1、 四级作文-现象解释型 1000 字现象解释型作文I. 现象解释型作文时继对比选择型作文之后又一常考作文。这种作文要求就某种社会现象阐述原因，描述危害等。现象解释型作文一般写作提纲如下：第一段：阐述现象。第二段：分析原因。第三段：解决办法或指出问题所在。现象解释型作文举例：1. What Electives to Choose?1） 各大学开设了各种各样的选修课。2） 学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课。3） 以你自己为例。2. Harmful of Fake Commodities1） 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品，为什么会有这种现象？2） 举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人，社会等的危害。3
2、. The Celebration of Western Festivals1） 现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日。2） 产生这种现象的原因。3） 这种现象可能带来的影响。4. Students Selecting Their Lecturers1） 有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课老师。2） 学生选择教师时考虑的主要因素。3） 学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题。II. 现象解释性文章中常用句型1. Never in history has the issue of _ been more visible than _.从来没有问题像_ 那样引人关注。2. Nowhere in
3、 world has the problem of _ been as evident as _.没有一个问题想_那样引人瞩目。3. Now there is a growing awareness (recognition) of the necessity of _.现在，人们越来越意识到（认识到）_的必要性。4. Now, people in growing number are beginning (coming) to realize that _. 现在，越来越多的人开始意识到_。5. Recently the problem (issue /question) of _ has
4、been brought to public attention. 近来，_ 问题引起公众的关注。6. Recently the problem (issue /question) of _ has caused (aroused) worldwide concern. 近来，_ 问题引起广泛关注。7. Recently, the problem of _ has become the focus of the public concern.进来， _问题引起了公众的极大关注。8. _ has become a hot topic, and heated debates are right o
5、n their way._成为热点话题，引发热烈讨论。9. There may be a combination of factors which contribute to / are responsible for/explains_.可能有几个原因导致了我们下面要阐述的问题。10. Its no easy/simple task to offer the reasons for this phenomenon which involves more thanone complicated factor.要解释该现象产生的原因并不容易，因为其中涉及到很多复杂的因素。11. Among al
6、l the important/ convincing/reasons for _, one should be emphasized. Thatis_.在_所有重要的/有说服力的原因中，我们应当重点关注_12. We are blessed with new opportunities and faced with new challenges.我们被赋予新的机会，并且面临新的挑战。13. It is commonly believed that _ is the inevitable result of _.人们普遍认为， _是_的必然结果。14. While the rhythm / p
7、ace / tempo of peoples living is speeding up, a lot of changes have takenplace in _.人们生活节奏加快的同时，_也发生了很多变化。15. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that_.从以上的讨论我们可以总结出_16. Although it is commonly/ widely/ generally held / felt / accepted/ agreed that _, it isunlikely
8、to be true that_虽然人们普遍认为_， 但是_仍然是不正确的。17. It will exert/ have/ produce/ profound / far-reaching/ remarkable/ considerable/ beneficial/favorable/ undesirable / disastrous effect/ influence on_它将会对_产生深远的/显著地/有益的/不良的/灾难性的影响。18. It is high time that we put an end to _.该是我们停止_的时候了。III. 范文欣赏范文一1. 大学开设了各种各
9、样的选修课2. 学生因为各自原因选修了不同课程、3. 以自己为例What Electives to Choose?Nowadays, there exist a wide range of selective courses in the college. These courses make our campus life more colorful and valuable. When confronting with the question of what electives to choose, different students hold different opinions.S
10、ome students believe that knowledge is power; as a result, they are to choose more courses to get more knowledge and certificates if possible. For these people, English and computer may be their favorites, and they can be well prepared for job hunting in the future. Some students just choose the cou
11、rse appealing to them. While some others choose the courses in order to be exposed to knowledge beyond their textbooks. There are also some students choosing courses easy to pass just to get the required score.As for me, I would like to get more from electives than knowledge. Those courses that can
12、be helpful to cultivate my characters and teach me something about life, and those courses that are full of challenges and miracles will be on my choice lists. What electives to choose, that is aquestion.点评：结构方面： 作者在第一段中共使用三句话，简洁有力。第一句阐述大学有很多选修课可以选择的现象，第二句分析意义，第三句承上启下，引出第二段的分析。第二段作者罗列了选择不同选修课的原因。 第三
13、段作者阐述“我“选课时考虑的因素，其中最后一句话模范名句，呼应全文，画龙点睛，总之，本文结构合理，层次清晰，详略得当，首尾呼应，开头语结尾都有闪光点。句式方面： 长短句搭配，句式丰富多变，具体的闪光点如下：there exist a wide range of selective courses in the college. 巧妙使用 there exist 句型描述现象。When confronting with the question of what electives to choose, different students hold different opinions. 使用“
14、疑问副词+现在分词”作时间状语，是句式丰富多变。Some students believe that knowledge is power一句，与下文的 Some, while some others 等句子搭配，是论证逻辑清晰，富有层次。 English and computer may be their favorites与第三段中的 and those courses that are full of challenges and miracles will be on my choice list. 替换单一的“某人选修某课”的句型，是句式多变，并且避免使用单一主语。What elec
