1、 作文材料 2014 新2014 书面表达考前指导书面表达总分 20 分，如何做好中考英语书面表达，拿到高分？一、认真审题看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求。审题时要看清文字说明、图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息，以及参考词汇，字数要求等等。如果是几幅图要将几幅图结合起来看，才能弄清人物关系和故事情节。还要审文体，确定格式，确定人称，确定主体时态。二、列出要点要点是给分的一个重要因素，为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要在看清看懂所有文字、图画、参考词汇的基础上，在草稿纸上将各个要点逐条列出。三、写出词句用英语写出各个要点的关键词语或句型，并用地道的英语句子将各个要点逐一表达
2、出来。四、连句成文根据各个要点之间的关系，使用恰当的关联词语(详见语篇基础)，将各个句子连接成通顺流畅的短文。并注意以下几点：避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。注意长短句交错，几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。五、细心检查短文写好后还要细心检一篇，看是否正确无误。你可主要检查：(1) 人称是否用错，并注意人称代词的主格和宾格形式是否有错；(2) 动词的时态形式是否准确无误，特别注意查看一般现在时主语是第三人称单数时谓语动词是否加了(e)s；(3) 名词的复数形式；(4) 单词拼写、标点符号和大小写是否有错；(5) 格式是否有错。六、誊入试卷经检查，准确无误后，才誊入试卷。要特别注
3、意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷时正值天气寒冷，老师工作量之大，时间紧迫，书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关，同学们务必注意。英语作文如何得高分一般说来，每次考试后，阅卷老师要在很短的时间内评阅完大量的试卷，工作量非常大。尽管作文评分有具体的标准，但它仍然是主观性较大的部分，因此，这里我觉得介绍一些这些阅卷老师阅卷时的心理，对考生是极为有用的。1.整洁的卷面和漂亮的书写漂亮的书写令人赏心悦目，可使阅卷老师从疲惫不堪中解脱出来，给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。2.字数要达到最低要求因为作文对字数要求高，一般 80 词左右，所以考生切记要在规定的范围内完成自己的工作,考生应注意在写作中长度一定要
4、适当。3.结构完整，脉络清晰考试时作文阅卷时间紧，且采用 global scoring（整体评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你的大作。我认为，一个完整框架是必不可少的，首先应让阅卷老师觉得你的文章是结构完整合理、符合要求的。换言之，即具备英语文章的基本要素：引言段、扩展段和结尾段。基础较差的学生，作文要争取多拿分，只要写出与文章内容相关的单词、短语句子就可拿分。抄袭阅读理解完形填空原文不得分。以下给你们推荐几篇热门话题的范文：A 推荐信学校学生会要推选一名副主席，你们准备推荐 Philip, 请写一封 100 词左右的推荐信给校长. 就 Philip 的一些优秀品质加以集中阐述。性格
5、/ 能力：谦虚，随和从不炫耀或瞧不起别人,也不容易生气开朗，有活力，乐于助人 与同学相处融洽，交了很多朋友勤奋，做事有条理经常得高分，勇敢，自信，有创造力不怕困难，经常会想出好点子Dear Principal:We strongly recommend Philip as the new vice-chairperson of the Students Union. Philip is quite a modest boy, though he is excellent in many ways, he never shows off or looks down on other studen
6、ts. He is also easy-going and he doesnt get angry easily.We also think he is outgoing and lively. He gets on well with his students and he has made a lot of friends. He always helps others in need. So he is very helpful.Philip is also a hard-working person. He often gets high marks in study. He is a
7、lso organized enough to do everything well.Philip is also brave and confident. He is never afraid of difficulties. He often speaks before the whole school. WhatYours sincerelyDanielB 青少年烦恼目前，初三同学们的学习很忙，有些同学不得不放弃很多自己很喜欢的活动，有点同学为此感到烦恼。Simon 想和他的朋友 Joe 谈谈想法，请你替他写封 E-mail。1. 以前花很多时间在自己的爱好上。2. 进入初三后，父母和老
8、师都不允许自己继续，因为这样会影响学习。3. 虽然理解他们，但还是认为自己应该做点自己感兴趣的事情。4. 希望朋友提出解决方案帮助自己。Dear JoeI have a problem. I really need your help. The problem is that I love basketball. I used to spend a lot of time playing basketball. But now it becomes more and more difficult since I am in Junior Three. Both my teachers and
9、parents dont allow me to play basketball. They said it was bad for my study. Its probably true. However, I think I should be allowed to do the things that Im interested in. Im very upset and dont know what to do. You always come up with good solutions to peoples problems. Can you help me?Best wishes
10、,Simon假如你叫李明，你的朋友小明因为沉溺于电脑游戏，成绩日益下降。作为小明的朋友，你很担心，并决定给他写一封信，帮助他改掉这个坏习惯，好好学习。要点提示：1. 说明玩电脑游戏的利弊。2. 建议小明在课余时间多参加有意义的活动。3. 你对小明的期望。 We are proud of you for being good at playing computer games. Computers are more and more important in our lives. Playing games on them can help us know more about computer
11、s. But if you are addicted to it, itll be quite harmful to you. It not only is bad for your health but also has bad influence on your studies ,if you spend too much time playing them.I think you should take an active part in all kinds of activities in your free time. We all know you are a cute boy,
12、so we expect you to grow healthily in all ways.Yours,Li MingC 学生学习健康生活方面1. It is very important for us to keep healthy。/ How can we keep healthy?2. To keep healthy, we should not only eat the food healthily but also do more exercise。3. I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in th
13、e world。4. There is an old saying: “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”5. Either study or work is based on strong body.身体是革命的本钱6. We should achieve a balance between study and exercises to keep us healthy.7. Health is very important to us teenagers.8. Health is far more important than money.9. Go
14、od health can help us enjoy our life while poor health leads to nothing.10. Staying up late at night is bad for our health.自贯彻“规范办学行为”以来，我们学生的学校生活发生了一系列变化。请根据下列表格中的要点提示。用英语写一段话，词数在 80-100 之间，内容必须包括表格中的提示要点。要求：1文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；2文章的开头已给出，不计人总词数；3参考词汇：补课 have extra classesGreat changes have taken pla
15、ce in our school since the government did something to control school management. In the past ,we stayed in our school for nine hours every day. We had lots of homework and had extra classes at weekends. Our after-school activities were few and boring. But now, we stay at school for less than seven
16、and a half hours. We do homework for less than one and a half hours. Its very exciting not to have extra class on holidays. Our after-school activities are very colourful , such as playing balls, singing,dancing,drawing and so on. We are very happy to do like this.I think we will do better in study.
