1、最美榆林作文篇一：家乡榆林美家乡榆林美我爱的家乡 榆林。榆林呀，可是陕北的一座古老而美丽的城市。在家乡里有许多的小吃和矿物质，而且风景也不错，镇北台上散发着古老的气息。在上面仿佛有战士在站岗，红石峡里包含着文化气息。说起矿物质也不能说少，例如：最北边上的神木、府谷，有中国最大的露天煤田；米脂发现了储量最大的盐矿，吴堡的天然气储量也是相当可观的；靖边储存的石油闻名全国，别的地方都从这里输取天然气。吃的东西我们也不会差，在佳县生产红枣又大又红，咬上一口，又脆又甜，养人的豆腐，甘甜的桃花水，绥德油旋和子洲果馅的味道名不虚传。我爱我的家乡，我相信我的家乡会越来越美！篇二：榆林雅思 8 分万能作文智课网
2、 IELTS 备考资料榆林雅思 8 分万能作文众所周知，雅思写作范文是烤鸭们进行雅思备考必备的雅思材料，但真正通过雅思写作范文模板来提高的烤鸭却是少之又少，究其根本就是大家没有对如何应用雅思写作范文掌握相应的备考使用方法，下面智课教育小编就为大家带来一篇榆林雅思 8 分万能作文。雅思 8 分范文Topic：Water resources around the world are falling deficient. Analyze the possible reasons and provide your suggestions.范文：Access to water is vital to e
3、very living creature on the planet. Despite the fact that approximately two thirds of the earth surface is covered with all forms of water bodies, countries worldwide are faced with different levels of water shortages. Some reasons can be cited to explain the emergence of this problem.前两句简要介绍文章写作背景，
4、第三句既承接前两句又为下面正文做了铺垫，引出下文。作文首段一般需要简要介绍写作背景和简单描述个人立场。A trigger for water crisis is peoples lack of knowledge of the value of the water. Given the ready availability of water in many countries, people tend to believe that the reserve of water in the world is infinite. Notwithstanding theincreased expen
5、diture on water supply, water is perceived as a cheap commodity by many families. Many people see water a perpetual resource. For this reason, the unbridled use of water is commonplace, accelerating the exhaustion of this valuable resource.第一句话是段落的中心句，后文为展开论述支持论点。第二三四句话讲的是人类对水资源重要性的认识是如何的缺乏，最后一句话是前面
6、论述的逻辑推论，句与句之间逻辑性强, 连接顺畅。Rapid population growth is another force contributing to the water crisis. Not only does it reduce the amount of water available for manufacture, farming and households, but also has a profound effect on the sustainability of aquatic ecosystems. Massive urban and industrial g
7、rowth fuels unprecedented demands, often at the expense of aquatic ecosystems. Many water resources are not replenished before being re-used and depleted.第一句话是段落的中心句。后面的分句逐层论述为什么人口增长助长了水资源危机。使用了 not only but also 的句式，巧妙地连接两个原因。Human-induced pollution is worthy of concern as well, a factor regarded b
8、y many as the root cause of the rapid loss of drinkable water. The untreated discharge of various pollutants such as heavy metals, organic toxins, oils and solids in water bodies is believed to have severe impacts. Industrialization, meanwhile, results in abnormal climate andbiological destruction.
