1、该套资料由学友视频整理 QQ：565847609 TL：13518161623 期待广大考生咨询推荐：09 年新东方考研数学英语政治视频课程 提供试看文件 提供试用下载网盘 1考研基础班网络课堂写作讲义北京新东方学校 王江涛第一节 考研写作总论一、课程安排：1、考研写作总论：评卷实例、复习计划、学习方法、大纲解读2、应用文：书信类、告示类3、段落写作：真题透视、框架结构、启承转合4、两图写作（00、03、06、07）5、一图写作（98、01、02、04、05）6、图表作文二、评卷实例：2001 年真题Directions:Among all the worthy feelings of man
2、kind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone had his/her own understanding of it.There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,2) give a specific example, and3) give your
3、 suggestion as to the best way to show love.1、20 分范文：Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest. It is of the utmost importance to the human beings. Everybody not only needs love, but also should give love.该套资料由学友视频整理 QQ：565847609 TL：13518161623 期待广大考生咨询推荐：09 年新东方考研数学英语政治
4、视频课程 提供试看文件 提供试用下载网盘 2As is described in the picture, “love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places.” This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light than ordinary people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life and progress. Maybe even a dim light can give
5、 them much hope for a better life and progress. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to step out of their difficulties.For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his life. Or when a little girl in a poor rural are
6、a drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish her schooling and change her life, you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.So to sum up, we should offer our help to all who are in need. We expect to ge
7、t love from others and we also give love to others so when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, dont hesitate to give your love to him. I believe then the relationship between people will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in.2、18 分范文It i
8、s generally believed that love is a hot topic which is most talked about. This is true not only in China but also in other countries. We live in different countries, speak different languages, but love is something common to us all. But how to show love may be different with different people in diff
9、erent countries. This is something we should give more thought to.As is shown in the picture, love is like a lamp which shines brightest in dark places. This tells us a simple truth: Love is like a lamp. It is most valuable when it is most needed. For example, once I saw a foreign lady get lost in t
10、he street. She could not speak Chinese and nobody seemed to be able to help her. Though my English is not very good and I am a shy person, I thought she needed help very much. I asked her what she wanted. She told me she lost her way, so I showed her the way to her hotel. It was a small thing but sh
11、e thanked me very much because my help was needed very much. My help was like a lamp in dark places.I think we all should be like a lamp in a dark place, showing our love, giving our help to others, even to strangers. In this way, we can make this world a harmonious and peaceful world.三、复习计划：1、考前复习：
12、1）攻克词汇：2）精研真题：词汇、句子结构、选项设置、英译汉、背诵3）适当模考：2、写作练习：3、时间分配：1）14：0014：15 写作 A 节2）14：1514：50 写作 B 节3）14：5016：00 阅读 A 节4）16：0016：20 完型填空5）16：2016：40 阅读 B 节6）16：4017：00 阅读 C 节该套资料由学友视频整理 QQ：565847609 TL：13518161623 期待广大考生咨询推荐：09 年新东方考研数学英语政治视频课程 提供试看文件 提供试用下载网盘 3第二节 应用文一、学习方法：（一） 提高实力：1、 十遍精读：1） 精彩词汇2） 精彩词组3
13、） 精彩句型4） 句子结构：简单句（主干修饰成分） 、从句、时态、冠词、主谓一致5） 段落结构：总分总，主题句论证（小结）6） 关联词：小作文 35 个，大作文 57 个7） 同义替换：词汇句型8） 代词替换：it, that, they9） 精彩观点：10） 原因建议：2、 背诵：滚瓜烂熟、脱口而出、多多益善3、 默写：发现写作弱点4、 中译英：提高写作实力5、 写作：模仿（二） 掌握技巧：万能框架二、大纲解读：（一）评价目标：考生应能写不同类型的应用文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等，还应能写一般描述性、叙述性和说明或议论性的文章。短文写作时，考生应能：1） 做到语法、拼写、标点
14、正确，用词恰当；2） 遵循文章的特定文体格式；3） 合理组织文章结构，使其内容统一、连贯；4） 根据写作目的和特定读者，恰当使用语域。（二）考试内容：该部分由 A、B 两节组成，考查考生的书面表达能力。总分 30 分。A 节：考生根据所给情景写出一篇约 100 词（标点符号不计算在内）的应用性短文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等。考生在答题卡 2 上作答。满分 10 分。B 节：要求考生根据提示信息写出一篇 160200 词的短文（标点符号不计算在内） 。提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等。考生在答题卡 2 上作答。满分 20 分。（三）评分原则和方法：1、虽然 A
15、、B 两节的考查要点有所不同，但对考生写作能力的基本要求是相同的，所以一般评分标准对两节都适用。但根据两节的不同考查要点，评分是会有不同的侧重点。A 节该套资料由学友视频整理 QQ：565847609 TL：13518161623 期待广大考生咨询推荐：09 年新东方考研数学英语政治视频课程 提供试看文件 提供试用下载网盘 4应用文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖和内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和语域（指在书面和口语表达中根据不同的交际对象，所采用的话语方式，即正式、一般、非正式的话语）的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词，但使用提示语中
16、出现过的词组或句子将被扣分。B 节B 节作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的连贯组织性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内有 13 分的调节分。3、A 节作文的字数要求是 100 词左右。B 节作文的字数要求是 160200 词。文章长度不符合要求的，酌情扣分。4、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5、如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。三、书信格式：（一）称呼1、 写给机构1） 不认识负责人：Dear Sir or
