1、英语四六级提纲式作文高分写作技巧,四级加分作文词汇,rise sharply,soar,give a lecture,deliver a lecture,badly threat ,pose a grave threat to ,have great interest in ,show keen interest in ,coming,forthcoming,work at,be engaged in,have a difficult choice,in a dilemma,considering,in the light of,make the final decision,have the
2、 final say,ability,competence,famous,distinguished,bad, terrible,miserable,be better than,eclipse,varieties of,a wide array of,arrangement,schedule,attractive,fascinating,great,tremendous,right,accurate,consider,weigh up,share the bill,split the expense,see,witness,sales amount,sales volume,great in
3、crease,dramatic leap,owe to,attribute to,decrease terribly,drop substantially,show,mirror, reflect,about,approximately,dirty,uncivilized,individually,respectively,at the same time,in the meanwhile,cause, lead to,trigger,Brainstormig,1.认真看题，确认所给题目为提纲式（with given outline) 还是开放式(without outline). 2. 根据
4、确定的题目类型，从大脑的资料库中选出适合的模板。 3.对于开放型的题目，要认真的理解（interpretation / comprehension),抓住讨论的核心，不要仅停留在现象表面。,开放型的题目的文章设计：,1.阐释从现象挖掘到的问题核心（或通过现象向我们传达的道理）,2.举例论证：,古今论证,中外论证,正反论证,3.归纳总结 （或对自身的启迪）,提纲式作文题目的文章设计：,A. 指出现象或话题（表述题目）B.举例说明（或产生的意义，影响）（C.启下：问题）,A. 分析原因：1.“ 你”2. “我”3. “它” B. 总结,我的观点 建议 或 另一个原因,承上 解决方法 未来预测,四级
5、作文提高关键,结构完整得8分（套用模板即可）,句式丰富得11分（模板+句式）,用词精巧得14分（模板+句式+词汇）,注意句式的选择：,Keep in mind: 长短句交替使用。 少用 “There be.” 句型：原因 ：A) 太平淡，没有亮点。B）容易出现连动错误Eg: 有几个原因导致（可以解释）这种现象。S: There are several reasons explain this phenomenon. ( )Several reasons explain this phenomenon.Or: There are several reasons explaining this p
6、henomenon.,如何避免？,3. 句式多样性：1）倒装句： so thatOnly 2）一般复合句 / 长句： 关于定语从句,介词短语,副词,状语从句,置于句首,尽量不用一个从句修饰一个单词,用非限定性定语从句来表示结果或意义，使句式更紧凑，句意更丰富,4. 段落之间争取有连接性的词或句；句群与句群之间应有衔接性的词或短语，使文章更紧凑，更有层次感。 建议：1）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 2）to start with, next, in addition, finally 3）first and foremost, besides
7、, last but not (the) least 4）most important of all, moreover, finally1）on the one hand, on the other hand 2）for one thing, for another thing,适用于三点的情况,适用于两点的情况,5. 关于词汇的问题：笼统词汇：good, bad, take makeimportant: essential, indispensable, significantcritical, vital, keymomentous， majorcore( 名）, essence(名），
8、,1）多用具体词汇，少用笼统词汇,2）避免重复使用单一词汇， 可用近义词做替换,3） 学习基本构词法，增加理解力和造词能力,3） 学习基本构词法，增加理解力和造词能力,Eg. white hair ed white-hairedEg. job + hun ting job-huntingenergy + sav ing energy-savingEg. newly + married newly-marriedwell + fed well-fed,A. 形容词 + 名词-ed 形容词,B.名词 + 及物动词ing 形容词,C. 副词+ 动词-ed 形容词,D. 表示 “免于”“防” 的后缀：
9、 free proof,Translation,1）极度贫困的人们 _ 2）令人心碎的消息 _ 3） 新建的数据库 _ 4） 吃得很好的孩子们 _ 5） 成功的太空行走 _ 6）爱好和平的人们 _ 7） 按需提供的奖学金 _ 8） 色盲的人 _,poverty-stricken people,heart-breaking news,newly-built database,well-fed kids,successful spacewalk,peace-loving people,need-based scholarship,color-blind people,Idle young, nee
10、dy old,作文真题、范文及点评Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times.“ You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.,Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillAs we have read fro
