1、抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 1 - 爱 商 英语 志 取高分 2019 考研英语 一 大 作文 精讲 讲义 编讲 商志 主讲介绍： 考研英语应试教学法的旗帜性名师，中国考研英语应试教学第一人 ， “考研路上最不可错过的一位英语老师”。 15 年来他独创的“考研英语传奇背词班”和“考研英语传奇作文 一对一（ 班 ） ”， 以及 主讲的考研英语 笑傲江湖 系列课程直取本质 ， 彻底破解，成为了考研界无人能够企及的巅峰之作 ， 工业化规模批量制造高分，帮助超过 600 万的考研英语学渣变考霸，使众多考生
2、夺取考研英语高分； 对学生用心负责，授课风趣幽默，富有激情，饱含心灵鸡汤，内容通俗易懂，直击考试本质，梳理考点知识点，专治英语学习过程中的各种疑难杂症，被广大学生尊称为“用生命在讲课的商欧巴”； 主编的考研英语 一 抢分系列辅导图书 考研英语蓝皮书 ，被学生推崇为取得“英语高分的标配”。校园里多年来一直都流传着这样一句话：考研英语不选择商欧巴，就是考研路上最大的冒险！ 拨开考研迷雾 打破英语瓶颈 揭示致命误区 铺就高分坦途 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 2 - Section One 总论 I 全国
3、硕士研究生入学统一考试英语考试大纲规定： 考生应能写不同类型的应用文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等，还应能写一般描写性、叙述性和说明或议论性的文章。短文写作时，考生应能： 1）做到语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当； 2）遵循文章的特定文体格式； 3）合理组织文章结构，使其内容统一、连贯； 4）根据写作目的和特定读者，恰当选用语域。 写作 （ 30分/25分 ） 节 为考生提供的信息 题型 记分 A 规定情景 应用文（约 100词） 10 B 主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等 短文写作（ 160-200词） 20/15 II 评分原则和方法：虽然 A、 B两节的考查要点有所不同，但
4、对考生写作能力的基本要求是相同的，所以评分标准对两节都适用。但根据两节不同的考查要点，评分时会有不同的侧重点。 评分标准： 第五档 A 节 （ 9-10 分） B 节 （ 英语一17-20 分 ； 英语二 13-15分 ） 很好地完成了试题规定的任务。 包含所有内容要点； 使用丰富的语法结构和词汇； 语法错误极少； 有效地采用了多种衔接手段，语言自然流畅，文字连贯，层次清晰； 格式与语域恰当贴切，标点准确并有变化。 对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。 不同的侧重点： A节： 1、 应用文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖和内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和语域的恰当。 2、 对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求
5、将根据具体试题做调整。 3、 允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词，但使用提示语中出现过才词组或句子将被扣分。 B 节： 1、大作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。 2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内有 1 3 分的调节分。 3、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，视其对实际交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 4、如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志
6、 2018年 7月 编讲 - 3 - 注： 文章长度不符合要求的，酌情扣分。 A 节作文的字数要求是 100 词左右 (标点符号不计算在内 )。 B 节作文的字数要求是 160 200 词 (标点符号不计算在内 )。 III考场上写作思路和方法 1. 英汉思维习惯的转化 2. 格式和语域 3. 语法结构和词汇 ： 无话可说；错误表达； 词汇和 语法结构的普通与优秀； 准确化 和 多样化 （ 准确度、广度、难度、亮度 ） 审题以确定内容切题并覆盖所有考点 句间 衔接手法的运用 （ 文字连贯性和层次清晰 性） 重要提醒 全部重点 ， 扫 这里 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一
7、大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 4 - Section Two 大 作文 精研精练 I. 历年 英语一大 作文 汇总 2018 年 Directions： Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer neatly on the
8、 ANSWER SHEET.(20 points) 2017 年 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should 1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. ( 20 points) 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 5
9、 - 2016 年 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should 1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) 2015 年 Directions: Write an essay of 160-20
10、0 words based on the following picture. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) 手机时代的聚会 2014 年 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following
11、drawing. In your essay, you should 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 6 - 1) describe the drawing briefly 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET (20 points) 相携 2013 年 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200
12、words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET (20 points) 2012 年 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In
13、your essay, you should 1） describe the drawing briefly. 2） explain its intended meaning, and 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 7 - 3） give your comments, You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （ 20 points） 2011 年 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on t
14、he following drawing .In your essay， you should 1） describe the drawing briefly 2） explain its intended meaning and 3） give your comments You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.（ 20points） 旅 程 之 “ 余 ” 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 8 - 2010年 Directions: Write an ess
15、ay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. 2009 年 Directions: Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the
16、drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. 网络的“近”与“远” 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 9 - 2008 年 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly
17、, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. 2007 年 Directions: Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should: 1) describe the drawing briefly. 2) Explain its intended meaning, and then 3) Support your view with an example / examples.
