1、Basic Writing -Character introduction,Module4 Unit1 Women of achievement,儋州市八一中学 授课老师:王秀珠,Can you tell me something about her?,Brainstorming:,If we want to introduce someone, what can we talk about?,Her name is Lin Qiaozhi.She is a doctor. She was born in Xiamen in 1901. She is kind and hard-working
2、.She graduated from a medical school. She delivered about 50,000 babies. We all think highly of her.,name,job,birthplace/ birth date,evaluation,qualities,achievements,education,Introduce Lin Qiaozhi orally,What can we write about a person?,2.性格/品质 (personality/quality),3.教育(education ),4.成就&评价(achie
3、vements & evaluation),Tips:介绍概况,一个句型轻松搞定 Born in+ 地点 , sb, 同位语(身份),谓语+ Born in +年份/on+具体日期, sb, 同位语(身份),谓语+ A specialist in 是方面的专家,Character introduction,1. 概况 (name, age, birthplace, birth date, job, background),林巧稚,一位妇女疾病的专家,1901年出生于厦门,1983年逝世,享年82岁.,_, Lin Qiaozhi, _ , passed away on 1983 at the
4、age of 82.,Born in Xiamen on 1901,a specialist in,womens diseases,Born in+ 地点+ on/ in +时间, sb, 同位语,谓语+ ,2. 性格/品质 (personality/quality),What words do you know to describe a persons quality?,Brainstorming (group-work) :,personality/quality,determined,brave,warm-hearted,responsible,unselfish,generous,k
5、ind,considerate,active,Group work: Brainstorming,good,Yoga is not only patient but also easy-going, so we all love her.Yoga is so patient and easy-going that all of us love her.Eg:林巧稚不仅善良而且体贴,所以病人们都喜欢她。Lin Qiaozhi was kindconsiderate,so all the patients love her. Lin Qiaozhi was kind and considerate
6、 all the patients love her.,2.性格/品质 (personality/quality),Tips:介绍性格特点时,可用固定短语和句型。如: not onlybut also sothat.等,not only,but also,so,that,Useful expressions,graduate from university 从某大学毕业receive/get a doctors degree 获取博士学位go abroad for further study 出国深造,3.教育(education),林巧稚毕业于北京协和医学院,并获得博士学位,而后出国深造。,
7、Beijing Union Medical College, Lin Qiaozhi and then .,After graduating from,Practice,received her doctors degree,went abroad for further education,Tips:介绍教育经历时可以用省略句和一些表达式,使文章简洁。,1.devote ones whole life to sb 将毕生都献给了某人2. think / speak highly of . 高度评价3.be regarded as . 被誉为.4. choose not to do sth.
8、选择不去做某事,4.成就&评价(achievements & evaluation),Useful expressions,1.确保5万多个小生命被顺利接生的林巧稚被认为是中国最伟大的女性之一。 Lin Qiaozhi, who made sure that over 50,000 babies were safely delivered, one of the greatest women in China.2.善良, 体贴的林巧稚一生未婚, 把毕生都献给了她的病人。 She her patients and have a family of her own. Lin Qiaozhi was
9、 so kind and considerate that all the patients her.,was regarded as,devoted her whole life to,chose not to,thought highly of,Have a try,Tips: 介绍成就评价时要牢记相关表达。,巩固练习,Write a short passage to introduce Lin Qiaozhi with the sentence patterns we have learned.,巩固练习,注:北京协和医学院 Beijing Union Medical College,概
10、况,evaluation,education,qualities,One possible version,Born in Xiamen in 1901, Lin Qiaozhi, a famous specialist in womens diseases, passed away in 1983 at the age of 82. After graduating from Beijing Union Medical College, she received her doctors degree and then went abroad for further education. Wh
11、ats more, she devoted her whole life to her patients and chose not to have a family of her own. Lin Qiaozhi was so kind and considerate that all the patients thought highly of her. Lin, who made sure that over 50,000 babies were safely delivered, was regarded as one of the greatest women in China.,W
12、hat can we write about a person?,1. 概况 (name, age, birthplace, birth date, job, background),2.性格/品质 (personality/quality),3.教育(education ),4.成就&评价(achievements & evaluation),Summary,Memorize the important words, phases andsentence patterns.Share the passage with your classmates and talk about the women you admire.,Homework,Thank you!,