1、考研英语作文钟方源60 分钟做完写作（20 分钟小作文，40 分钟大作文）大作文第一段的展开：第一句：图画描述句：As is shown above,in the middle of the picture stands a man(主系表倒装表系主) ，rushing(非谓语动词) to final，which is defined another new start.(独立主格结构 )As is shown above,in the middle of the picture walks a man,trying to attain the goal of innovation and d
2、evelopment with the help of the Internet and its related technologies.Step1：完全倒装（中心事物的位置）Step2:非谓；非限（中心事物的状态）Step3：独立主格P.S.：，with the caption reading that：，with a line going like this:补充：The implications of this picture are explicit（明确的） and clear that: anyone who aspires to embrace great achievemen
3、t must be the one who dares to start from small steps.The portrayal ,symbolic and metaphoric,unfold a scene to us,in which a man who wears a master gown and look knowledgeable and capable is applying for a job.第二句：图画影响句This picture has sparked a heated discussion on Wechat friend circle，the most att
4、ractive and influential social network form these day in China.This has sparked controversy（争论） on Chinas social media, with some saying that the online payment system had become a place to find “hookers.”（后面接人们对图片的观点）第三句：图画意义句(深刻)The picture,at the first glimpse,seem to be simple,but only a penetra
5、ting sight can capture its essence.If posted on the Internet,this cartoon will definitely draw much attention and arouse abundant imagination for its revealing of a trending topic.（这句相当于是把第二和第三句合并减少字数的写法，字数多的时候用）第二段的展开：第一句：提出论点(主题重要 /有害)重要主题：1. The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with
6、+重要主题 when it comes to the cultivation of individual characteristics.（个人）2. The picture tells us that 重要主题 remains to be an integral（不可或缺） part in this ever papid（快速） changing modern society.（社会）3.The presence of this improvement will make our social fabric stronger,our families healthier and safer,
7、and our people more prosperous.有害主题：1. The picture does reveal that 有害主题 is not only harmful, but also damaging for the personal growth.（个人）2. The picture does reveal that 有害主题 is in large measure（很大程度上） detrimental（有害的） not only to the personal life,but to the further development of the whole socie
8、ty.补充：To sum up,it does exert a negative effect on our society if we still overvalue the importance of degress.To conclude,it is highly unfeasible to put all eggs just in one backet. 第二句：加强论点（附加句）1， 重要主题：In no country other than China,is has been said,is this phenomenon more obvious.有害主题：In no count
9、ry other than China,is has been said,is this problem more urgent and serious.The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to some policy being carried out,bringing some problems at the same time,with the above one being the foremost（首要的）.加强论点时需要用到的连接词（在其它句也可以用得上）：1.To be sure，2.
10、That is to say，3.In other words，4.Put it another way,5.Obviously,6.Specifically speaking,7.Beyond any dispute,8.Doubeless,9.Undeniably,10.进一步地讲 To put it strong,11.Whats more,12.Furthermore,13.By doing so,14.on the one hand,on the other hand,15.additionally,16,Form my personal perspective,17.persona
11、lly speaking,18.不难想象 It is not hard to imagine,19.毫不夸张地讲 It would not be a stretch to say that 第三句：公众态度（社会话题都适合，而个人话题有时适合）重要主题：1. The public does attach due（适当的） attention to importance of the 重要主题有害主题2. The public fails to attach due attention to the bad effects brought by 有害主题第四句：加强公众态度（附加句）People
12、 form all over the world,governments and international organizations stress the fundamental role of 重要主题。People form all over the world,governments and international organizations fail to notice the damaging consequences of 有害主题。Individuals,enterprises,organizations and even the whole society stress
13、 the fundamental role of 重要主题。Individuals,enterprises,organizations and even the whole society fail to notice the damaging consequences of 有害主题。第五句：段落展开（为一个句群）第一种展开法：平行展开法物质回报句子：1.（主题） can offer people with not only delicious food but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable dwelling and
14、 handsome automobiles.2.Individuals and organizations can make money,take profits and even obtain wealth by doing(主题)。3.The industrious（勤劳） and insightful （有见地的）people will never fail to benefit from doing(主题).4.It can improve ones living standards and make an easy and conforable life.5.It can bring
15、 people fresh air,clean water,bright sunshine ,clean food and comfortable dwelling.时间角度 saves time/takes up little time/occupies little time.句子（节约时间）(主题，e.g.Confidence) saves people a great deal of time by eliminating hours spent on hesitation, so they would be able to concentrate more time and ener
16、gy on their meaningful work.（浪费时间）As is well known,the days of youth should not be idled away and time should be cherished,but(主题,e.g.star worship) wastes hours,lavishes days and even squanders（浪费） years,which leads us to say it kills and even murders youngsters prime time.效率角度（主题,e.g.Star worship/A
17、ddiction to the internet） makes people weary（疲惫） of other important things,discourages him to learn more.方便和快捷角度(主题,e.g.MSN)can shrink the distance between cities and even continents,smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people.身心健康句子：(主题)can relieve not noly pres