17、最近科学家研究发现，现在的年轻人走路很少。现在请你根据下表写一篇英语短文，以提醒身边的人们要重视运动，关注健康。以下是短文的内容：Just remember, the more you walk, the healthier you will be.江苏省教育厅公布的 2013 年学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水范文：The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very youngage.At present, about 70 percent students are shortsigh
18、ted. Here are some reasons. First of all,many students dont have enough sleep. Second,some students read books for too long time, others do too much homework and use computers a lot.However, short eyesight can be prevented.We should do more exercises and play more sports. We are also supposed to hav
19、e a right habit of using our eyes.In my opinion, it is important to protect our eyes. We should have a break when using them too much.We should protect our eyes well so that we can see the colourful world.D 学会感恩例: 请你根据下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。小词典：范文：Good morning, boys and girl
20、s! The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they dont show any sense of thanks.I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express than
21、ks. Because of society, we can have a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.In the future, we should never forget our
22、society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our country more beautiful.Thank you for your listening!英语校刊上刊登了学生会(The Students Union) 发出的倡议书“Write to your teacher”。假设你叫李明，读了倡议书以后，给你的英语老师写封信,感谢她对你的关心和帮助。注意：表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。词数 90 左右。信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总
23、词数。Dear Miss Cheng,I want to say Thank you. most at the moment when I have to say goodbye to you.I really appreciate what you have done for me. I used to be too shy to speak English in front of the class. You found my problem and helped me out. I can still remember your smile on the day when I won t
24、he first prize in the English speech contest. It was you who gave me the confidence.I have a dream of going to Beijing University in the future. Though its hard for me, Im sure your love will encourage me to achieve it.Yours Li Ming假如你是 Richard。今天是父亲节，请你用英语给你的爸爸写一封信，内容包括：1. 表达对爸爸的祝福和感谢。2. 给出至少两点理由说服
25、爸爸同意你每天打半个小时的篮球。Dear DadToday is Fathers Day. I hope you are happy and healthy every day. Thank you for everything you have done for me.I know you are worried about my study, so you dont want me to play basketball too much. But I cant study all day long. Sometimes I need to relax. I really enjoy pla
26、ying basketball. It will keep me healthy and make me full of energy in my work.Could you allow me to play basketball for half an hour every day? I promise I will try my best in my study.Yours, RichardE 环保话题(1)关于环境保护问题, 典型例句：1. Its our duty to save water. /Its our duty to love and protect our environ
27、ment。2. As we know , water is very important to man./ we cant live without water.3. Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers.4. It is very important to take care of our environment.5. But some people dont care about it./ They waste a lot of water in their daily life.6. Many rivers and lakes are
28、 seriously polluted./Something must be done to stop the pollution.7. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthily in the future.8. We should not throw litter onto the ground.(文明礼仪)9. If everyone can try their best to protect the environment, the world will become mu
29、ch more beautiful.10. If we dont save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.(如果我们不节约用水，那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪。)范文： 保护环境例：最近我们南通环境变得越来越糟糕，环境污染越发严重?。假如你是学生 Jane,你校范文：Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:（演讲稿:环保、低碳）I m very proud that I have been chosen to speak to you all t
30、oday.As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. We can see white pollution everywhere. There has been hazy weather in many parts of China in recent years. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environment?For exa
31、mple（first）, we can try to take a bus or ride bikes instead of driving by ourselves .We should prevent factories from dumping the waste into rivers to reduce water pollution. We shouldnt use disposable plates, bowls. when we go shopping we can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags. and we can
32、 use both sides of the paper when we write.In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!假如你是李明，南通市环保小组的一员，为地球环境的恶化甚感着急，你用英语发了个电子邮件给某英语学习报编辑，
33、内容要点如下：1. 地球上的人口越来越多。地球正变得越来越拥挤，污染越来越严重。2. 野生动物丧失了他们生存的家园，越来越多的动物正从我们身边飞速消失。3. 如果我们不采取行动，人类将无法在地球上存活下去。届时，我们将别无选择，只得搬到其他行星上去。4. 我们无法想象 100 年后的地球是什么样的；5. 我认为?Dear Editor,The population on Earth is becoming larger and larger. Our Earth is getting more and more crowded and polluted. Wild animals have l
34、ost their living homes. More and more animals around are disappearing quickly. Humans cant survive on Earth if we dont take any action. We will have no choice but to move to other planets at that time. We cant imagine what life will be like in the future.I think we shouldnt continue to destroy fores
