1、2003年高考英语满分作文（十篇）作文题目 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为 25平方米，月租 500元。 注意：1词数：100 左右： 2参考词汇：房租Tent(n.). 满分作文（一）Dear Bob, Im very happy to receive your letter, and Im glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already founda
2、 fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stopbefore the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a de
3、sk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiatis not as good as your wish, but Ill try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place. Hope you will come here soon! All the be
4、st! Yours, Li Hua 满分理由本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以which，引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。 满分作文（二）Dear Bob, Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you. I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin ChineseSchool. It is on the third floor and therere three roo
5、ms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rentis 500 yuan per month. Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is
6、onlyone stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then IU be able to meet you at the airport, see you. Best wishes ! Yours, Li Hua 满分理由本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。满分作文（三）Dear Bob, How are you these days? Im so glad to know that youll come
7、to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now Ive found one whichI think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. Its just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School. There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though
8、it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope youll likeit. If not, Ill try to find another place for you. Yours, Li Hua 满分理由本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。满分作文（四）Dear Bob, Im so glad tha
9、t you are coming to learn Chinese here. Ive already found you a house near our school. Id like to tell you something about it. You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It isabout 25 square metres. In the bedroom, the
10、re is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is500
11、yuan per month. Hope youll enjoy staying here! Yours, Li Hua 满分理由本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。满分作文（五）Dear Bob, Im glad to hear from you. Welcome to our city in september. Ive found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from t
12、he Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop. It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there i
13、s a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month. Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. Ill try my best to help you. Yours, Li Hua 满分理由本文内容详
14、实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not far from等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。满分作文（六）Dear Bob, Im excited when I received your letter. Im very glad to hear that youll come to our city to learn Chinese. Ive found a flat for you, but I dont know whether you like it or not. The flat has three rooms: a bathroom, a k
15、itchen and a living-room. There is a sofa, a bed and a table in the living-room. The flatis about twenty-five square metres. The rent is five hundred yuan every month. The building of the flat is on Fangcao Street, not far from the school. You can take Bus No.11 to Jianxin Chinese school. Its only o
16、ne stop. Do you like it? If you dont, Ill help you tolook for another one. Im waiting for your letter! Yours, Li Hua 满分理由本文语言运用朴实自然，表述清晰，无雕饰痕迹，行文合乎逻辑，从开头的“excited”到结尾的“waiting for”，内容完整详实。满分作文（七）Dear Bob, Im glad you will come to learn Chinese in September. Im surewe will have a good time together.
17、Ive found a fiat for you. Its on Fangcao Street near the school. You can take Bus No.11 to go to the Jianxin Chinese School. The fiat is 25 square meters. There is a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. Its
18、 a good flat, isnt it? I hope youll like it. When you come, tell me the exact time. Ill meet you. Yours, Li Hua 满分理由本文用简单实用的短语介绍一个相对复杂的内容，使入一目了然。本文另一个特色是语言亲切自然，合乎逻辑，Im sure”、Its a goodisnt it?”等。满分作文（八）Dear Bob, Im very glad to hear from you and know that you are coming in September. I have already
19、found you a flat and I want to tell you something about it. It is 25 square meters with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. There is a bed and a sofa in the bedroom and also a desk, a chair under the window where there is enough light in the daytime. Well, the flat is on the third floor of a buildi
20、ng on Fangcao Street which is near the Jianxin Chinese School. From the flat you can take the No.11 bus for only one stop and the stop is just outside your school. Does it satisfy you? If not, please just let me know andI will find you another one. Well, I have to stop now. Expecting your coming. Yo
21、urs, Li Hua 满分理由本文语言朴实亲切，字里行间情真意切，无微不至，“where theres enough light in the daytime”、“Does it satisfy you?”等，另外定语从句用得十分自然，全无刻意雕饰的生硬之感。满分作文（九）Dear Bob, Im very glad to hear that you will come here to start your Chinese lesson in September. Ive found a flat, a 25-square-meter one, which includes a bedroo
22、m, a bathroom, and a kitchen for you with the rent 500 Yuan per month. It is on the third floor. In the bedroomthere is a chair, a desk, a bed and a sofa. By the way, the flat is on Fangcao street, not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there. What the most convenient is that it
23、s only one block between the school and your flat. If you come here, you will find it a good place for you to live in. What do you think of it? And its essential for me to know your earliest reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 满分理由长句的使用，复合句的使用是本文获满分的重要因素，比如“Ive foundper month”内容丰富、详实，而且结构多变，一句话表达了 4个方面的内
24、容，作为书面语是很独特也很实用的，再有“what the most convenient is”主语从句的使用也很抢眼。 满分作文（十）Dear Bob, I have found a place for you to live in. The room is on FangcaoStreet, which is only one stop distant from Jianxin Chinese School.You can take No.11 Bus there. Its a small fiat with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. And it is only 25 square meters. The rent is 500 Yuan every month. In the bedroom, there is a sofa, a bed, a chair and a desk. Do you like it? If not, please tell me and I will find another room for you. Yours, Li Hua 满分理由本文是短句使用最成功的一个例子，文中仅有一处用到了定语从句，其他全部由短句构成，言简意赅，清晰明了，主旨明确，也很上口，意思表达也很完整。
