1、1短文改错专项训练下 面 短 文 中 每 篇 各 有 10 处 错 误 ， 错 误 涉 及 一 个 单 词 的 增 加 、 删 除 或 修 改 。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（） ，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分Passage 1It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007 I was walking along Park Road towards the east whi
2、le an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road He fell with a cry The car didnt stop and drive off at full speed heading west I
3、noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864 After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital Passage 2I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three st
4、udents have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, Ill unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really cant accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind
5、 at rest after a days hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldnt be forbidden to watch TV.Passage 3Dear sir,Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find so
6、mething is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I wi
7、ll at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.2CustomerLi MingPassage 4I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best f
8、riends. Three years ago, Li Mings parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father
9、has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we havent see each other much. But weve kept writing to each other.Passage 5I feel quite sure the chemistry test that were going to have tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has bee
10、n goodIn a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test. Passage 6Dear Susan,
11、Im very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I wont be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You wont find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship
12、Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and well talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang MingPassage 7Some day I happened to find a chatting room in m
13、y QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral Eng
14、lish on QQ. Day by day I learned from 3many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely. Passage 8If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily a
15、bout foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their gre
16、at achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success. Passage 9Dear Mary,I receive your E-mail just now. Dont worry about me. Im getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you h
17、ave not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. Im afraid I couldnt agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life.
18、If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I m looking forward to hearing good news from you.Yours,Li HuaPassage 10Dear Ralph, I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have t
19、hree roommates, and I was the last one to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They dont talk with me, and theyve become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed
20、to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why dont I win true friendship?4Passage 11When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle that was only one hundred yuan. I a
21、sked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other when fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was wh
22、en I rode to school on my own bicycle.Passage 12Today is the happy day in this holiday. Although I was very tired, but I found myself in these busy days.I am afraid of taken a bus usually, the awful smell of the bus drive I mad, make me feel carsick. But today I did feel carsick. I can defeat carsic
23、kness finally. At night I went out with an old friend who I ever like him, but all of us were busy in the examination at the high school that we hadnt been together. I was such surprised as I received his calling. At first, I thought we would never meet before we graduated. Thank him gave me a happy
24、 day! Passage 13Dancing is my hobby and otherwise, when I heard there would be a get-together to celebrate the 60th National Day in the evening of October 1st, I signed up for the performance. Luckily, I become a member of the dance group. During the summer vacation, I practiced hard with others reg
25、ardless of the cold weather. After the new school term began, when I carried on with the practice while I was working hard at my studies. And finally, the great day came. In the evening, thousands people gathered in the splendid Tiananmen Square. By the bright lights shining around, we were dancing
26、to the pleasant music happily and joyful. Beautiful fireworks in the clear night sky added to my excited. It was realty an unforgettable experience.Passage 14Most families in China hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. So do teachers in scho
27、ol! Many children are given so much homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder such many children are tired of lessons. Some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people already read this kind of
28、 news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldnt we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our government is making out a plan to solve the education problems.5参考答案Passage 1It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007 I was walking along Park Road towards the oneast while an old man came out of the park on
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