1、1如何写好“读写任务”第二部分写作（学案）I. 如何写出吸引改卷老师眼球的好句？1. I followed your advice. I went to the supermarket. There I found four chairs. They were in good shape. They were reasonably priced.使用分词和定语从句合并上述句子：_ your advice, I went to the supermarket _.2. The cat walked slowly through the grass. The cat was watching th
2、e mouse the whole time.使用现在分词合并：_, the cat walked slowly through the grass. 3. The gold was hidden under the ground. It was safe for many years.使用过去分词合并：_, the gold was safe for many years.练习：1.Tom was waiting in the queue for half an hour. He suddenly realized that he had left his wallet at home._2
3、.The two students were lost in the mountains for a week. They were finally saved by the local police. _4. 使用定语从句或形容词修饰名词或代词。1）The house has been turned into an apartment. I was born in the house._2）You will have a room in my house. The room is very comfortable. In this room, you will find many thing
4、s. The things are quite necessary for daily life.方法一(使用 2 个定语从句)：You will have a room in my house, _and _ you can find many things that are necessary for daily life.方法二：（用形容词代替其中一个定语从句，让句子简练）You will have a _ room in my house, _you can find all the necessary things for daily life.5. 使用介词短语合并（with +O
5、; with+O+OC）The fire is burning, so I feel warm. _, I feel warm.I lost my bike, so I had to walk home. _, I had to walk home.2II. 如何写漂亮读写任务第二部分写作？牢记：好的段落是 well-connected, clear, economical, tight。1. 平时训练要求1) 书写卷面训练：卷面书写给评卷老师的第一印象非常重要，也是作文能拿到高分的第一道门槛，所谓 “印象分” 。在高考作文备考过程中，要特别注意书写训练,切忌书写不清、涂涂抹抹。具体要求如下：
6、（1）用纯黑色或颜色均匀的签字笔或钢笔；（2）贴底线书写，保持字母大小基本一致，字母主体部分占行线约一半大小为宜；（3）保持单词间距基本一致，一般为两个字母的位置；（4）错词只用一条横线或斜线划掉，尽量不重复涂写同一字母或单词；（5）每段前空格约 4 个字母的位置。 （3 个或 5 个字母）2） 避开抄袭陷阱：高水平的“抄袭”其实不是抄袭而是改写，是利用原文的信息内容、词汇和句子结构，通过词汇替换和句型转换等手段进行改写。这也正是“读写任务”这种题型所要考查考生是否掌握的写作技能。3） 整篇作文是一个整体，内容要合理安排，语义要连贯，各段之间过渡、衔接要自然，避免对内容要点一问一答式的写作。2
7、.各段之间过渡、衔接常用句型：What a touching story, which reminds me of多么感人的故事呀，该故事使我想起例如：Sams experience reminds me of my similar experience happening four years ago when I was admitted to senior high school. Sam 的经历让我想起了四年前我上高中时发生的类似经历。I was deeply touched when I read your letter. Its the first time that I have
8、 realized your deepest love for me. 读完您的信后，我很感动，我第一次感受到你对我深深的爱。But in the meantime, I am looking forward to my new life in the college.但同时，我又期盼着大学生活。However, life is like a box of chocolate and youll never know whats inside until you open it. 然而人生就像一盒巧克力，直到你打开时，才知道里面是什么口味。I will be absolutely able t
9、o adjust the differences in a short time. 我绝对能够很快适应两者的不同。解题指导：近 6 年的读写任务第二部分写作都是三个内容要点，三个要点内在的逻辑顺序已经安排好，无须考生重新组织。而且，写作内容要点明确，有时候相当于三个问答题，把三个问题回答好就完成任务了。每一段写一个内容要点，这样让评卷老师清清楚楚地知道你已经完成了三个写作内容任务。 每一段都由一个主题句（a topic sentence）和 2 句或3 句拓展句组成。 33.主题句的 6 种常用写法: 1.直接回答要点 。写作要点是询问考生的看法时，对提问直接作出回答。假如你处在那些动物的处境
10、,你会有什么反应？ （2009 广东高考读写任务要点 2）If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing me.练习：你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？（2008 年广东高考读写任务要点 2）_常用词语：In my opinion /in my eyes / as for me / as far as I am concerned/ It is my personal belief that2.表明立场。 明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对。你认为是否应该禁止游
11、客和动物拍照。 (2009 年广东高考读写任务要点 3) I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned.练习：你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。 (2010 年广东高考读写任务要点 1) _表示支持或赞同的常用句型：I agree with the statement that ； I am in favor of ； I appreciate that.; I approve of the idea that; I believe that ; I agree with what the writer said/says.表
12、示反对或不赞同的句型：I disagree with the idea that; I am opposed to the idea that ; I disapprove of the idea that; In some way, I agree with but; What the writer said sounds reasonable, but I 3.重述要点。 不直接回答写作要点，而是翻译要点作为段落主题句。中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。.（2008 年广东高考读写任务要点 3） As we all know, college is widely differe