9、While some areas have become barren, other areas are hit by floods. Floods ravage everything, including reservoirs, dams and cannel. The water supply problem will intensify.同样第一句话是段落的中心句。第二句和第三句例举了人为原因引起的污染，四五句给出了这些不合理人类行为的后果。最后一句表明问题趋势。这三段是文章的主体部分，在一般情况下，原因通常可以归分成三段。一般来说最重要的，最有说服力的原因应该放在第一段，第二段第三段的
10、重要性依次降低。这样可以使文章具有逻辑性和层次性。每段的段首用一句话简明的概括本段的中心论点。接着对每段的主体句进行支持性论述，分别使用了推理和例证的方法。这样不仅段落之间逻辑严密，段落内部也逻辑明朗，使文章整体富有说服力。文章注重了长短句的变换，富有节奏感。表示同一个意思时作者也变换了不同的表达方式以增加文采：如表达的原因时使用了“a trigger for., another force contributing to, worthy of concern as well”。As noted above, the steady loss of water is attributable t
11、o inappropriate usage, population growth and pollution. In order to tackle the above-mentioned problems, one can adopts various approaches, besides the existing strategies, such as restoration of ecosystems, rainwater harvest. New technologies can help ease water shortages, by tackling pollution and
12、 making used water recyclable. In agriculture, water use can be made far more efficient by introducing new farming techniques (e.g. drip irrigation). Drought-resistant plants can help cut the amount of water needed.按照逻辑顺序，分析原因之后应该提出对策，文章最后一部分即对策部分。作者用 “As noted above”承上启下，接下来用举例的方式给出对策。总评：本文逻辑清晰，使用总
13、分结构，这种结构是比较容易借鉴的。虽然使用的都是常见词汇，没有华丽的高深词汇，但是通过变换句式和表达方法使文章很富有文采，这也是可以借鉴的。大家只要在平时的雅思写作练习中有意识的注意这两点是可以掌握的。解析：雅思写作题目：Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success.Others believe there are other factors.Discuss the two sides and give your opinion.雅思写作范文：The pursuit of
14、happiness has long been the dream of generations of human beings. They have always been puzzled Get Word (puzzled); by the essence of happiness. What is happiness? Is it closely related to ones economic success? Will ones financial success lead to happiness directly? Personally Get Word (Personally)
15、, I dont agree that ones economic success is the only prerequisite of ones happiness in life.对幸福的追求一直都是人类世世代代的梦想，尽管人类一直困惑于幸福的真谛。幸福是什么?幸福和经济的成功有密切联系吗?个人经济上的成功能够直接带来幸福吗?就个人而言，我不认为经济上的成功是人类幸福的唯一前提。Happiness may fall into different categories Get Word (categories);. An old saying goes like this: “One ma
16、ns meat is another mans poison”. Happiness may mean being a successful and respected leader of a company, or a stable and comfortable job in a large international company, or a big flat downtown, a fantastic set of furniture, etc. However, happiness can also be a harmonious and peaceful family, or a
17、 hospitable and considerate friend, or just a smile, a gesture, a hint. In fact, happiness may be composed of anything you could ever think of. At least, we may have two types of happiness: wvspiritualGetWord(hospitable and considerate friend, or just a smile, a gesture, a hint. In fact, happiness m
18、ay be composed of anything you could ever think of. At least, we may have two types of happiness:wvspiritual); happiness and materialistic happiness.幸福有很多种。俗话说得好， “一个人的美食可能是另一个人的毒药” 。幸福可能意味着成为一个成功的受人尊敬的领袖，或是一份稳定舒适的大型跨国公司的工作，又或是市区的大房子、一套漂亮的家具等等。然而，幸福也可以是一个和谐平静的家庭，或是一个体贴热情的朋友，或者只是一个微笑、一个手势、一个暗示。事实上，幸福
19、可以是你能够想到的任何事情。至少，我们可以有两种幸福：精神幸福和物质幸福。Ones materialistic happiness is dependant on ones economic success, though not completely. Without a strong and steady economic background, one could never imagine an easy and simple life, let alone an affluent and luxurious one. If you arent able to afford a hou
20、se, a car, or even a book, anybody would be horrified at the mere mention of this kind of life. Definitely, some people will feel happy right away if their basic demands for life are satisfied. However, we have to admit that these people still need to be successful materialisticallyGetWord(materiali
21、stically); to some degree.一方面，一个人的物质幸福依赖于经济上的成功，尽管不是完全依赖。没有稳定的经济后盾，很难想象如何过上轻松简单的生活，更不用说富庶奢侈的生活了。如果买不起房子、车，甚至是一本书，任何人提到这种生活都会害怕。当然，有一些人只要基本的生活需求得到满足就可以立刻感到很幸福。但是我们仍然必须承认，这些人也需要某种意义上的经济成功。On the other hand, ones success in economy may not necessarily lead to ones spiritual happiness. As we all know, m
22、oney doesnt get you everything and some even say that money is the root of all evilsGetWord(evils);. Onesfinancial success may be built on the sacrifice of time, health and love, which are the three most essential elements of spiritual happiness. All of us are not new to this picture: a successful b