15、tives to choose, that is a question. 仿造名句 To be or not to be, thats a question.结尾，契合主题，画龙点睛，富有气势。用词方面：亮点较多，如：使用 be exposed to 表示“大量接触，学到”的意思，cultivate 表示“塑造（性格） ”的意思等。范文二1. 有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师2. 学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素3. 学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题。On Students Selecting Their LecturersRecently, students selecting
16、 their lecturers has been brought into focus. It is heatedly debated among universities over whether students should be given this much power and whether the students have the ability to properly use this right.Students tend to take into account a variety of factors when choosing a lecturers, such a
17、s the lecturers personality and his teaching style, the lecturers academic background and teaching experience, and the lecturers reputation among students. Sometimes even the teachers gender, age, voice, and appearance might affect the students decision, and obliviously some of these factors have no
18、 logical relations with teaching ability.There are both positive and negative aspects to empower students with the right to choose their lecturers. On the one hand, it encourages them to take greater responsibility and get more actively involved in the learning process, and also put pressure on teac
19、hers to improve their teaching quality. On the other hand, however, the students might select lecturers who teach interesting classes without much content. In a word, both students and teachers should take this matter into serious consideration.结构方面：第一段阐述了大学生可以选择任课教师这一现象引起的关注。 第二段作者罗列了可能影响学生选择不同任课老师
20、的几种原因。 第三段第一句话点出这一现象有利有弊， 然后从利弊两个方面进行讨论，该段最后一句总结全文。 本文有始有终，首尾呼应，详略得当，说理充分，主题突出，开头和结尾都有闪光点。比较突出的特点是第一段最后一句话一方面总结现象，另一方面为第二段的议论埋下伏笔。句式方面：恰当准确的使用了动名词，形式主语，分次， 介词短语等结构，长短句搭配，句式丰富多变。具体的闪光点如下：Recently, students selecting their lecturers has been brought into focus. 用动名词短语作主语，概括现象，直接引入话题，言简意赅。It is heatedl
21、y debated among universities over whether students should be given this much power and whether the students have the ability to properly use this right. 使用形式主语，无论要讨论的话题或要表达的观点有多长，都可以轻松表达。Students tend to take into account a variety of factors when choosing a lecturers,使用现在分词短语作时间状语，避免了句式和主语的重复。it en
22、courages them to take greater responsibility and get more actively involved in the learning process, 比较句的使用很见语言功底，堪称得分亮点。In a word, both students and teachers should take this matter into serious consideration.套用句式巧妙结尾。用此方面： 亮点较多，副词的使用比较准确到位， 如heatedly, properly, obviously 等Assignment: The Celebrati
23、on of Western Festivals1) 现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日。2) 产生这种现象的原因。3) 这种现象可能带来的影响。模板学习（一）第一段：描述现象Recently, us most is . It is true that 进一步阐述现象。第二段：说明原因There are many reasons explaining . The main one is is more, . As a result,第三段：总结观点Considering all these, For one thing, . For another, 理由二. In conclusion, 重
24、申观点，总结全文.Harmful of Fake CommoditiesRecently, more and more fake commodities are appearing in the market. What amazes us most is a cureall medicine report on TV. It is true that fake commodities can be found almost everywhere.There are many reasons explaining this problem. The main one is that fake
25、commodities may bring good profits for producers. What is more, our market supervision is still not powerful enough. Finally, many fake commodities are much cheaper than genuine ones. As a result, fake commodities are on the increase.Considering all these, we should realize the seriousness of the pr
26、oblem. For one thing, fake commodities have posed a severe threat to the healthy development of our socialist market. For another, many fake commodities may do harm to the consumers health even to their lives. Inconclusion, fake commodities should be eliminated as soon as possible.模板学习（二）Harmful of
27、Fake CommoditiesAs is known to all, there are a lot of fake commodities in the market. People seem to get accustomed to fake commodities in the market. In fact, more kinds and larger quantities of fake commodities are appearing around us.The reasons of this phenomenon lie in several aspects. Firstly
28、, fake commodities may bring good profits for producers. Secondly, our market supervision is still not powerful enough. Thirdly, many fake commodities are much cheaper than genuine ones. Finally, many consumers find it difficult to identify fake commodities.As a matter of fact, fake commodities do g
29、reat harm to people. On the one hand, fake commodities have posed a severe threat to the healthy development of our socialist market. On the other hand, many fake commodities, such as fake medicine, may harm the consumers health even their lives. Therefore, some measures should be taken to eliminate fake commodities as soon as possible.荐我的数学老师(700 字)作文 荐会唱歌的猫(700 字)作文 荐一件烦恼的事(450 字)作文 荐冬(400 字)作文 荐黄龙导游词(900 字)作文
