1、A Test on Writing,完全符合题目要求，内容完整、丰富、健康。 能够使用多种句型结构和丰富的词汇。 语言通顺，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。 基本没有语言错误。,第一档：（1315分） Excellent,要点,结构,语言,语法,基本符合题目要求，内容基本完整。 语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。 语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。,第二档：（912分） Above average / Pass,与题目有关的内容不多，内容不够完整。 只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写的内容难以理解。 语法结构和词汇错误较多, 表达不够清楚。,第三档：（58
2、分） Fail,现在网购（online shopping）越来越普及，请你谈谈网购的利与弊，阐述你的观点并给出理由。80词左右。 参考词和句子： 利：convenience; lower price; save time 弊：cant see the products; get cheated,陈述事实 利/弊/,Content:Tense:,个人观点及理由,一般现在时,请同学们注意审题，分四段进行（开头、利、弊、 你的观点及理由）.,Outline,1.Introducton (nowadays/these days /at present online shopping more and
3、more popular) 2. Advantages ( on the one hand/ some people think ) 3. Disadvantages (on the other hand / other people think ) 4. Your opinion.,第一篇 At present , online shopping is getting more and more popular. It has both advantages and disadvantages.On the one hand, it really brings us convenience
4、and helps us save a lot of time. Not only can we buy things without going out ,but also buy things at a lower price.On the other hand, online shopping is not good because we cant see the products. Sometimes we may get cheated.In my opinion, I prefer to shop online. Because this kind of shopping is b
5、oth convenient and cheap. Its a good way to save money. And I believe more and more people will choose this way to shop.,第二篇 Nowadays, online shopping has become more and more popular. But every coin has two sides, so does the online shopping .Different people think it differently.Some people enjoy
6、it .First, it is considered to be the most fashionable way of purchasing goods. Second, its not only convenient but also cheap. Whats more, it saves a lot of time. You can buy things by clicking the mouse.However ,other people hold the opposite view. They complain that its difficult to decide which
7、to buy because you cant see the real products. And they are afraid of getting cheated. From my point of view, I prefer online shopping. Not only can I save a lot of time, but also I can save money.,第三篇Nowadays online shopping is getting more and more popular. There are many advantages and disadvanta
8、ges of online shopping.First of all, its convenient to shop on line because you dont need to go out and spend a lot of time searching for things you want , second, you can buy many different kinds of things just in one placeyour home. Theres no need to drive to different places. Whats more, you can
9、buy things at a lower price.However, there are some disadvantages. You cant see the product or touch it by yourself. The worst situation is that you may be cheated by the online store. In this case , youll send your money out without getting the things you booked.In my point of view, I prefer online
10、 shopping .Because I dont want to spend so much time looking around in stores.,第四篇 Nowadays, Internet has become a necessary and universal part of peoples life. As a result , online shopping is getting more and more popular.Firstly, its indisputable that online shopping is very convenient since we c
11、an save our time on traffic. In the meantime , online shopping always provides us a lower price ,because all the prices available are listed, therefore, you can easily find the most suitable price.Nevertheless, online shopping can also bring some problems . For instance , we cant see the products un
12、til we have paid the bill . That means you have no ideas about the quality when you decide to purchase it. Hence, the merchants may be cheating on the quality of their products and deceive consumers because of the lack of supervision.In my point of view, I prefer online shopping ,because not only ca
13、n I save a lot of time ,but also I can surf Internet at the same time.,第五篇In the modern life, more and more people are interested in a new way of shoppingonline shopping.On the one hand ,it is very convenient for people to shop online . People dont have to go out. They can just stay at home and choo
14、se the goods on Internet. Second , the products online are much cheaper. People spend less money and time buying things. On the other hand, online shopping is not safe enough. We cant see the products and we know nothing about the quality of them. Sometimes we even get cheated.I prefer online shoppi
15、ng because it can help me save a lot of time and money. Im sure that online shopping will bring more and more benefits to our daily life.,第六篇In the modern world, online shopping is more and more popular, for it allows people to do their shopping without going out. Many people prefer online shopping
16、to traditional shopping, saying that it is more economical. You can pay less for the products on the internet. Besides the lower prices, there are many advantages of online shopping. For instance, it is not easy to go shopping with the heavy traffic in cities. Its true that shopping over the interne
17、t will save expense, energy and time.There are also some disadvantages, though. Sometimes the advertising can be confusing or misleading. The pictures on the internet look a lot better than the real things. So many people worry about the quality of the things for sale over the Internet. At other tim
18、es, we may get cheated.I speak highly of shopping over the internet. In spite of some faults, online shopping is still popular with costumers. Not only does it bring us such a great convenience, online shopping is a good way to protect the environment. We dont have to drive cars for shopping. Maybe
19、the air will be much fresher as a result of online shopping.,第七篇,We had a discussion about shopping on line at the class meeting yesterday.Some of us think shopping on line is very interesting. You can shop at any time as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day. Besides, it is often cheaper to buy
20、 goods through the Internet.However, others think the on-line shops just show you the pictures of goods so that you cant check the quality. Whats more, you cant enjoy walking around the shops with your friends.In my opininon, everything has two sides. I enjoy this new way of shopping.,第八篇,On the Int
21、ernetThe Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. It brings us great convenience便利 and benefit利益.On the net,we can learn news both at home and abroad国内外 and all kinds of useful information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net schools,
22、 read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages. Besides, we can get lots of fun through the Internet. For example, we can enjoy music and play computer games. On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them.In a word, the Internet has made our life m
23、ore colorful and enjoyable.,第九篇Shopping on the internet,Nowadays with the ever rapid development and increasing popularity of the information technology, shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters. Online shopping has made our daily life more convenient and comfortab
24、le. For example, shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the way between home and store, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work. The internet has shorten the distance between manufacturers and consumers and thus we can even buy goo
25、ds in other countries .On the other hand , lack of the face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. What s more the delivery will increase the risk of items damage.In my opinion, shopping on the internet is a irreversible trend. More and more people will be accustomed to it
26、. It will be much more popular in the near future. And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect.,团购是网络购物的一种新方式，它在年轻人中 间变得越来越流行。Group purchasing is a new way to buy things on the Internet, which is becoming more and more popular among young people.“网络团购”，译为team buying on the Internet, group buying on the Web。例如：尽管网络团购的出现只有两年多时间，却已成为在网民中流行的一种新消费方式。Although it has been only two years since the emergence of team buying on the Internet, it has become a new way of consumption popular among the netizens.,Thanks for listening!,