11、m above, quitting-smoking seems easy, but in reality it is rarely achieved. There is something provoking and interesting in this paradox, just because sword does not wear the stone as dripping water does.The ability to do something over and over again in a short time may imply its easiness, but in a
12、 long run, a lifetime maybe, things turn out to be quite the opposite. Also, as is often the case, one may have obtained all the tools and opportunities to achieve something, but in the end they still fail due to the will shortage.So how could we avoid the dilemma? Here is the prime condition of suc
13、cess: will and perseverance. Concentrate you energy, thought and mind exclusively on the business in which you are engaged, hang on in there and be patient, for, as Emerson put it, no one can cheat you out of your ultimate success but yourself.,本次四级作文探讨的话题是成功与毅力之间的关系，话题不算新，一般考生对此都比较熟悉，所以对考生来说难度不大。写好
14、这篇作文，需要抓住两点，一是紧跟题目要求，即对上述幽默性的话语做出评论，二是在评论的基础上要亮出自己的观点。范文开头第一句即一针见血地对上述幽默性话语做出总结性概括，即戒烟看似简单实则很难，随后指出该话语本质上是一个悖论，并且以一个“水滴石穿”的俗语来指出困难所在，这句也是本文的一个亮点，体现作者在西方俗语方面丰富的知识储备。第二段作者则进一步深入分析该话语，指出做某事在短期看来很容易，长期来看，恰恰相反，人们做事的结果也因此总是失败，原因则在最后一句点出：缺乏毅力。第三段作者进一步给出了自己的观点，告诉大家如何避免陷入这种两难境地：首要条件即需要坚强的意志和长期的坚持。最后再以艾默生的一句名
15、言 “没人能够骗你远离你最终的成功，除非你自己承认失败”来总结全文，切中主题，铿锵有力。,1.失败是不可避免的 2.为什么说失败是成功之母 3.我的观点,In the long life span, we will definitely experience a wealth of setbacks. Its more than a possibility. Its an inevitability. A great variety of highly uncertain failures and difficulties will be on our life pathHowever, fa
16、ilure breeds success. Success doesnt mean the absence of failures; it means the attainment of ultimate objectives. It means winning the war, not every battle. We can draw lessons and profits from failure. The season of failure is the best time for sowing the seeds of success.When the unanticipated f
17、rustration comes, we must summon up all our courage to conquer it. Furthermore, we can gain from failures. We can steer ourselves through failures and embark on the road to success.,Practice Makes Perfect,There is an old saying that Practice Makes Perfect. The truth is deep and profound. It is corre
18、ct in many cases even today. You cannot expect to be good at anything until you put it into practice. That is to say , the best way to learn to do something is by doing it. That more you learn it, the more you feel it helpful to your study and life. Accordingly, we should apply what we have learned
19、to practice in order to make it perfect.Examples can be easily found to make a case for this proverb. Let us take the study of English for instance. If you are to improve your pronunciation, you must practice every sound repeatedly. If you want to write an excellent composition, you have to practice
20、 writing.Other justifiable examples can also be found to prove this. For example, a skillful tailor is one who has certainly made a variety of clothes, while a competent surgeon is one who has performed a great number of operation.Whatever you do, please remember the saying, practice makes perfect.
