1、初三英语书面表达的基本方法技巧及练习题及练习题 ( 含答案 ) 含解析一、英语书面表达1书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5 点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。Time to leave school at 5 o clockat 4:45 at 5 o clock.注意：（ 1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；Activities to do after schoolexercise to keep healthy and read booksdo wha
2、t we want, such as listening to musictake a part-time job.（ 2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（ 3）词数： 80-100；（ 4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。短文开头： “What time should junior high school students leave school?” Thisehavweek wheld a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion._【答案】 “What time should junior
3、high school students leave school?”This week we have held aclass meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that stu
4、dents should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of
5、 leaving school at five oclock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also drawsome pictures I like.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting ，talkabout ， the result of ， keep healthy ， after school ，have more time to do ， want to do ， such as， listen to music ， in favor of ，clean
6、the room ， play tennis 等。而复杂并列结构 They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school. 和 Most students think / A few think使叙述条理， 次分明，是本文的亮点。在学 中注意 that students should leave school at about 5 o clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can h
7、ave more time to do what they want to do, such as listening tomusic.等复 从句 构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多 化；同 Most studentsthink / Some think 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，写作 就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有 性，也更富有条理。【点睛】 面表达 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求将所 定的材料内容 整理后展开思 ，考 运用所学英 知 准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，尽可能使用高 和 复 的句式 构以便得到 高的分数。2 面表达假如你是
8、Amy，德国的交 生Sara 下周即将来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的来信，在信中，她 如下信息： 1你家情况； 2.有关餐桌礼 ； 3. 她要承担的家 ； 4. 在，你就她提出的 她回信，也 祝她在你家 得开心！要求： 1. 文章必 包括 片中主要内容，可适当 ；2. 文中不得出 真 的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 字数 110 。Dear Sara，I m glad to hear from you yesterday._Love，Amy【答案】 Dear Sara，I m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next wee
9、k.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate
10、thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say thank you |in politely and leave the food there.As for housework, I think its our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes,
11、clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care ofyourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【 解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 ， 文章增色不少，如be glad to， hear from，unlike in the West ， on the table ， a sign of， help sb. do ，
12、do some housework ，wash thedishes， clean the room ， make the bed ， take care of， how to do 等。而复杂并列结构 In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. 和 If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you c
13、an take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和
14、句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny 收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给 Danny。要点内容历史文化历史悠久，文化各异；传统节日，多彩习俗（举一例）文明行为相互尊重，以礼相待；互学共鉴，共同成长（或自拟）身边文明校园文明（自拟一点）注意： 1. 词数 90 词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇 : civili
15、zed 文明的Dear Danny,I m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forwardto hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Danny,I m
16、 glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my cou
17、ntry, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They arealso called “ three major Chinese holidays ” in Chinaustoms.Here areofeatingthec Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette
18、 （礼仪） . Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can come to China someday to exper
19、ience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny 写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。【详解】文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读 ”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。【点睛】写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适
20、当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of theoldest and longest civilizations in the world中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪），中国是一个礼仪之邦。4书面表达假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail 。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾
21、霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数 80 左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. NowI d like to tell you something about the haze._Yours,Li Ming【答案】 D
22、ear Jack,I m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see
23、the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As fo
24、r me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protectthe environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I m looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li Ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况
25、严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整
26、，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go tosee the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze 、 People all over t
27、he country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、 The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway 、 In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. 等。5中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。某网站正在开展以 “弘扬中国传
28、统文化 ”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办的“讲中国成语故事 ”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。提示词语：Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示问题： What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did you learn from the activi ty? What do you think of it?【答案】 The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms st
29、ory ” was held in our school last week. In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story,the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it
30、 correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved gr eatly. What s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点
31、提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办，所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语： in order to ，take part in ， lots of ， learn from ， in the process of ， Whats more， have a good time 。句型：被动句型。6假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教Peter 参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时
32、需要准备什么。提示词语：school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示问题：When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit? Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition inYanqing.
33、_Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. W
34、e can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. Youd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.Im looking fo
35、rward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【 解】1. 干解 ： 是一篇 材料作文，属于 用文写作。本文已 出了主要写作要点， 笔前要先 真 要点，写作中， 注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的 就是写作的基本方向，然后 要点适当 即可。2. 例文点 ：文章采取 件格式， 以一般将来 主。 言的表述 符合 法的 构， 言准确， 意 ，表达清楚，具有 性。3. 高分亮点：短 ： school gate； invite sb. to do ； a lot of ； plan to do 。句型： not onlybut also； Youd
36、better；Im looking forward to。7假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 Jack 热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的游子吟（ Song of the parting son ）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下提示给他回信：1.作者：孟郊2.时间：唐朝3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服4.主题：母爱的伟大注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3.词数 : 80-100 词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,I m glad to hear from you. I know you a
37、re interested in this poem Song of the parting son ._Yours,【答案】 Dear Jack,I m glad to hear fromouy. I know you are interested in this poemSong of the parting son . NowI m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng J
38、iao, afamous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily lifea mother makingclothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a motherbe. In a word, this short poem has touched many people s hearts.If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【