18、抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 10 - 2006 年 Directions: Study the following photos carefully and write an essay of 160200 words in which you should 1. describe the photos briefly, 2. interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3. give your point of view. 200
19、5 年 Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it. 2004 年 Directions: 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 11 - Study the following dr
20、awing carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) describe the drawing, 2) interpret its meaning, and 3) support your view with examples. 2003 年 Directions: Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should 1. describe the set of drawings, interpret its mea
21、ning, and 2) point out its implications in our life. 温室花朵经不起风雨 2002 年 Directions: Study the following picture carefully and write an essay entitled “Cultures National and International”. In the essay you should 1) describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and 2) give your comment on the phenom
22、enon. 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 12 - An American Girl in Traditional Chinese Costume(服装 ) 2001 年 Directions: Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it. There has been a discussion rece
23、ntly on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to 1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below, 2) give a specific example, and 3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. 2000年 Directions: A. Study the following two pictures carefully and w
24、rite an essay of at least 150 words. B. Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. C. Your essay should meet the requirements below: 1. Describe the pictures 2. Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the pictures 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 13 - 3. Suggest c
25、ounter-measures. A brief History of World Commercial Fishing The ups and downs of World Commercial Fishing II. 历年英语一大作文优质范文示例 范文 1 2014 年 How warm the given drawing is! What is obviously featured in this image is that there are two people, mother and her daughter, holding each others hand tightly. I
26、n the left/first picture, a middle-aged mother was leading his baby daughter, with a smile on her face, while in the right one, the already grown-up daughter is happily supporting her aged mother thirty years later. Below the pictures, there is a topic which says, “ Being supportive“. Indeed, what t
27、he illustrator virtually attempts to mirror by this instructive cartoon is by no means simple: Love between parents and children is probably one of the most touching and noblest emotions among human beings. It goes far beyond any reasonable dispute that the illustration is indicative of a rather per
28、vasive social phenomenon - When we were young, our parents offered us all their love and helped us cope with everything. When they get old, we must in return provide them all 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 14 - support necessary and spend much time accompanying them.
