1、【英语】中考英语书面表达模拟试题含解析一、英语书面表达1假如你即将在学校英 趣小 的活 中 言， 你用英 写一篇 言稿。要点提示如下: （1）几个月前，奶奶晚 后去跳广 舞（do square dancing ）。（ 2）从那 起，奶奶喜 上了广 舞。（ 3） 在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4） 有些 居有意 ， 音 很吵，无法入睡。（5） 你 人 可以跳广 舞，但要求：（ 1）开 和 尾已 出，不 入 数。（2）要点 全，行文 ，可适当 。Boys and girls,I m very happy to speak here and I d like to talk about my
2、 grandma._That s all. Thank you!【答案】 Boys and girls,I m very happy to speak here and I doutlikemyto talkgrandmaab.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has beenin love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What smore, she has a lo
3、friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing.They think that the music is so loud that they can t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But theyshould think about the feelings of others
4、and they shouldn t make a lot of noise.That s all. Thank you!【解析】 是一篇 材料作文，根据要点提示写一篇学校英 趣小 的活 中的 言稿。要注意随着文章推 的 化，一开始 一般 去 ，而后面 用一般 在 ，最后表达自己 点的 候也 使用一般 在 。人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致关系，构思文章框架，列 出可能会用到的好 好句， 住千万不能漏写信息要点。参考 就是必用 ，一定要运用到文章当中。在写作中注意运用恰当的 ，使文章更加 ，自然。2 面表达地球是我 的家园，我 作 地球的主人，就 好好保 地球。 在正在倡 “低碳 ”生活，只要
5、我 不 染地球的 境，不浪 地球的能源，就能 我 的周 得更 ，生活 得更美好。作 中学生，我 怎 做呢？ 你的想法。内容 包括以下几点：1. 节约用水、用电； 2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；地上种树； 4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；3. 节约粮食，在更多的土要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80 词左右提示词： the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. _If everyone can make a contribution to our
6、earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】 How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water
7、, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees wont be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant
8、 more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment. If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do ， live in ， aroundus， such as， as a middle school student ，and so on，
9、close down the water ， turn off the lights， cut down ， make a contribution to our earth ， pollute our environment ， better and better 等。而固定结构 But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle? 和 I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electr
10、icity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思
11、的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3书面表达社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心的感动，存在于每个人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感动，而是一种显示感动的勇气。请为你身边的人或事点赞，让“点赞 ”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞的事情。你从他/ 她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据以下提示要点，写一篇文章。注意： 1 数： 80 左右； 2不要出 真 的人名及校名。Make a list of the persons that you should give abut
12、tonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked aWhat could you learn from him/her?“ like“ like”button【答案】 I should give my uncle a “like ” button. He is very tall yandstrongver. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I gr
13、ow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文， 述一件我点 的事情，我从他/ 她身上可以学到什么。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 数第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：Ishould ， He is ，He always helps，Iwant to，so they can等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种
14、句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。点睛：本文 构 凑， 言 。开 介 了我要点 的人，接下来介 他的情况，最后指出我从他身上学到的 西。此 give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a life 等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。4 假如你是李 , 你的美国笔友 Bill 你 了一封 子 件 , 想了解你的梦想 。 真 下面的 件 , 根据信中的内容和你的 情况 他写封回信。To: lihua china. comFrom: bill006 america. comSubject: Your dream jobDear
15、 Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future? What is your dream job? Why do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not? What do you need to do for
16、your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求 :1. 参考提示 , 可适当 ；2. 句通 , 意思 , 写工整；3. 文中不得出 你的任何真 信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数 : 不少于 70 词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文 Thank you for your letter. I am glad to
17、 tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the schools environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and
18、 alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream? Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。【详解】首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识
19、分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向Bill 提出问题，结束全文。【点睛】本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter. 然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because， Besides， To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。5临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是Moonlight 小组 的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一 份素质报告NameTommyCharacteristic
20、s聪明、大方（各举一例）Hobbies喜欢看书，认为看书有很多好处（请列举2 个好处）Honour他在家帮助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（ 一例）。今年，学校授予了他 秀学生 （Award for Best Student ）Problems面 考 ，遭受 力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠Your（根据 情况提2 点建 ） suggestions要求： 1、表达清楚、 法正确、上下文 ；2、要点必 包括所有相关信息，并作适当 ； 3、 数： 100 左右； 4、不得使用真 姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight
21、.【答案】 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on c
22、hildren s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year.However, Tommy is stress
23、ed when the exam comes. And he doesn t have enough sleep.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It s better for him to manage histime wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】 篇作文要求我 按照表格里的内容介 一下的 价 告。在表格中有非常 的关于Tommy 的情况， Tommy 写一篇 合素 Tommy 各方面的内容，我 需要用正确的英 把 些内容有条理的表
24、达出来。表格中涉及的内容 多，写作 要注意表达的条理性。 篇作文 主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要 Tommy 提一些建 ， 一部分 用第一人称。同 注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五 和第六 内容。【亮点 明】 是一篇比 秀的范文。 篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有 漏要点。表达准确，注意了被 形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school thisyear.。写作 注意了条理性，使文章具有 次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了 短句的 合，并恰当的使用了一些 ，使文章表达的 。如He is always ready to help others. 、He no
25、t only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news. 、 He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year. 等。6 面表达初中 在即 , 回 三年的学 生活, 你一定有成功的体 , 如一次考 , 一次比 , 一次表演 . 你以 Believe Myself, and I Will Win 写一篇演 稿。提示：（ 1） What was the eve
26、nt?（ 2） How did you make it?（ 3） Whats your feeling?要求：（ 1） 言稿中 包括所有提示内容, 可适当 。（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。（3）词数 80 个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello,everyone!_Thank you for your listening.【答案】 Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a
27、will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They al
28、so told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I foundwhen I put my heart into it, English didn t seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parentsand teachers were happy for me. I
29、felt pleased and proud for myself, too.To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In thefuture, I wont be afraid of the difficulties in my life and Im sure that nothing can beat me and Iwill win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Tha
30、nk you for your listening.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起
31、来。其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准
32、确。文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如 When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、 My Englishteacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、 I foundwhen I put my heart into it, English didn t 、seemInthethatfuture
33、,difficultIwont be afraid ofthe difficulties in my life and Im sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。7人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们不同的观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法1.广交朋友1.浪费时间1. .2.可自由表达思想2.影响学习2. .3.有利于外语学习3.可能上当受骗（ be cheated）注意： 1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。2. 词数 80 词左右，短文的开头已给出（不计入
34、总词数）。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some peoplethink_【答案】 Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line,
35、students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
36、It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友的人的观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友的观点，第三段要表述作者自己的观点。【详解】本篇作文要求作者就上网交友发表意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提示，
37、确定文章中心。注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以适当发挥，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文的紧密联系，要符合逻辑关系。【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你的看法。注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。8环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以 Change for a better China 为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。注意事项：1.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容，条理清楚，作适当发挥。2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名状况水污染，大气污染,词数不少于.80。应对措施立即阻止此类活动,治理环境（至少两条）感想建议环境能够变得更好.Change for a better China_【答案】 We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well.But some people don t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river,
