1、英语初中英语书面表达汇编练习题含解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（ 山 中考模 ）写作假定你是李 ，在一位名叫Tiger Mom 的学生家 的博客上，你看到以下内容。 你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求， 位家 回复。I m the mother of a fourteen-year old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of
2、my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?写作要点： 1. 表明自己的看法。2. 述自己的理由。3. 提出至少 2 条建 。【答案】 Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in
3、 evaluating students and for their future universityadmission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored.There aremany examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often th
4、at the pressure from their parents allowsthem almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choiceto help them grow upmentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl ； let herhave more friend
5、s and social activities ； and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文， 学生家 的博客 行回复。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：My idea is that，There are ， Some all-Astudents in school have， Thereason. is，So I suggest that等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种
6、句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。点睛：本文 构 凑， 言 。开 表明自己的看法，接下来 述自己的理由，最后介 自己的建 。此 turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, makemistakes, of one等s这own些 的运用也 文章增色不少。2（ 浙江中考模 ）假如你是李 ，是某英文 台“ Say it 目”的兼 。最近你收到一名叫王平的中学生发来的电子邮件，向你们栏目组求助。请你根据电子邮件内容给她回复一封电子邮件，帮助她解答困惑。Dear Li Hua,I m a middle sch
7、ool student. Recently I argued with my parents over using Wechat. You knowWechat has become a part of our everyday life, but my parents don t allow me to use it. What sworse, they have changed my password （密码）so that I can t use it. There has been a coldwar between us for over a week. What should I
8、do?Yours,Wang Ping要求：1语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；2词数 80-100参考词汇：欺骗左右，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。tick；许可 permissionDear Wang Ping,Im sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of usingWechat._I believe things will get better,YoursLi Hua【答案】 Dear Wang PingI m sorry to hear that you are h
9、aving problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact,your problem is very common . Cheer up and let s find a good way to solve it.You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is badfor your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parent
10、s worry about these things. In myopinion, communication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents abouthow to use Wechat properly? Try t elling them you won t use it for too long and won t use it whenyou are studying. What more. tell them you ll never add strangers without their
11、permission.I believe things will get better.YoursLi Hu【解析】【 解】 是一篇 用文写作，写一封回信。本 出了主要写作要点， 笔前要先 真 要点，确定写作内容，并适当 。根据内容可知本文主要是一般 在 和将来 ，写作中注意 点符号及大小写等 ，不要犯 法 。注意上下文之 的 关系， 意 。【点睛】 是一篇比 不 的作文。作者根据 目要求, 次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己 充的内容完成得也不 些内容都比 合文章的需要，意思也很 。文章中 用了一些比 好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these thing
12、s. In my opinion, communication isvery important. ； Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?3（ 阜宁 新世 中学中考模 ） 面表达初中的生活美好而短 。 近中考， 力 增，父母的 叨，老 的殷殷期望，自己的学 与梦想 是一副良方。 七月的你写一封信， 你身 存在的 ，你打算如何解决，鼓励自己生活 有 和 方。 根据以下提示写一封 自己的信。要求：1表达清楚， 法正确， 句通 ，上下文 ；2必 包括思 中所有的相关信息，并适当 ；3
13、 数： 100 左右（开 尾已 出，不 入 数）Dear Future Me,It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you I am so worried thatYour sincerely【答案】 It is pleasant to spare my free time to communicate with you I am so worried that I can t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two aspe
14、cts.First,I canignore my parents expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However, they are more worried about their children s exam as the final exam is approachingnd,. Secothere is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself.In order to adapt t
15、o the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Thenmaking friends and communicating with them can make me happier. Whatore, there exist s mdreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic （悲观的） . So never give in to the difficulties and stress easil
16、y. I believe I deserve having success.【解析】【详解】本文写给未来的自己，目的在于倾诉压力，寻求方法，并重拾信心。第一段指出导致压力的两个方面First,I cant ignore my parents expectation . Second, there is endless homework andtests every day.用 First, Second 点出。第二自然段提到释放压力的方法，应用In order to 表目的。用Whats more表递进结构。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties a