18、sure but also anxiety and such problem as depression,stress,isolation and solitude（孤独）.生活娱乐角度It provides a variety of leisure activities that enhance your energy,enthusiasm and charm.It adds a special means of entertainment to your seemingly tedious,routine and monotonous life.有助成长和成功It can promote
19、communication between people,rid of barriers between people and bridge gaps between people.People who treat others with love,sincerity,sympathy,enthusiasm,hospitality or generosity always win respect from others.文化价值观角度：The trend will exert more positive influences on the sustainable development of
20、Chinese culture.The increasing cultural exchanges integration bring with it far greater rewards than culture itself.文化交流的好处：It would promote mutual understanding,enhance friendly ties,and shorten/shrink gap between people.文化交流语料：And it is clear that aside from politics and business,it is particularl
21、y the cultural dialog that bering people together and which serves as a basis for a better mutual understanding.We can see the promising progress on the cultural communication.Today,home-grown Wechat has a translator that easily permits those with no shared language to talk with each other.This only
22、 to show,nevertheless,that so much work remains to be done.社会宏观角度It means that people can have equal opportunity to college education,employments,self realizetion,and pursuit of material wealth.Our dreams are the internal powerful engine and the compass that may enable us to bring up our potential g
23、lowing capacity and to guide ourselves into the future.创新的例子:Apple,a great company creating an industial legend with its series of category-killer(爆款，即畅销产品),give us a clear message that innovation powers the engine that generates value.To put it the other way around(换句话说),Apple would gradully fade o
24、ut(消亡) and into nowhere（出局） with the absence of creation in designs.传统文化(传统节日):The picture does demonstrate that,traditional Chinese festivals,the invaluable cultural heritage embodying our shared belief,spirit and history,have been increasingly neglected by us.It is mournful(遗憾) that such time-hono
25、red holidays are playing an ever insignificant role in our lives and gradually declining into the background.Traditions like them are powerful cohesive forces bonding us together,giving us clues(痕迹) of our ancestorsstruggles and achievements,and infusing sense of pride into us as the direct lineage
26、of great heros.Therefore,it is crucial that resources and efforts be devoted to promote these traditions.Much can be done.Governmental agencies,Non-governmental organizations(NGOs) and the common sector could join hands together by organizing arrays of activities to revitalize these cultural heritag
27、es.In this way,all people can be actively involved in this campaign and truly realize that traditions are the blood and spirit of a nation.个人成长：Finally,a yourgster who aspires to embrace the glorious future must commit the time and energy without any hesitation.（第三段结尾用）He must be a person who is pos
28、itive and brave enough to make short term sacrfice for long term success.The future has arrived.（句号）It commences now.幸福语料：Over the last 3 decades , we have enjoyed unparalleled economic growth. We have better homes, cars, holidays, jobs, education and above all health. According to standard economic
29、 theory, this should have made us happier. But surveys show otherwise. More people suffer from depression, and crime, another indicator of dissatisfaction is also much higher. We all want a society in which people are as happy as possible and in which each persons happiness counts equally. It seems
30、likely that the extra comforts we now enjoy have increased our happiness somewhat, but that deteri orating relationships have made us less happy. If we want a happier society, we should focus most on the experiences which people value for their intrinsic worth and not because other people have them,
31、 above all, on relationships in the family, at work and in the community. We live in an age of unprecedented individualism. The highest obligation many people feel is to make the most of themselves, to realize their potential. This is a terrifying and lonely objective. To become happier, we have to
32、change our inner attitudes as much as our outward circumstances. We should have a p olicy for promoting a healthier philosophy of life for youngsters and for helping them to distinguish between superficial pleasures and real happiness. It would inspire us in our daily lives to take more pleasure in
33、the happiness of others, and to promote it. In this way we might all become less self-centered and happier.大学教育语料：This picture does demonstrate a common scene in todays collegeeducation and illustrate some problems facing universities.Some scholars have already noticed that current college education