29、And this great kinship and considerate caring between generations should be remembered and relayed to our descendants by everyone around us. A convincing case in point occurring to me goes to the epic story of the Chinese girl-warrior, Mulan, who disguised herself as a man to take the place of her e
30、lderly father in the army. A significant number of stories like this tell us that caring for the aged parents is not only Chinese traditional virtue, but our fundamental responsibility as well. In fact, we are indebted to our parents for birth and growth. Without their love and care, how could we ha
31、ve grown up healthily and successfully? Unfortunately, the previous couple of years has witnessed the growing incidence of abusing or neglecting of the old. And reports of such happenings can be readily found throughout the mass media recently. Much can be done. The mass media and schools of all lev
32、els, fore and most, could serve as a counterbalance, doing its utmost to awaken the general public to the significance of respecting and loving our aging parents. Meanwhile, it is the responsibility of the government to curb the behavior of elders abuse and elders neglect by punishing those who fail
33、 to love their parents adequately. We are supposed to keep deep in mind that we should manage to, just as the song sings, “spare some time, take the children, and come back home often”. Only if we can make our aging parents feel happy can our home be happy, healthy and harmonious. 范文 2 What a famili
34、ar yet thought-provoking scene the above image is! Illustrated in it is that, sitting on the boat and enjoying their sightseeing, a couple of youngsters are throwing waste into the water casually, which, regrettably, is littered by rubbish, such as fish bones, food wrappings, food leftovers, cans, b
35、ottles, plastic containers, watermelon peels and so on. As a result, the beautiful scenery has been totally changed into a sea of floating wastes by travelers uncivilized behavior. The caption below this cartoon reads “The remains of a journey”. Who is to blame for the upsetting scene? It should be
36、obvious to everyone around us that tourists, entirely indifferent to the environment that we are living in, too often hurt the tourist attractions. The implied meaning of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of environmental protection and public manners. With the development of the tourism
37、industry, people in mounting numbers go sightseeing home and abroad, tending to attach great importance to their personal interests, ignoring the uncivilized behaviors of themselves. Many scenic spots other than the one depicted in this cartoon including the Great Wall, Tiananmen Square, and landsca
38、pes of Sanya, Guilin are now facing a real environment crisis. The inappropriate public manners such as littering and spitting have given rise to severe environmental consequences so that environmental protection should be put on the agenda immediately. 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王
39、商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 15 - To serve as responsible stewards of the planet, everyone around us should be made aware that immediate actions should be taken to address this problem For one thing, laws and regulations concerning environment pollution should be set up to end or at least significantly reduce s
40、uch upsetting practices. Meanwhile, a nationwide educational campaign concerning environment protection should be launched among the general public, especially the young, to raise the awareness of environment protection. Above all, a series of environmental protection programs seeking to improve peo
41、ples sense of environmental protection should be launched. Wed better “take nothing away but the photos; leave nothing here but the footsteps”. If everyone makes a small effort, the appearance of scenic spots will be beautiful forever. 范文 3 Attitude Determines Altitude How instructive and impressive
42、 the above image is! Indeed, few things could be so symbolic and philosophic as this picture. Portrayed in it are two men, who respond to the same scene in entirely different ways: When their bottle is overturned, one expresses his disappointment and discouragement, while the other is hurry to raise
43、 the bottle up, with a smile on his face and optimism in his mind. What on earth does the illustration virtually intend to mirror? That this picture does carry rather important intended meanings goes far beyond any reasonable dispute. Studying it further, we may learn that simple as it may seem at f
44、irst glance, what the illustrator really aims to convey is apparently far-reaching different people may come up with different outlooks on life. When facing with stresses, setbacks or feelings of inadequacy, some tend to be optimistic, but others might be pessimistic. Looking around, we may find tha
45、t similar happenings are too numerous to list. A convincing illustration occurring to me goes to an acquaintance of mine, who is always confident and optimistic in school and in life, even when there is little hope. When he failed in the Students Union election last semester, he, instead of being up
46、set, viewed it as an opportunity to exercise his ability and felt no sorry about it at all. “ However much importance we attach to peoples lack of optimism , it is far from enough, ” notes Dr. Gao Lei, a pioneer of behavioral studies of Tsinghua University. It is the responsibility of the government
47、, mass media and schools of all levels to take the lead to promote optimism，awakening people to the significance of being optimistic. Meanwhile, we should strive to help people develop a positive outlook on life and the world. I am strongly convinced that only when we are equipped with optimism and confidence can we achieve more rapid progress and even greater success in problem-solving and life success. 我 为同学们指导考研并 解答 同学们的各种困惑和疑问的 仅有 方式 : 新浪微博：商志考研英语 最后 几个 月，一定要给力！ 抢分 app考研英语 应试教学法 系列 之 英语 一 大 作文 精讲 配套 讲义 应试之王 商志 2018年 7月 编讲 - 16 -