13、nt from middle school. 想家给学习和生活带来的影响。 （2011 年广东高考读写任务要点 2）Owing to feeling homesick too much, I couldnt get accustomed to the school life and couldnt pay attention to my study. 练习：在生活中谅解他人有何重要意义。_常用词语：play an important role/part in在中 扮演重要角色; do harm to = be harmful to 对有害；Its beneficial / vital/ nec
14、essary for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事很有帮助/重要/ 必要have a bad/good influence/effect = affect negatively/positively 影响不好/好; have a close relation /connection with.= be associated with closely= be connected withclosely 和有密切联系set a wonderful example to sb. 给某人树立一个好榜样cultivated my interest in培养我对的兴趣；show more
15、 and more enthusiasm in对表现出越来越多的兴趣= show a keen interest in4.总述原因 你支持青少年的秘密应该与父母分享的理由是什么？I insist that teenagers secrets should be shared with their parents for reasons as follows. 4练习：使我们生活发生变化有哪些原因？ _常用句型：There are several reasons that contribute to的原因有多种= Reasons for this are varied.The reasons f
16、or this are obvious的原因显而易见 for reasons as follows的原因如下The reason why is that5.引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等如何才能获得快乐？We should find some effective ways to make ourselves happy.你（或你朋友）是如何应对日常生活中的冲突的？（2013 佛山一模）It is very important not to respond to anger with anger in our daily life.你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。 （2010 年广东高考读写任务
17、要点 3）In my opinion, schools and parents are supposed to educate their kids through teaching them to study for their family and their motherland rather than giving them money.练习：说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施。 _常用句型：We are supposed to take some effective measures.We should try our best to overcome/conquer the diffi
18、culties.We are inquired to solve the problems that we are faced with.It is necessary that proper actions/ steps should be taken to end the phenomenon.6.引出经历。 用来引出记叙文的具体事例。简述你经历过的一次困难或考验。It reminds me of my own experience when 讲述一次你（或你朋友）发生冲突的时间、地点和起因（2013 佛山一模）I had once 曾经 experienced an embarrassi
19、ng conflict with my classmate last year. It was raining heavily outside and the classroom was a bit crowded. 常用句型：It reminds me of the time whenIt reminds me of an accident which happened several days ago.After reading the story above, I recall the experience of my friend whoThe story above reminds
20、me of one of my experiencesWhat a touching story, which reminds me ofSams experience reminds me of my similar experience happening four years ago when I was admitted to senior high school.4.拓展句的四种常用写法：1）列举：12 点如：列举学校里的浪费现象We could see such kind of small things around us every day. (主题句)5要点：教室时；吃饭时；吃
21、完时For example, when we leave the classroom, we just ignore the lights and computers and leave them on; when we have dinners, we often use the throwaway chopsticks and plastic bags; when we finish some drinks and food, we throw the leftover very casually. (拓展句) 如：作为中学生，我们应该如何配合老师批改作业？（8 校联考卷）Whats mo
22、re, teachers check over our assignments every day, which is a good bridge for us to communicate with each other.（主题句）要点：在错误中学习；得到鼓励从而取得进步；要尊重老师的劳动成果。In this case we can learn from our errors, get encouragement and make progress in our study. So we will respect our teachers hard work, no matter wheth
23、er they use red pens or not.2). 递进：not only.but also.moreover 如：就“互联网给人们生活带来的影响”发表自己的观点Surfing the Internet brings people more benefits. (主题句)要点：提供最新信息；改变交流方式；网上购物，方便快捷。The Internet not only provides people with amounts of latest information, but also changes the way people communicate with each oth
24、er. Besides, the Internet enables people to go shopping at home easily and conveniently. (拓展句)3). 对比：for one thing 正面原因； for another 反面原因 如：你是否支持该校长暂停表现不好的学生上学。I believe the headmaster is right to suspend those misbehaving students class. (主题句)要点：一方面，他们待在教室会；另一方面，不待在教室会For one thing, if these misbeh
