1、Unit 5 Nelson Mandelaa modern hero,内容索引,典题示例,技法点拨,Period Four WritingDescription of a famous person,技法点拨,写作指导,本单元的写作任务是人物描写。人物描写主要是介绍某人的基本信息及其事迹。一般是介绍人物的童年、少年、青年、中年及老年的成长经历(包括生活、工作和学习)，末尾一般总述人物的功绩成败，也可以在记叙成长经历的同时加入一些议论。 人物描写的写作步骤： 1.总体介绍； 2.列举主要经历； 3.总结全文。,1.He was from a poor peasants family. 2.He
2、is about 1.72 metres in height. 3.By the age of 14，he had taught himself advanced mathematics. 4.She is already in her fifties，but she looks younger for her age. 5.He is short and thin with a pair of thick glasses. 6.She is tall and slim with big dark eyes and black hair. 7.He is a worthy person for
3、 us to learn from. 8.He devoted all his life to education. 9.He is loved and respected by us all. 10.She will always be remembered as a great woman.,常用表达,典题示例,你校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为每一位名人画像配上英语介绍，以便让同学们有更多的机会学习英语。请你根据以下信息写一篇100词左右介绍郎平的短文。 1.郎平，1960年12月10日出生于天津市。1973年，13岁的郎平开始练习打排球； 2.1978年，因在全国排球比赛中表现突出，进入
4、国家队； 3.从1980年起，郎平获得很多荣誉及奖励； 4.退役后，郎平成为排球教练。2016年，郎平带领中国女排，时隔12年，在里约奥运会(the Rio Olympic Games)上获得金牌； 5.郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练员均夺取奥运会冠军的排球运动员。,审题谋篇,写作要求是写一篇人物介绍。写作时应注意下面三点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇人物介绍。写作时注意人物介绍的写作特点。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是介绍人物，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。,_ _ _ _ _ _,要点词句,联想词汇 1.在岁时 2.加入队伍 3.因为 4.获奖 5.中
5、国女排 6.参加,at the age of.,join the team,because of/as a result of/thanks to,win the award,the Chinese Women Volleyball team,take part in,句式升级 1.郎平，出生于1960年12月10日，是著名的排球教练。Lang Ping and she is a famous volleyball coach.(and连接的并列句)Lang Ping， ，is a famous volleyball coach. (who引导的定语从句),was born on Dec.10
6、th,1960,who was born on Dec.10th,1960,2.她在十三岁时开始练习打排球。She began to play volleyball .(at the age of.)She began to play volleyball .(when引导的状语从句),at the age of 13,when she was at the age of 13,连句成篇,Lang Ping，who was born on Dec.10th,1960，is a famous volleyball coach and we all admire her very much. Sh
7、e began to play volleyball at the age of 13.She joined the national team because of her excellent performance in the national volleyball game. She was so hardworking that she won a lot of awards. After she retired from the volleyball team，she became a volleyball coach. In 2016 she took the Chinese Women Volleyball team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games and won the gold medal. She is the first Chinese volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach.,