35、ts.Something must be done to stop factories from polluting our environment.Best wishes!随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过“低碳生活（low-carbon life） ”，即减少二氧化碳的排放，低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活。请根据表格中的内容，用英语写一段话，单词参考词汇：电 electricityWith the global warming, the environment of the earth is getting worse, so more and more people choose to
36、 live a low-carbon life. As students, we should wash our clothes with our hands instead of using washing machines. It can save a lot of water and electricity. We shouldnt take the lift, we should walk upstairs and downstairs instead. It can make us healthier and stronger. We shouldnt take a car to s
37、chool, we can go to school on foot or by bike or by bus. It can save the oil and produce less carbon. When we go shopping, we should use the paper bags or cloth bags. We cant use the plastic bags because we all know plastic is harmful to our environment.We can also do many other things to protect th
38、e environment. If all of us try our best to protect the environment, our earth is becoming more and more beautiful.节约资源，保护环境，应从我们身边的小事做起。假设你是一个注重低碳生活的中学生， 请以为题，按以下提示用英语为某英语报写一篇稿件，简单描述自己的低碳生活。My Low-carbon Lifeon foot every day now. Also, I will turn off the light when it is not needed or when I am t
39、he last to leave the classroom. Wherever I am, I try to save as much water as possible. As a student, I have to use much paper every day, but I try to make full use of every piece of paper. By doing this, I help to save the forests.Lets tell everyone around us the importance of low-carbon life, and
40、ask them to join us in improving the environment.F 安全越来越多的汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来了极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请写一篇有关交通安全的短文。内容包括：1. 遵守交通规则，如走人行道、过斑马线；2. 别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球；3. 劝父母不能酒后驾车。你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线With more and more cars coming into our fami
41、lies, we are happy that is has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey(遵守) the rules. For example, we must walk on sidewalks. When we cross the zebra-crossing, stop an
42、d look right left, then go across fast. When the traffic lights are red, we mustnt cross the road. Dont play football on the road. We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive. We can also tell them not to talk or make phone calls while driving.We can say cars are coming into our life, but
43、 only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business, we can be safe when we drive on roads and walk on sidewalks.H 议论文请你根据以下提示写一篇英语小短文：我校“优秀学生十不做” 要求学生不带手机到学校。上周学校对九年级学生进行了抽样调查，调查结果如下表所示。请你根据表格中提供的信息写一份调查报告，并发表自己的观点。要求：1、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整2、词数 90 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）Mobile phones are not al
44、lowed to bring to our school. Last week our school did a survey on using mobile phones at school among Grade 9 students. Here is the result.60 percent of the students think it unnecessary to bring mobile phones to school though they are expensive .Some messages have a bad effect on teenagers, as a r
45、esult, the students who use mobile phones will lose interest in studies or even do something against the law.30 percent of the students think it fashionable to own mobile phones. They can make friends more easily. Whats more, they can search for useful information on the internet with mobile phones.
46、 They also said they could contact their parents more quickly when they meet some difficulties.In my opinion, students should put most of their efforts into study, they arent supposed to use mobile phones at school.中考复习备考期间，学校组织了频繁的考试。一些同学认为这很必要，但另一些同学则不以为然。你赞成哪种观点？请你结合实际，就是否应当进行经常性的考试发表自己的看法，阐述自己的理
47、由。Some students think that it is necessary, but others do not think so.In my opinion, frequent examinations can help us know how we have studied and find out what we have not mastered in our studies so that we can improve the way of learning. Besides, examinations can encourage us to study even hard
48、er, so we can make greater progress.However, too many examinations will disturb our revision and make us feel tired and tense all the time.So I think necessary examinations are useful, but too frequent examinations are harmful.I 文明行为狼山景区是南通著名的旅游胜地，每年有大量的游客来此游玩。请根据下表提示，以“Behave well during the travel
49、”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍游客以前和现在行为的变化并注意：1. 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。2. 词数 80 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。4. 参考词汇:行为、举止：behave; 吐痰：spitBehave well during the travel Wolf Hill is a famous tourist attraction in Nantong. Every year many tourists come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery. But a few years ago,J 新生事物2013 年双 11 淘宝交易额突破 350 亿元，随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。 “网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章并阐述自己的观点。注意：1所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；2文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学
