.,4.设问法Should smoking be banned? Answ

36、ers to this question vary greatly. Some people are in favor of the banning of smoking because it is not only a strong offence to people around the smokers, but also something harmful to the smokers themselves. I side with them in this sense.,5.数据法 例1:According to a recent survey, about 85% of the pe

37、ople are in favor of Golden Week and 15% regard Golden Week as a waste of time. 例2: A recent statistics shows that75% of the college students wanted to further their study after graduation.,经典结尾,1. 总结法 题干:Important Qualities of a Good Son or Daughter The above-mentioned are only a few of the qualiti

38、es of a good child, respecting the parents and loving the family, but I believe that they have been and will be of vital importance in a family.,2.重申法题干:Why Do People Work?In brief, I believe that people work mainly because they find their work rewarding and can feel the sense of satisfaction in the

39、ir job. (the beginning of the essay goes like this: It seems that people work for money; however, as a matter of fact, they work mainly because they enjoy working, through which they can get the sense of accomplishment.) ,3. 建议法题干:Physical Exercise is Beneficial to HealthFrom the above data, we can

40、see the importance of physical exercises. Therefore, people form all walks of life should spend more time on taking up physical exercises to keep themselves physically and mentally sound.,4.预测法题干: Computer Translation or Human Being Translation?All in all, no matter how advanced science and technolo

41、gy would be, computers can never take the place of human beings in translation. We human beings have produced and will produce better translations to bridge the different cultures.,5.引言式题干: The Importance of KnowledgeFrancis Bacon, the great philosopher, once remarked, “knowledge is power”. This is

42、still valid(有效的) in modern times. Only by obtaining useful knowledge, can we contribute more to the society.,作文模板,对比选择型 (2011.6 ) 模板1 (第二自然段起:)There is no consensus among the people as to the view of _ (主题). _ Some people hold the idea that _(观 点1). A case in point is that _(支持观点1 的例子). On the other

43、 hand, others may have a quite different view. According to them, _ (观点2) . The most typical example is that _(支持观点2 的例子). Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but the la

44、tter is more convincing.,模板2(模拟2,7),_ (主题) is a common occurrence in our lives. The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person. Some people tend to _ (观点1) because _(支 持观点1的原因). The most typical example is that _ (支持观点1 的例子).However, others argue that _ (观点2). They point out that _ (重申观点

45、2) for the reason that_ (支持观点2的原因). As far as I am concerned, I will choose to _ (你的观点) because this choice fits my personality and my life-long belief.,现象解释型,模板二 (2012.6/2010.6 模拟1,4,5,6)现象 has been brought into focus. Nowadays, _. In addition, _.Many reasons contribute to _. Generally speaking,_.

46、First of all, _. Moreover, _. Therefore, _. As far as I am concerned,_. As we know, _. Furthermore, _. In a word, _.,利弊型,模板一 (模拟3,8)Nowadays many people prefer _ (主题) because it plays a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. On the one hand, _ (主题的优点1).

47、 On the other hand, _ (主题的优点2). But everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that _ (主题的缺 点1). To make matters worse,_ (主题的缺点2). Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects.

48、 Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, _ (主题) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.,多样化句型,1) 定语从句 (限定性和非限定性) There are many reasons why I want to study in your university. It is estimated that tens of billions of yuan is s

49、pent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste. 2) 状语从句 (时间,原因,地点,条件,让步等) When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster (怪物) which will devour him. Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers. 3) 分词短语做定语或状语 Mr. Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to prepare for the CET Band-4. 4) 强调句 It was him who gave up much hope for the future.,

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