21、If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you will definitely benefit a lot from it.,Children are what the Mothers are 阐明此谚语的含义 说明此谚语的原因 谚语给予的启示,Some people say “Children are the mothers are.” Literally it means the mother has great influences on their children. Actually, here the mot
22、hers refer to not only mothers and fathers, but all the people surrounding, who play very important roles in the education of the kids.According to some researches, daily life affects kids enormously. Parents are the best teachers of their children, whose daily behavior and mind has a great effect o
23、n their kids. So it is unsurprising that children often reflect their parents like a mirror, and sometimes people even can tell who their parents are without knowing them before. It is true of teachers, friends, and the people the kids contact in daily life.So it is important for parents to make sur
24、e that people around the kids are the ones of good qualities, such as honesty, responsibility, patience and outstanding abilities.,Some sentences written by students:,1. Chinese always said: “ Nothing difficult in the world, but just have heart men!” 2. Some people think three in the morning and fou
25、r in the afternoon. 3. We are have a father to money make. 4. I decide to go on a diet, so I never eat after 6:00. at last, I lost 3 kilometers. 5. I remind myself that “Smoking no girlfriend”. 6. Life is good, life is bad; Life is lucky, life is unlucky.,7. Today is Saturday, I am happy because I e
26、njoy the nation English text. Though I know this cant succeeds. I am braved enter test, Though cant because true but I at least come true. So dont succeeds I houhui. (?) A black sheep,“段”的写作,大多数文章都是由几个 “段”组成,一个 “段”又是有支持作者中心思想的一组句子组成。以下面这段为例： Owing a car is very expensive; in fact, not only is buying
27、 a car expensive initially, but we must also spend a lot of money on it once we have bought it. First, we have to have the cash to buy the car, or at least to make a down payment. If its a new car, this can be a large amount! Then, after we buy it, we have to pay a car-purchasing tax. Next we,have t
28、o pay a small sum to get a license plate and an inspection sticker. In addition, we have to get accident insurance. Later, in addition to gas, we will have to pay for repairs for our car and for the yearly inspection. Those things will all cost us a lot of money. It is easy to see why it is expensiv
29、e to own a car.,首先，一个段要有主题句/段旨句。,主题句一般放在段首，有时也可在段中或段末。主题句有几个作用： 1. 介绍段落大意: owing a car 2.限制该段主题的讨论范围：the expenses of owing a car. “expensive”这个词控制了段落大意并告诉读者主题的焦点所在 3. 主题句通常会让读者了解段是怎样展开的, 在上面例子中,主题句还有一部分: “in fact, not only is buying a car expensive initially, but we must also spend a lot of money on
30、 it once we have bought it.”由此看出, 作者将讨论买车开始的费用和接下来 的费用。,第二， 一个段有一些起支撑作用的要点，它们都与主题句有关。,为了支撑“owing a car is expensive.”这个主题,作者选了下面4个主要支撑点: 1.We need money to buy the car. 2. We have to pay a car-purchasing tax and pay for a license plate. 3. We must have accident insurance. 4. We must pay for gas and
31、repairs.,第三, 段中的要点必须按逻辑顺序排列。比如，上面那段是按时间顺序排列。,我们买车时，在支付各种费用的步骤中，买车是第一步。为了体现要点的逻辑性和连贯性，常常要使用一向一些逻辑指示词（也称信号词）。这些指示词不仅有助于要点的连贯，还指出各要点间的关系（比如时间顺序，因果顺序等。例如：,First, we have to have the cash to buy the car, or at least to make a down payment. If its a new car, this can be a large amount! Then, after we buy
32、it, we have to pay a car-purchasing tax. Next we have to pay a small sum to get a license plate and an inspection sticker. In addition, we have to get accident insurance. Later, in addition to gas, we will have to pay for repairs for our car and for the yearly inspection.,第四，一个段应有结论句。,比如在刚才的例子中，最后一句
33、以重申主题为结论：It is easy to see why it is expensive to own a car. 当一个段是一篇较长论文的一部分时，其结论句应是下一段的过渡句。,1对立观点式,A点明文章主题 B有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？ 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？ C我的看法。 Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。 However, other people
34、stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。 There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X outweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned positive
35、 effects it might bring about, X also may 一个好处。,A点明文章主题(常用句型）,1. has become a hot topic among people recently. Opinions towards it vary from person to person. 2. There is an argument/ much disagreement /no consensus of opinions among people concerning/ over/ as to/ on 3. Different people have/ hold/