17、Madam, Dear Sir/Madam, To whom it may concern,2） 认识负责人：Dear Mr./Ms. President/Professor/Manager/Editor, Dear President (Michael) Wang,2、 写给个人1） 关系不亲密：Dear Mr./Ms. President/Professor/Manager/Editor, Dear President (Michael) Wang,2） 关系亲密：Dear Michael,（二）正文：3 段、7 句、100120 词、35 关联词、35 从句1、第一段：2 句1）自我介绍
18、（1）I am a staff member from your company/corporation.（2）I am a freshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduate from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of Beijing University.2）写作目的：I am writing the letter in purpose of ordering some books/resigning from my current post/position
19、.2、第二段：3 句1）改写提纲一：1 句2）改写提纲二：1 句3）改写提纲三：1 句3、第三段1）表示感谢（私人建议信除外）（1） My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. （2） Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you. （3） I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered m
20、e.该套资料由学友视频整理 QQ：565847609 TL：13518161623 期待广大考生咨询推荐：09 年新东方考研数学英语政治视频课程 提供试看文件 提供试用下载网盘 52）期待回信（1）I am looking forward to your reply/hearing from you soon. （2）I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. （3）Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.（三）落款Yo
21、urs sincerely,Li Ming四、书信类应用文：1、大纲样题：订购信Directions:You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books. Write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for:1) detailed information about the books you want,2) methods of payment,3) time and way of delivery.Dear S
22、ir or Madam,As I am planning to take the National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates(NETEM), I have decided to place an order of some NETEM books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books. Firstly, please give me particular accounts
23、 as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books. Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by EMS to the headquarters of Beijing New Oriental School by September 1, 2007. I h
24、ave arranged to pay for the service.I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests. I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Ming第三节 段落写作一、书信类应用文2、2005 真题：辞职信道歉信Directions: Two months ago, you got a job as an editor for the magazine Fashion 2） inter
25、pret the social phenomenon reflected by them, 3） give your point of view.You should write 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)该套资料由学友视频整理 QQ：565847609 TL：13518161623 期待广大考生咨询推荐：09 年新东方考研数学英语政治视频课程 提供试看文件 提供试用下载网盘 15图一：把崇拜写在脸上。 图二：花 300 元做个“小贝“ 头。注：Beckham（贝克汉姆）：英国足球明星。17、2007：Directio
26、ns:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) support your view with an example/examples.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 四、考研论说文框架结构：3 段、12 句、160200 词、57
27、 关联词、57 从句第四节 两图写作一、考研论说文框架结构：（一） 第一段：图画描述，3 句1、 总体描述：人物/动物/事物动作/服装环境/ 表情，1 句2、 挖掘细节词、串连成句：12 句3、 文字说明/象征寓意：1 句（二） 第二段：意义阐释，5 句1、 主题句：象征寓意，1 句2、 论证：3 句1） 基础一般的同学：（1） 讲原因：（2） 讲故事：（3） 联系现实：图画作文创作原则（以小见大，把握象征寓意，个体想为群体，具体想为抽象）2） 基础较好的同学：该套资料由学友视频整理 QQ：565847609 TL：13518161623 期待广大考生咨询推荐：09 年新东方考研数学英语政治视
28、频课程 提供试看文件 提供试用下载网盘 16（1） 五大角度：背景、事实、反方观点、原因、后果（2） 六种手段：因果、分类、定义解释、统计事实、举例、正反论证3、 小结：1 句（三） 第三段：建议措施，4 句1、 结论句：1 句2、 针对双方提建议：2 句3、 包装结尾、展望未来：1 句二、启承转合：（一） 启：启动观点、开篇点题（二） 承：观点承接、正面论证1、 First(ly), In the first place, First and foremost, Above all, On the one hand, For one thing,2、 Second(ly), In the s
29、econd place, Besides, In addition, What is more, Furthermore, Moreover, On the other hand, For another3、 Third(ly), (The) Last but not (the) least, More importantly, Even worse,（三） 转：观点转折、反面论证Conversely, Nevertheless, Unfortunately, Whereas, Yet, Instead, In/By comparison/contrast, On the contrary（四
30、） 合：文章结尾、合并归纳As a result/consequence, Consequently, Accordingly, Thus, Hence, Generally/Briefly speaking, 三、两图写作（一）2003 范文：The set of drawings above vividly depicts the destiny of a flower in different circumstances. As is shown in the first cartoon, the flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse
31、which shelters it from the threatening lightening and storm. With proper temperature, moisture and fertilizer, the flower is growing in full bloom. On the contrary, when removed from the greenhouse and exposed to the driving rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with the petals cast about on the
32、grounds.To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that the flower growing in the green house cannot withstand the test of the storm, yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously. The delicate flower is naturally associated with young people, to be specific,
33、 the only children in our current society; the greenhouse epitomizes parents doting care and abundant material supplies that can shield the children from the storms, or the harsh reality. Once the young people begin to seek independence and accept challenges from the real world, they are found too s
34、poiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties.Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these thought-provoking drawings. On the one hand, we can frequently use them to enlighten the youth to be more independent in life. On the other hand, parents should be sensib