23、usiness man tasting loneliness alone with a broken heart.另一方面，个人经济上的成功不见得能带来精神层面的幸福。众所周知，金钱不能带来一切，甚至有人说金钱是万恶之源。经济上的成功可能就是建立在牺牲时间、健康和爱情的基础之上，而这三件事情是个人精神层面幸福的基本要素。我们对于这个画面并不陌生：一位职场成功的男士带着一颗破碎的心独自品味孤独。In my point of view, ones economic success is only one of the key factors of happiness, but never the
24、only one. To be happy, one needs to be both spiritually and materially satisfied Get Word (satisfied); though each of us may have a totally different picture of happiness.以我的观点，经济上的成功只是幸福的一个重要因素，但绝对不是唯一因素。尽管我们每一个人对于幸福有完全不同的理解，要幸福就要精神上和物质上都能得到满足。Generally speaking, gun is recognized as a emblem of po
25、wer and justice of police. It is clear that a police with gun on is able to prevent those potential criminal activities. For instance, a pistol on the belt works effectively to stop crimes range from those robbery, theft, and rape and it can also force the criminals to be arrested.However, opponents
26、 argue that violence in films and on television is detrimental to audiences psychology. Taking fantasy for reality, people become aggressive and eccentric. They believe things can be solved by violence. In addition, violence has negative impacts on the stability of society. Research findings reveal
27、that 60 percent of crimes are committed by teenagers after watching films or television which had a large amount of violence. Teenagers are sovulnerable and immature that they cannot judge whether the activities performed in mass media are right or not. As an illustration, a boy killed his younger s
28、ister in Australia because he imitated the violent scenes from television programs.大作文：some people say the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful adults for society. Others say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions.Do you agree or disagree?我的观点是教育的短期目标是实现学生技能
29、和思维能力的提升，从而实现个人梦想;而终极是必然是为了服务于社会，甚至人本身存在的意义就是在于服务社会。教育只是一种手段，而人更多的是通过实现个人目标而对社会有意。My personal answer to the purpose of education is that students and teaching staff should hold critical attitudes. It means that education involves the temporary and ultimate goals. The ultimate goal of education is th
30、e service of society. However, whether or not achieving it should take the accomplishment of personal goals as the prerequisite.On one hand, students are expecting to acquire the survival skills with the aid of schooling training in the professional skills and thinking abilities. Personal ambitions
31、also consist of the access to their preferred working fields and the progression in the professional fields. Besides, they finally win the social respect and acknowledgement.至于教育是否应该为社会提供服务为标准，答案是多样的。而我坚定的认为，个人目标的实现和对社会有好处总体上并不矛盾。毕业生也只有通过找到好的工作，获得体面的工作，才能发挥才干，比如成为一个杰出的建筑师的同时，个人获得了很好的薪水，对于社会做出了一定的贡献，
32、设计更多的建筑物，满足居住和审美的需求。When it comes to whether or not taking the social service to the society as the education goal,views differed greatly. However, I firmly believe that the accomplishment of personal wishes does not contradict to the willingness to the service of society. Graduates have to acquire
33、the decent jobs, reasonable salary and social respect first andsimultaneously contribute to the society. Take the excellent architects as an example, they design the fashionable structures for peoples living and aesthetic demand while they can acquire adecent income as well.当然，也存在一些个人利益与社会利益发生的冲突的时候
34、，有效的教育应该培养他们优先考虑社会利益的思维。比如官员的贪污行为，商人的不择手段。如果教育能够在这便是成功的教育.本文来源:篇三：榆林 GRE 作文写作赏析智课网 GRE 备考资料榆林 GRE 作文写作赏析GRE 写作对很多同学来说都是 GRE 考试的难点所在，中国考生的 AW 平均分甚至只有 3.0。那么到底应该如何攻克 GRE 写作呢?下面是智课教育小编带来的榆林 GRE 作文写作赏析。GRE 作文范文The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.观点陈述
35、型作文/ 题目被置于媒体审视下的任何人，其名誉终将受毁损。Sample EssayThe intensity of todays media coverage has been greatly magnified by the sheer number and types of media outlets that are available today. Intense competition for the most revealing photographs and the latest information on asubject has turned even minor medi
36、a events into so-called media frenzies. Reporters are forced by the nature of the competition to pry ever deeper for an angle on a story that no one else has been able to uncover. With this type ofmedia coverage, it does become more and more likely that anyone who is subjected to it will have his or