36、 take different views/ perspectives on 4. When asked about different people will offer different answers.,B.具体介绍两种对立观点（常用句型）,1. Some people hold/ suggest/ maintain the opinion that But/ However/ While/ Yet/ Nevertheless, other people hold a different point of view 2. Some people are inclined to thin
37、k that On the contrary/ In contrast, there are still many people who wont agree, and they claim 3. When it comes to , some people think/ believe that while others argue/ claim that the opposite/ reverse is true. 4. Those who criticize/ oppose to/ object to argue that But people who advocate/ favor ,
38、 on the other hand, maintain/ assert that 5. Nowadays, an overwhelming majority of people think that Nevertheless, there are still some people of opinion that .,C.陈述自己的观点 （常用句型）,For my part/ As to me/ As far as Im concerned, Id like to agree to the former/ my favor goes to the first view. I agree to
39、 the latter opinion to some extent. Im in favor of / Im on the side of . There is probably some truth in both arguments/ statements, but I In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we we shoud take into consideration all aspectsof the problems and then make the informed/ reasonable/ sensible
40、decision.,Styles of Living 生活方式1.有些人愿意和父母居住在一起2.有些人想自己独立居住3.我的看法,For: take better care of help enjoyable Against: independent freedom not overprotected,Some people enjoy living together with their parents after they have grown up. They hold the opinion because, living with parents , they can take be
41、tter care of their parents and vice versa. Meanwhile, they can turn to their parents for help if they get into trouble or have some difficulties. To them, life in a big family seems to be more enjoyable than that in a small family.Others, however, prefer to live separately. They cherish the idea to
42、be independent of their parents, seek more freedom and wish to have a place of their own, in which they can do what they like. Besides, they dont want to be overprotected by their parents but long for chance to face the society by themselves.As to me, I like an independent life style in spite of the
43、 fact I love my parents. Different generations have different life styles and values. What one generation likes may not be another generations fondness. Living separately, each generation can enjoy different value. In addition, by leading an independent life, I can train my character and develop my
44、own ability to deal with things encountered in my life.,观点论证类作文,It is generally accepted that _(提出论点). The truth of it is self-evident.Unfortunately, there are so many case around us where_（指出与论点相反的情况). An array of factors contribute to _. First of all, _（原因一）. In addition, _（原因二）. Finally,_（原因三).Ho
45、wever, it is really harmful if _（说明与论点相反的做法）._（例证一) is a case in point_( 进一步阐述例证一）. An example is that _(阐述例证二).From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that _（重申观点）. Therefore, it is advisable that_.（提出建议）,Its Necessary to Establish Psychological Courses for College Stu
46、dents,1. 开设大学生心理课是必要的。 2. 我的看法,More and more educators and common citizens suggest that universities and colleges establish more courses which are help for students psychological health. The truth of it is self-evident.Personally, I fully agree on their proposal for the following reasons. First of a
47、ll, for the college students, the ever-increasing pressure of study at the moment and job-hunting in the future may bring about many psychological problems, for instance, college students may feel anxious, depressed and even despaired at the great gap between the ideal and the reality, so the psycho
48、logical courses provide a door for communication and relaxation. In addition, such courses can offer students some advice on how to regulate feelings and emotions under different situations, which are a good preparation for the future life in the complex social network. Finally, these courses also i
49、ntroduce good habits which are conductive to mental and psychological health. To be mature and qualified citizens in the society, students have to do more than study hard.In a word, I warmly welcome the establishment of psychological courses in universities. In my mind, they are beneficial for students psychological development.,