25、aving students are allowed to stay in class, they will negatively affect other students learning. For another, if they are removed from the class, not only the others can learn in peace, but they also can have time to learn their lessons and then behave better when they return.(拓展句 )如：简述老师用红笔批改学生作业的
26、利与弊；（八校联考卷）Generally speaking, most teachers mark corrections or grade students papers in red pens. （主题句）要点：有人认为用红笔会；但是，也有人认为用红笔可以Some people think it may make students anxious thus blaming their teachers. However some people think it can attract students attention. 4. 类似故事或经历故事归纳如：就“如何看待外貌” 的主题发表看法
27、What makes a person beautiful is his attractive personality rather than his physical appearance.(主题句)要点：举例：某某同学In one of my previous classes, there was a beautiful girl named Lucy who had almost a perfect face and slim figure. She treated her beauty in a matter-of-fact way and she was nice to everyo
28、ne. Her personality was mostly accepted by others and it made her an outstanding beauty. (拓展句 )要写好举例论证文章的例子，需注意两点： 抓住要素，突出要素61.引述事例时要突出能够证明中心论点的部位,可用一定笔墨进行渲染(如: She treated her beauty in a matter-of-fact wayHer personality was mostly accepted by others)2. 除必要的交代外，删去与论证无关或关系不大的内容.确定事例的建议步骤：1、确定例子前先确定
29、论点；2、抓住论点的要素；3、寻找与论点有共同要素的例子；4、确定例子。下面有三篇均以海伦.凯勒故事为中心的例子，如果你要写一篇论点为“Efforts are the most important thing to help you achieve success.”的文章，你会选择哪个例子呢？为什么？1） The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind before she learned to speak. She had little real underst
30、anding of the world around her. Fortunately, she had a good teacher and her teacher helped her speak. At last, she could speak normally and gave her help to people who liked her. 2） The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind before she learned to speak.
31、She had little real understanding of the world around her. Nevertheless, she made every effort to learn to speak and write. With a great deal of persistence, she finally became a writer and lecturer, who also became an inspiration to all.3) The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen K
32、eller was born deaf and blind before she learned to speak. She had little real understanding of the world around her, certainly nothing to give her self-confidence. Nevertheless, she believed she could conquer all the difficulties. With this faith, she finally became a writer and lecturer, also an i
33、nspiration to all.小试牛刀：2013 年广东省高考英语读写任务第二节 读写任务（共 1 小题；满分 25 分）阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant ,not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend, painting t
34、he house or digging the garden.What is the reason ,then？In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the job they are doing. It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which i
35、s just a small part of a much larger one, such as attaching a door handle to a car. But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say: I have made something!Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way soc
36、iety is organized, no matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs.写作内容1.以约 30 个词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约 120 个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：（1）描述清洁工工作的艰辛；（2）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？（3）你对平凡工作者的看法。7写作要求1.作文中
37、可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。解题步骤：1.看清文章结构：_2.在原文中划出每段的主题句：定摘要的时态、人称、技巧：删细节、删例子、避免重复；使用概括性名词、短语、短小简单的句子来压缩长句甚至段落。3.写出摘要要点（3 个，一段一个要点）_4.用“ 主题句+支撑句 ”的模版写出 30 词的摘要。_5.以约 120 个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：1) 描述清洁工工作的艰辛；重述要点 。不直接回答写作要点，而是翻译要点作为段落主题句。主题句_拓展句
38、：列举：12 点: 清洁工起早摸黑，要在严寒酷暑中工作，但是收入不高。_（2）假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何？ 1.直接回答要点 作为主题句：主题句：_拓展句：列举：12 点: 工作环境也会随之变差，导致人们无法高效工作。如果没有清洁工，环境会变得糟糕。街道将会到处是垃圾，臭气冲天，污水横流。在这种环境里，人们的人们的工作环境也会随之变差，导致人们无法高效工作。_（3）你对平凡工作者的看法。 2.表明立场 作为主题句。主题句： _拓展句：列举：12 点: 社会需要各种职业，离不开普通劳动者。我们应该尊重他们的平8凡工作，提高他们的待遇。_请工整地把上面的内容抄写在这里，成为读写任务的所有写作内容：25 分_
