1、高考英语读后续写专题（九）一：典题技法指导Danny stood with his mother at the kitchen window of their tiny house. Mom put her arm around Danny. “Just look at that view,” she said. “Can you believe we live here? I think its the most beautiful place on earth.” Mom was right; it looked like a postcard out there, with the pa
2、lm threes swaying in the breeze, the bushes covered with pink and white flowers, and the ocean a sparkling silver strip in the distance. Danny couldnt stand looking at it. All he wanted was to be back in New York City, looking out his old apartment window at the jumble of dirty buildings, the smoke
3、thick in the air, and his friends. Mom thought that coming here to Hawaii would give Danny a fresh start-just she and Danny. She wanted to get him away from danger and trouble.After a while, Mom kissed Danny good-bye after straightening her white nurses cap and went off to work. Slowly Danny stood u
4、p, making a plan in his mind for his journey back to New York City. But then he heard a noise in his backyard. There was a crash, a strange squeal, and an earsplitting scream.Danny flung open the back door. Moms new pot of flowers lay shattered on the ground. “Was someone in trouble? Or were robbers
5、 planning to break in?” thought Danny. He picked up a broom, ready to strike. He didnt see anyone, but then he caught sight of a small dark head poking out from behind one of the thick bushes. Danny put down the broom and walked over. It was a little kid, maybe three years old. “What the hack was he
6、 doing here all by himself? Was he hurt?” thought Danny. “Ahhhhhhhhhh!” the kid screamed. “Hey!” Danny said. The kid turned around. He was grinning like a monkey standing on a mountain of bananas. And he was clutching a little animal of some kind. “Puppy!” the kid said. Danny studied the animal. It
7、was very small and black except for one white ear. He didnt want to break the kids heart, but he was pretty sure it wasnt a puppy. It looked more like a rat.“My puppy!” the kid said, hugging the poor ugly critter so tight Danny was sure it would pop like a balloon. Danny looked around. The kid was t
8、oo young to be wandering around on his own. “Who are you?” Danny said, bending down to look the kid in the eye. “Aki!” he said. “Who you?” “Im Danny,” said Danny. “Danny see my puppy?” Aki held out his poor squished pet like he wanted Danny to give it a big smooch.And then the kids eyes got huge. He
9、 pointed to something over Dannys shoulder. “Monster!” he said. Danny spun around and there, moving toward them, was the ugliest animal Danny had ever seen in his life. It was black, the size of a huge dog, with wiry bristles, a pigs snout, and two huge spiked tusks sprouting right from its face lik
10、e swords. It did look like a monster.The animal grunted and snorted as it stared at Aki with beady black eyes.Prepare to die! it seemed to be saying. And it seemed the monster was ready to charge at them.Paragraph 1：“Put down the puppy!” Danny said, suddenly understanding Paragraph 2:“Aki want puppy
11、,” he said, throwing his arms around Danny and burying his face in Dannys chest. 文章主题：人与动物“野兽口中智救小男孩”本文大意：妈妈和Danny是刚刚从New York City搬过来夏威夷，想要开始新生活的一家人，而Danny其实不大想来，心里想着原本的城市和朋友，很是孤单，还想回去。有一天，妈妈出去上班了，Danny一个人在家的时候，听到院子里有奇怪的声音，发现院子里有个名叫Aki的小男孩，抱着一个小动物，说是自己的“小狗狗”，但其实不是小狗，而此时，有一只丑陋无比的野兽出现了，看似对两个孩子很不友好。Da
12、nny机智地保护了Aki并获得了友谊。学生收获： 本文有大量关于“险境脱身”、“野兽攻击”及体现小朋友神态的词汇和句式，另外，还有部分关于景色的地道描写，可以丰富人与动物之间续写题材的写作内容。本文中核心、生疏词汇及拓展:1. sway (v.) to move slowly from side to side 摇摆翻译：树叶在温柔的微风中轻轻飘动。_2. poke (v.)to (cause something to) appear or stretch out from behind or through something else 探出来翻译：她轻轻地敲了敲我的门，把脑袋探了进来。_3
13、. clutch (v.) a. to hold tightly (in the hands) (用手)紧紧抓住翻译：她手中正紧紧地抓着一个娃娃。_b. (with “at”) (with at) to try to take hold of 猛地想要抓住翻译：我紧紧地抓住一块漂浮的木板，以免淹死。_4. fling (v.)a. to rush 猛冲翻译：他一下把门冲开了。_b. to throw with great force用力扔翻译：他把一块砖头扔破了玻璃。_5. charge (v.) to rush or to move quickly (towards) 冲翻译：这只老虎似乎准
14、备好冲向他了。_6. nudge (v.) to push something or someone gently, especially to push someone with your elbow (= the middle part of your arm where it bends) to attract the persons attention （用手肘等身体部位）轻推翻译：孩子们正一起咯咯地笑着，用手肘轻轻推搡着。_原文自我检测：环境描写篇：1. 这里的风景看上去就像是明信片一样，棕榈树在微风中轻轻摇曳，灌木丛上裹着粉色和白色的花朵，远处的海面上泛着银色带子般的光芒。_2.
15、他听到后院有噪音。有什么东西打碎的声音，紧接着是一阵奇怪的尖叫，还有一阵震耳欲聋的惊叫声。_3. 妈妈的新花盆碎了一地。_Danny的动作篇：1. Danny猛地把门打开。_2. 他拿起一把扫帚，准备随时出击。_萌趣Aki篇：1. 他看到一个小小的脑袋从一棵茂密的小树后探了出来。_2. 他手上抓着一只小动物。_3. 他咧着嘴笑着，像是一只小猴子站在一大堆香蕉上那样开心。_4. “我的小狗狗！”这个孩子说着，紧紧地把这个可怜又有点丑丑的小家伙抱住，以至于Danny觉得它随时会像气球一样被挤爆。_5. Aki把他那被挤扁的小宠物伸手递过来，想要给Danny亲亲抱抱。_见到猛兽惊奇篇：1. 然后，这
16、个孩子的眼睛睁得很大。他用手指着Danny身后说：“有野兽！”Danny转过身去，然后他看到一只有生以来见到的最丑陋的动物正慢慢朝他们过来。_猛兽描写篇：1. 它黑黑的，身材和大狗差不多，身上长了又短又硬的毛，鼻子和猪一样，还有一对像剑一样锋利的尖尖的獠牙从嘴巴两边长出来。_2. 这个动物用它又黑又圆的小眼睛盯着Aki，一边用鼻子发出咕噜声。_3. 这只猛兽似乎准备冲向他们俩了。_范文自我检测：Paragraph 1：1. Danny撬开Aki的手臂，将小幼崽宝宝夺了出来。_2. 这妈妈冲向它，用自己的鼻子轻推着自己的宝宝。_3. 突然，这只猛兽的獠牙对准了Aki的肚子。_4. Danny好不容易一把抓住了Aki的裤裆部分，及时将其托举起来。_5. 这只野兽的一颗獠牙扯破了Danny的一条裤腿。_6. 幸运的是，它没有咬到他的肉。_7. 举着Aki，Danny穿过后院，跑进了房子里，猛地关上了门。_Paragraph 2：1. “Aki要小狗狗嘛！” 他说着，一把抱住Danny，把脸埋进Danny的胸口。_2. Aki问道，声音比巧克力甜甜圈还甜。_3. 他抬头凝视着Danny，露出天使般的微笑，将Danny的心都融化了。_
