1、,全椒三中,王宏霞,How to Better a Piece of Writing,How to Better a Piece of Writing,Better the layout (布局) Better the grammar （语法） Better the vocabulary (词汇) Better the sentences （句子） Better the logic (逻辑),How can we make the writing better ?,Better the layout (布局),How to make the writing better,Step 1,A be
2、tter layout can make the writing more clear.,Basic layout 基本结构,Paragraph 1,Paragraph 2,Paragraph 3,introduction 引入,details 细节,conclusion 总结,为了更好地开展全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。要点提示: 1. 阅读的重要性。 2. 你的建议。（如建更多小型图书馆，经常性地 介绍好书等）,要求： 1. 词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。 2.
3、 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。,书面表达,A piece of writing from a student(学生作文）,Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can makes us feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build l
4、ots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people will be more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quietly and clean. It is a public place. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. I hope my advices could be good . More people will like reading.,Do y
5、ou think it is a good piece of writing? Why or why not?,Para. 3 conclusion,Para. 2 details,Put the writing into a better layout.,Para. 1 introduction,Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing.,I wan
6、t to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people are more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quiet and clean. It is public place. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the gro
7、und.,I wish my advices could be good . More people will like reading.,Better the grammar,Step 2,Grammar plays a very important role in English writing!,How to make the writing better,Common mistakes in grammar 常见语法错误,Parts of speech 词性,Forms of words 词的形式,Tenses of verbs 动词时态,Example,Xiao Ming is a
8、middle school student. He doesnt learn English careful at all. At home, he enjoys watch TV. He always forgot to go over his English lessons.,carefully,watching,forgets,Parts of speech 词性,Forms of words 词的形式,Tenses of verbs 动词时态,Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us.
9、 It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people will be more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room
10、quietly and clean. It is a public place. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground.I hope my advices could be good. More people will like reading.,Find the grammatical mistakes,make,relaxed,suggestions,advice,quiet,Better the vocabulary (词汇),Step 3,Better vocabulary can make the writing more
11、vivid (生动的) and meaningful.,How to make the writing better,1. 我希望你能帮助我。,A. I hope you can help me. B. I look forward to your help.,2. 他们冲出教室去吃饭。,A. They rushed out of the classroom for lunch. B. They walked out of the classroom for lunch.,How can we better the vocabulary ?,Wonderful phrases ( 短语) ca
12、n be used instead of common words.,More suitable words can also be used according to the context (上下文).,1. We should keep the reading room quiet and clean.2. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground.3. I hope my advice can be good. More people will like reading.,noise,throw / drop,are suppos
13、ed to,useful,enjoy,Turn the underlined words into better ones.,Better the sentences,Step 4,Better sentences can make the writing more attractive (有吸引力的).,How to make the writing better,1. 他得了第一名，感到很惊喜。,He won the first place. He was surprised. B. He was surprised to win the first place.,A. I find it
14、 really interesting to learn English . B. Learning English is interesting, I think.,2. 我认为学英语很有趣。,How can we better the sentences?,Simple sentences can be put into complex sentences (复合句) for better.,Better sentence patterns （句型) can be used to improve the writing.,1. I want to make more people like
15、 reading. I have some good suggestions._ _ _ make more people like reading, I have some good suggestions. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. Lots of small libraries can _ _ in the city. 3. You cant make noise, and you cant throw rubbish on the ground.You are not _ _ make any noise _ t
16、hrow rubbish on the ground.,In order to,be built,allowed to,Turn the sentences below into better ones.,or,Better the logic (逻辑),Step 5,A better logic can make readers have a better understanding of the writing.,How to make the writing better,表并列：and, both and; as well as 表转折：but, yet, however, thoug
17、h 表因果：because, so, as a result 表递进：not onlybut also; besides 表结果：so that ; such that ; 表先后：First, Second, Third, Finally 表时间：when, after, before, as soon as ,Linking words (连接词),How can we better the logic ?,I like Liu Qian.,He is a creative magician.,I like Liu Qian _ he is a creative magician.,bec
18、ause,Make sentences with linking words.,He did magic shows _ well _everyone was surprised.,so that,CCTV Spring Festival Gala,_ he is very young, he has won many prizes.,Although,Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading isvery important for us. It can _ _make us understand the world, _ _ make
19、us feel relaxed. In order to make more people like reading, I have some good suggestions. _, lots of small libraries can be built in the city. _, if there are more new books, people will be more interested in reading. _, we are supposed to keep the reading room quiet and clean. It is a public place,
20、 _ you are not allowed to make noise or throw rubbish on the ground.I hope my advice could be useful, _more people will enjoy reading.,not only,but also,Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly/ Finally/ lastly,so,and,Fill in the blanks with suitable linking words.,layout (布局) 2.grammar （语法） 3.vocabulary (词汇) 4.sen
21、tences （句子） 5.logic (逻辑),What is a good piece of writing ?,three paragraphs,few or no mistakes,suitable(phrases),complex sentences,suitable linking words according to relations,Writing Task,英语课堂上，老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，以“How to Get on Well with Others” 为题，写一篇英语短文。要点提示：1. 与人友好相处的重要性。2. 如何与人友好
22、相处的建议。要求：1. 词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出。2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。,As we all know, its very important for us to get on well with others. _,How to Get on Well with Others,What do you think of this writing according to what we have learned today?,Group Discussion,How to Get on Well with Others As we all know, its
23、 very important for us to get on well with others. If you can do that, you will have many friends.How can we get along well with others? Here I have some suggestions. Firstly, sharing is very important. We can have many friends if we share with others. Secondly, learn to respect others. Everyone likes making friends with people who respect them. Thirdly, we should communicate with each other, because communication can make us popular. In a word, getting along well with each other will lead to a better world.,Practice makes perfect !,Thank you.,
