1、1Unit 2 Healthy eating短文改错中的“不一致”错误纠错技巧方法指导在短文改错中,“不一致”的错误主要包括以下几种:1)主谓不一致:采用“双盯策略”,盯着主语看谓语,盯着谓语看主语,然后根据语境决定修改主语还是谓语。2)时态不一致:根据上下文或时间状语确定时态的选择。3)语态不一致:根据谓语动词的特点和前后句式的使用特点确定语态的选择。4)名词的单复数不一致:根据上下文和名词本身的特点确定名词的单复数形式。5)代词指代不一致:根据上下文或主语的特点确定代词的使用。6)搭配不一致:根据固定搭配或并列结构等确定。典例引领 (2016 四川)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文
2、,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。2It is Mothers Day today. Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to d
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