34、 focuses a lot on the academic study but fail to offer adequate exploration on the creativity and moral education,components critical to studentsfuture lives and careers.And,one survey even suggests that most college students are coping with a lot of tedious paper work,with few breaks,and feeling th
35、e strain,with no any substantial advance to speak of.Thats a reality that horrifies some educators.Many people have voiced their concerns about this issue.The clear message is that we should take more efforts and make some concrete initiatives to safeguard any possible adverse consequences.Fortunate
36、ly,we have heard that some effective measures have been taken by authorities and a trend of focusing more one the quality of students is gradually emerging nationwide.There are good reasons to expect that a more advisable and healthy circumstance will be created on our campuses.读书的意义语料：Indeed the si
37、gnificance of good reading cannot be overvalued. Through books the whole history and the whole world are ours for asking. The possibilities of our experiences in life are almost unlimited. The beauty of nature, the treasures of art, the marvels of the world and the triumphs of science are all open t
38、o the wonder and enjoyment of those who read. A man who reads lives many lives. A man who doesnt , walks this earth with a blindfold.确实，读书的意义再怎么高估都不过分。通过书籍整个历史，整个世界都是我们的了。我们有可能经历各种生活。 （我们经历各种生活的可能性是无穷尽的。 ）自然界的各种美丽，艺术的各种珍宝，世界的各种奇观，科学的各种成就，都让阅读者赞叹不已，享受不尽。一个读书的人能经历各种人生。一个不读书的人只是蒙着眼在这世上走了一遭。公共场所的礼貌语料：A
39、friendly nod or a wave of acknowledgement in response to an act of politeness helps to create an atmosphere of goodwill and tolerance so necessary in modern traffic conditions. But such acknowledgements of politeness are all too rare today.对别人客气的礼让，友好的点一下头或者会意的挥一下手，就可以形成一种友善的气氛。而这种气氛在交通拥挤的今天是非常必要的。但
40、现在连这一点客气的表示也很难见到了。The public morals are declining and the revival of them requires sincere commitment to these good deeds. No thinking man would refuse to admit the fact that it is the public morals and individuals good deeds ,such as helping the elderly cross the road that boost the sound evolution
41、 of a society. And the flourishing and prevailing trend of traditional and modern virtues is indispensable for the harmonious society construction. But the problems mentioned above perfectly exemplifies that many of us have not realize the essence of doing good deeds and it would bring some damaging
42、 consequences to harm the restoration of public morality.第二种展开法：科学论据法1.According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Sciences(CAS),According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of social Sciences(CASS),According to a survey conducted by the Organization for Economic Co-operation and Dev
43、elopment(OECD)，结论：Those who worship stars are more likely to squander time,compared with those who do not.Those who are of cooperation are more likely to establish the career,compared with those who are not.2.China Daily interviewed four people from four prefessionsa surgeon(外科医生),a white collar wor
44、ker,a carpenter(木匠 ) and a farmer.the survey discovers that all of them are of the idea that+主题重要或有害。第三种展开法：举例法（尽量只举例不展开）1. Nowadays,our society has been filled with a variety of example of sth,with Sb being the foremost（主要的） .2. Numerous cases exist to illustrate this point.Take sb.for example,but
45、for 主题，sb could not have done sth,let alone doing sth.3. Take sb for example, without 主题，how can sb do sth? Without 主题，how can sb do sth?Withou 主题,how can sb do sth?人物词积累：Shakespeare， Barack Obama, George Washington, Bill Gates ,Newton,Beethoven, ,Michelangelo补充：Take Bill Gates, the head of the Micr
46、osoft, for example. He does not have a MBA degree which is widely acknowledged as a vital certificate in ones commercial lifes success. Sam Walton,founder of the Wal-Mart Stroes Inc.,does not hold the MBA degree too.However, he has been well regarded as the “godfather” in the business world.Instead,
47、 we are treated to fine hypocritical spectacles, which now more than ever seem in ample supply: the critic of American materialism with a Southampton summer home; the publisher of radical books who takes his meals in three-star restaurants; the journalist advocating participatory democracy in all ph
48、ases of life, whose own children are enrolled in private schools.最后一句（总结句，可以不要）虚拟语气结尾：Were there no something, never would we do something.Were the situation to continue as it is, we would pay the high price.第三段的展开：（评论后举例也可以举例后评论）可能用到的表达：Form my personal perspective,much more attention should be att
49、ached by the public to the cultivation of critical thinking ability.Much Can be done.initially 首先furthermore 再者additionally 此外finally 最后正面话题：第一句：取其精华It is imperative（必要） that the essence（本质） be absorbed（吸收） and the drawbacks（缺点） be neglected（忽略）,during this process, especially in the times of knowledge explosion,when the news, facts, opinions even rumors have been bombarding us from every corner of the world.第二句：全面考虑In view of the importance and the complexity（复杂） of such an phenomenon,we must treat it socially, economically and culturally.第三句：只管面对In a sen