35、le enough to give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems. Only by undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity can young people cultivate strong personality and ability, and only in this way can they become winners in this competitive world. （二）2006 高分作文：1、18 分作文样例一该套资料由
36、学友视频整理 QQ：565847609 TL：13518161623 期待广大考生咨询推荐：09 年新东方考研数学英语政治视频课程 提供试看文件 提供试用下载网盘 17The photos vividly depict that nowadays many people, especially, young fellows are tracing such fashion. The first one signed the name of Beckham on his left face, while the second one asked the hairdresser to copy t
37、he hair style of Beckham with about 300 yuan. Both of them are typical fans of the well-known British football playerBeckham.This kind of social phenomenon is not entirely a coincidence. There are reasons accounting for this fashion. Firstly, with the rapid development of society, some people feel d
38、ull and desperate about the reality, so they desire to find some famous people as their idols. In the way, they feel satisfied with their life and have a goal to achieve. Secondly, just opposite to the above, others are just fashion tracers. They barely want to show that they are keeping step with t
39、he fashion. Thirdly, some people even dont have any special purpose but to do it as others. In their deep heart, they dont treat it as fashion but as fun.Frankly speaking, this social phenomenon is very dangerous to the whole society. Some young men spend most of their time decorating themselves as
40、their idols. As a result, they dont have enough time to study or work, then they are always left behind. Moreover, it is harmful to the establishment of a harmonious society.To draw a conclusion, we dont deny that people should have their idols to admire, but in a sensible way. They can learn from w
41、hat they have achieved and try to behave that way. And also parents should give proper advice to their children to form a proper outlook of the world.第五节 一图写作一、两图写作：（二）2006 高分作文：2、18 分作文样例二More and more young people are increasingly influenced by foreign culture. As can be clearly seen from the abov
42、e picture, a young gentleman puts “Beckham” on his face. Another decently dressed young gentleman is willing to pay 300 yuan to have his hair made in his favorite style. It is clear that the picture implies a common phenomenon in our society today: more and more people, especially the young, are end
43、lessly chasing popular things, disregarding the cost that they must pay.There are at least three good reasons for this phenomenon. In the first place, the spreading of foreign culture in our country in recent years may be the main reason. Secondly, many young people in our modern society have an ope
44、n mind. Consequently, they are willing to accept new things. Last but not least, a lot of people have become richer and richer. As a result, they can pay for the expense to do that kind of things. There may be other reasons, but it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly
45、acceptable.As far as I am concerned, the spreading of foreign culture in our society is not a bad thing. But as a popular saying goes, every thing has two sides. This phenomenon is without exception. My suggestion as to the best way to cope with the problem is as follows. On the one hand, people sho
46、uld take a proper attitude toward this phenomenon. On the other hand, our society is expected to appeal to the general public to resist its bad effect. I am sure that my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.该套资料由学友视频整理 QQ：565847609 TL：13518161623 期待广大考生咨询推荐：09 年新东方考研数学英语政治视频课程 提供试看文件 提供试用下载网盘 18二
47、、英语全攻略：（一）培养兴趣：1、听说方面：1）英文歌曲：2）原版影视：2、读写方面：1）女生：Romeo and Juliet, Jean Eyre, Love Story2）男生：Bible, Ancient Greek and Roman Mythology, The Old Man and the Sea（二）掌握方法：“精”1、听力：听写2、口语：跟读模仿3、阅读：背诵4、写作：中译英三、一图写作（一）1998 高分作文：1、14 分作文样例一：The past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that a variety of p
48、romises have been arising from all walks of life. Regretably, quite a lot of promises are sheer nonsense, just as the hen in the given cartoon commits herself to lay eggs which are round without any angles and corners and have shells, egg whites and yolks.Odds and funny as they sound, such false pro
49、mises can be seen and heard everywhere in our country. Administration departments assure to perform their tasks effectively and fairly without taking any bribes; manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality; commercial enterprises swear to provide genuine commodities and polite and enthusiastic services. Can you find anything new and substantial other than their obligations, duties and jobs in these so called promises? I guess your answer will be negative. As a matter of fact, their intention to make such commitments
