1、,复合句在写作中的运用：定语从句名词性从句状语从句,定语从句在写作中的运用,Tom went shopping. He was given extra change by mistake. He returned it. Honesty is the best policy.,The story is about Tom, _was given extra change by mistake and returned it honestly. And it tells us that honesty is the best policy.,Tell a story,Main points:,I
2、n the article, Tom was given extra money by mistake when shopping, but he returned it honestly, _tells us honesty is the best policy.,who,which,定语从句在基础写作中的运用,内 容：公共场所禁烟 实施时间：2011年1月1日起 实施范围：全国 目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟 措 施：张贴禁烟标志 相关数据： （1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿 （2）分 布：男性75;女性：25 （3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿 （4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年,实施时间：
3、2011年1月1日起 实施范围：全国 目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟,This ban, _aims to make all indoor public places smoke-free, will come into effectfrom the first day of 2011.,（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿 （2）分 布：男性75;女性：25,which,whom,（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿 （4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年,Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, _causes 100,00
4、0 deaths per year.,定语从句在写作中的作用:,1.整合信息,使意思更为明确 2.使句子结构更为紧凑,which,名词性从句在写作中的运用,play music,make,happy,they play music makes them happy.,That,The man,windows,broke,brought,trouble,the man broke the windowsbrought him trouble.,That,go,unknown,he,he is going is unknown.,Where,Where,talk about,the use of
5、cell phone,they are talking about is the use of cell phone.,What,What,overturn 打翻,the cat,overturned the paint,made,cry,the cat overturned the paint made the baby cry.,That,did,What,The child doesnt know the answer.,It makes the teacher angry.,That,t,瘦身 俱乐部,Where is the woman?,It is known to everybo
6、dy.,is,【拓展训练】尝试用以下句型翻译：Tom已被北京大学录取，这使我们大家很兴奋。1. 主语从句 _ 2. 定语从句 _ 3. 主语从句+表语从句 _ 4.同位语从句 _,That Tom has been admitted to BU makes us excited.,Tom has been admitted to BU, which makes us excited.,What makes us excited is that Tom has been admitted to BU.,The news that Tom has been admitted to BU makes
7、 us excited.,We study in the new teaching building. It makes everyone excited. We walk in the building. We are happy. We can enjoy many paintings and handwritings. We use our own works to decorate it . It is cool. Our school provides us convenience. It is the goal of our school. The cabinet is an ex
8、ample. We bring many things to school. We can put them in the cabinet. There is hot water too. How can we keep the teaching building clean and beautiful? We are discussing it.,That we are studying in the new teaching building makes everyone excited. Even walking in the building brings us happiness f
9、or we can enjoy many paintings and handwritings. It is cool that we use our own works to decorate it . To provide us convenience is the goal of our school. The cabinet is an example. What we bring to school can be kept in it. Besides, whenever we are thirsty there is hot water. Now, how we can keep
10、the teaching building clean and beautiful is being discussed.,状语从句在写作中的运用,Task 1: Study the proverbs,Actions speak louder than words.(adverbial clause of comparison)事实胜于雄辩。 When in Rome do as the Romans do.(adverbial clause of time, adverbial clause of manner)入乡随俗。,3. If a thing is worth doing, its
11、worth doing well.(adverbial clause of condition)凡值得一做的事都值得做好。,4. Where there is a will, there is a way.(adverbial clause of place)有志者，事竟成。,Task 2:Translate the following sentences using adverbial clause. 1.我正在街上走着，突然我遇到了一个老朋友。2.就算我可能失败一百次，我也不会放弃。3.只有当战争结束了，人们才能过上幸福的生活。,I was walking in the street wh
12、en I came across an old friend of mine.,Although I may fail a hundred times, I wont give up.,Only when the war was over could people live a happy life.,4. 无论发生什么事，他也不会改变主意。5. 这些问题这么难，以致没有一个学生能解答出来。,No matter what happens, he wont change his mind.,The problems were so difficult that none of the stude
13、nts could work them out.,So difficult were the problems that none of the students could work them out.,6.我刚出门，天就下起雨来了。7.直到老师告诉他答案，他才意识到自己的错误。,I had hardly gone out when it began to rain.,Hardly had I gone out when it began to rain.,He didnt realize his mistake until the teacher told him the answer.,
14、Not until the teacher told him the answer did he realize his mistake.,Task3: write a composition with 5 sentences according to the given situation:,昨天上午，你惊悉你的朋友李华被一辆汽车撞伤住了院，事情经过是：那天李华正要穿过大街，他很小心，直到看到绿灯亮时才开始过街。可当他刚要走到街心时，右侧突然出现了一辆轿车，径直朝他开来。他躲闪不及被撞出了几米远。他立即被送进医院并动了手术。昨晚你去看他时，他虽已脱险，但仍然脸色苍白。 参考词汇：躲闪：dod
15、ge 右侧：right-hand side,（1）穿过大街时他很小心，直到看到绿灯亮时才开始过街,（2）刚要走到街心时，右侧突然出现了一辆轿车，径直朝他开来。,（3）躲闪不及被撞出了几米远,（5）虽已脱险，但仍然脸色苍白 。,记叙文,记事的文章,过去时,（4）立即被送进医院并动了手术,（1） The other day he was going to cross a street. He was very cautious and didnt go until he saw the traffic light turn green.（2） But hardly had he got to th
16、e middle of the street when a car suddenly appeared on his right-hand side and came directly towards him. （3） It was too late for Li Hua to dodge and as a result he was hit by the car and thrown a few miles away. （4） He was rushed to hospital in no time . （5） Although (he was) out of danger, he still looked pale when I went to see him last night.,
