1、Continuation writing,Mac,Macs friends,Who:,How the story begins,When:,What:,On a bright, warm July afternoon,Cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends.,friends,bicycle,pedaled,home,jumped,cars,Paul,Mac,wolf,climb,On the way,Mac saw a wolf quickly catching up with him.,friends,bicycle,pedaled,
2、home,jumped,cars,climb,Paul,How the story develops,Mac,wolf,His heart jumped!,Verbs!,How the story develops,fired the spray at the wolf, red cloud enveloped it.,fired a second time,restart the chase,pedaling hard, waved and yelled at passing cars,tearing into his flesh,friends,bicycle,pedaled,home,j
3、umped,cars,climb,Paul,Mac,wolf,tearing open his tent bag,Verbs!,Wolf!-His heart jumped!,How the story develops:,friends,bicycle,pedaled,home,jumped,cars,climb,Paul,Mac,wolf,Help !,Flesh !,What did Mac do in the last minute?,He pulled in front of the car that Paul and Becky were driving.,Wolf!,Where
4、is the story heading?,What kind of ending might the following sentences imply? “A bright, warm July afternoon” “As Mac pedaled along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.”,if your heart hammers, its beating strongly
5、and quickly = pound She stood outside the door, her heart hammering.throw yourself at/on/into/down etc to move or jump somewhere suddenly and with a lot of force He threw himself into the water.,Plotting,Where is the story heading?,if your heart hammers, its beating strongly and quickly = pound She
6、stood outside the door, her heart hammering.throw yourself at/on/into/down etc to move or jump somewhere suddenly and with a lot of force He threw himself into the water.,Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him.the climax of the storyParagraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.the ending,