37、 her reputation tarnished, as no individual is perfect. Everyone makes mistakes. The advances in technology have made muchinformation easily and instantaneously available. Technology has also made it easier to dig further than ever before into a persons past, increasing the possibility that the subj
38、ects reputation may be harmed.范文正文当今媒体报道的力度，由于当今时代所能获得的媒体渠道那前所未有的数量和种类，从而被极大地增强。围绕着对最具暴露性的图片及对某一题材最新信息所展开的竞争，使哪怕是次要的媒体事件也转变为所谓的媒体疯狂。由于竞争的本质，记者们被迫就某一项报道作深度采访，以其窥探到一个任何其他人都无法揭示的视角。随着这类媒体报道的出现，任何被置于媒体报道之下的人，其名誉越来越有可能被玷污，因为金无赤金，人无完人。每个人都有可能犯错误。技术进步使大量的信息在第一瞬间便被轻易获取。技术也使媒体得以比以往任何时候更深入地去挖掘一个人的过去，从而更增加了当事人
39、名誉受损的可能性。The above statement is much too broad, however. Anyonecovers all people all over the world. There are people whose reputations have only been enhanced by media scrutiny. There are also people whose reputations were already so poor that media scrutiny could not possibly diminish it any furth
40、er. There may very well be people that have done nothing wrong in the past, at least that can be discovered by the media, whose reputations could not be diminished by media scrutiny. To broadly state that anyonesubjected to media coverage will have his or her status sullied implies that everyones re
41、putation worldwide is susceptible to damage under any type of media scrutiny. What about children, particularly newborn children? What about those people whose past is entirely unknown?然则，上述陈述涵盖面过于宽泛。任何人涵盖了世界上所有的人。有些人的名誉反而会因为媒体的聚焦而陡然显赫起来。也有些人，其名声早就如此之糟糕，以致于媒体的聚焦再也无法让它受到更坏的毁损。笼统地陈述受媒体报道的任何人 均会使其地位被玷污
42、，这暗示着全球每个人的名声在任何种类的媒体聚焦下均易于遭诟病。那么，对于天真无辜的孩子们，尤其新生婴儿，情况会如何?对于那些其过去根本无人知晓的人来说，情况又会是什么样呢?Another problem with such a broad statement is that it does not define the particular level of media scrutiny. Certainly there are different levels of media coverage. Does merely the mention of ones name in a newsp
43、aperconstitute media scrutiny? What about the coverage of a single event in someones life, for example a wedding or the birth of a baby? Is the media coverage of the heroic death of a firefighter or police officer in the line of duty ever going to diminish that persons reputation? It seems highly un
44、likely that in these examples, although these people may have been subjected to media scrutiny, these individuals reputations are undamaged and potentially enhanced by such exposure.对于这样一项笼统的陈述而言，它的另一个问题是没能明晰界定媒体聚焦的具体程度。媒体的报道毫无疑问存在程度上的差别。只在报纸上提及一个人的名字，是否算作媒体聚焦?对某人一生中单独一次事件(如婚礼或孩子出生) 的报道这也算媒介聚焦吗?媒体对消
45、防队员或警官因公而死的英雄壮举进行报道，难道也会毁损该人的名声吗?在这些实例中，其名声受损的事情极不可能发生。虽然这些人可能被置于媒体审视之下，但其名声却会完好无损，且潜在地可因这些披露而得以提高。Without a doubt, there are many examples of individuals whose reputations have been diminished by media scrutiny. The medias uncovering of former U.S. President Bill Clintons affair with Monica Lewinsk
46、y will most likely overshadow the entire eight years of his administration. Basketball superstar Michael Jordans sterling reputation has beentarnished more than once by the media; first by media coverage of his gambling habits, then most recently (and in a much more harmful manner) by news reports o
47、f his marital infidelities and the divorce from his wife of thirteen years. Fame and fortune can turn an ordinary individual into a media target where reporters will stop at almost nothing to dig up dirtthat will sell more newspapers or entice more viewers to watch a television program. It could eve
48、n beargued that media scrutiny killed Princess Diana as her car sped away from the privacy-invading cameras of reporters in Paris. There is no doubt that there are a large number of people who have been hurt in one way or another by particularly intense media scrutiny.毫无疑问，也有许多例子能证明一个人的名声会被媒体审视所毁损。媒
49、体对美国前总统 Bill Clinton 与 Monica Lewinsky 的风流韵事的揭露极有可能会将其八年的执政生涯置于阴影之中。超级篮球明星 Michael Jordan 一世英名也被媒体不止一次地玷污，首先是被有关其赌习的媒体报道，其次是最近-且以一种更具致命性伤害的方式-被有关他婚姻不忠以及与其结婚 13 年的妻子分道扬镳的报道。当媒体记者不择手段去挖掘某些可促使其报纸销量大增的 猛料 时，或去诱惑更多的观众观看某一电视节目时，名和利就会将一个普通人转变为媒体追踪的目标。我们甚至可以提出这样一种论点，即正是媒体的审视将 Diana 王妃置于死地，随着她的汽车去竭力逃脱巴黎街头的记者们那侵犯隐私的相机镜头。毫无疑问，肯定有许多人被极其强烈的媒体聚焦以一种方式或另一种方式所伤害。In summary, it seems impossible that for every person that is subjected to media scrutiny, his or her reputation will eventually be diminished. Millions of people are mentioned in the media every day yet still manage