17、nd stresseasily 点题呼吁。整篇文章层次分明，结构紧凑。4（ 江苏中考模拟）今年初流浪地球在中国火热上映。影片故事设定在2075 年，讲述太阳即将毁火，已经不适合人类生存，而面对绝境，人类将开启“流浪地球 ”计划，试图带着地球一起逃离太阳系，寻找人类新家园的故事。影片多次提到“希望 ”。比如，老师问:希望是什么 ?班长回答 :希望是我们这个年代钻石一样的东西。你的笔友Demon 观看后，印象深刻，给你写了一封邮件。请你根据邮件内容结合你的情况，用英语回复。To: LiHuaChina. comFrom: Demon America. comSubject:Problems and
18、 hopeDear Li Hua,How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth . I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me
19、the following things?What problems do you often meet in your school life?How do you usually solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope?Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意： 1.词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计
20、入总词数;2.回复必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺;3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear DemonIm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it aswell._Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【答案】 Dear Demon，Im glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I
21、 also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and dont want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.In life, my English teacher has th
22、e greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always comes to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.I think hope is the driving force of all, as lon
23、g as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【解析】【详解】这是一篇书信作文。根据所给出的材料内容可知文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先要注意书信的书写格式，要对来信中的问题作出全面的答复。同时在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；
24、尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。5（ 河北育华中学中考模拟）你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。?请你内容包括：
25、1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。3.词数 80 个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy._【答案】 Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like thi
26、s. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday p
27、lan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of ， lastweekend， how to do ， play a game， a kin
28、d of ， spent more time on ， forget to do ， in the end， be angry with ， be going to do ， on the paper ， put up 等。而特殊非谓语动词结构 Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. 和 I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thin
29、g clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可
30、能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到 高的分数。6（ 天津中考模 ）假如你是天津的一名中学生李明， 東五一小 假的旅游回到学校。 你根据以下内容提示，以“A Trip to Beijing ，”写一篇短文，向你的同学 述一下你的北京之旅。（ 1） 5 月 1 日天气晴朗，我和家人开始了两天的旅程。（ 2）早上 7：30 我 乘京津城 路出 ， 程大 半小 。（ 3）上午我 参 了故 博物院，学到了 多 史知 ，并 朋友 了礼物。（ 4）第二天清晨，我 登上了 城，雄 的 城是世界著名奇 之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品 北京烤 。（ 5）我的旅游感受 参考 :京津城 路Beijing-
31、Tianjin Intercity Railway王府井大街Wangfujing Street故 the Palace Museum北京烤 Peking Roast Duck要求：（ 1） 数 :80100 个。（ 2）短文的 目和开 已 出，不 入 数。（ 3）要点 全，行文 ，可适当 。A Trip to BeijingDuring the May Day Holiday ，I_【答案】 During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on
32、the morning of May 1st, and we took the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and comfortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our two-day-trip in Beijing.First of all, we went to see the Palace Muse
33、um as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. Whats more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to
34、the theme of the Palace Museum.On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At th
35、at moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt ti
36、red after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.【解析】【详解】以 “A Trip to Beijing为题，”写一篇短文，向你的同学们讲述一下你的北京之旅。记叙自己的一次旅行，审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，叙述事实的时候以时间为顺序。用合适的连词把各句连接成一个有机的整体，同时要用相对高级的词汇提升文章的层次和文采。在发表你的看法的时候，写作的时候要注意要点的全覆盖，不能有遗漏或省略，同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章
37、更有亮点。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。We listened to the tourguide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. Whats more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.等这些句子运用也让文章增色不少。7（ 贵州遵义十一中中考模拟）亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触 .假如你是Tony,名城中学九（ 1）班的学生。请以My junior high school life为题 ,写一篇80 词左右的短文。提示：1.个人基本情况介绍2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。
