1、2012广州一模,基础写作必用句型,do a survey on sth among sb carry out a survey about sth among sbsurvey sb on sth (whether、how+句子),1 他们将就人们过去20年的生活如何改变做一个调查 2 上周我们在2600个学生中对“who is your idol “做了一个调查3 近来我在我的同学中做了一个有关他们对新的英语教科书看法的调查4 近来我在高三学生中做了一个有关体育锻炼的调查,10% of the ,I recently surveyed my classmates about their v
2、iews on the new English textbook,Recently I made a survey of senior 3 students on physical training.,Last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students about “Who is your idol?”,Theyll carry out a survey on how peoples life has changed in the past 20 years .,They carried out a survey about how peoples
3、 life has changed in the past 20 years .Last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students about “Who is your idol?”I recently surveyed my classmates about their views on the new English textbook.Recently I made a survey of senior 3 students on physical training.,I recently surveyed my classmates abou
4、t their views on the new English textbook. According to the survey, 80% of the students were quite satisfied with it , _15% disliked it and 5% had no opinion. Students who liked it said the pictures with the texts were very attractive, which greatly aroused their interests in learning. Moreover, the
5、 book was very interesting, covering many hot topics and providing lots or cultural knowledge of the world. _, students who disliked it complained there were too many new words and difficult sentences, making the texts difficult to understand. In conclusion, the new English textbook has helped most
6、students improve their English enormously.,while,However,1.调查问题及调查对象；2.主要活动；3.感受及原因；4.期望。,Recently we surveyed 368 middle school students on how they spent the 2012 Spring Festival. 30% said they spent most of their time with their parents visiting relatives and friends while 25% went traveling with
7、 classmates or parents. 45% of all those surveyed indicated that they just stayed at home to do homework. (When asked how they felt about the Spring Festival), most said they enjoyed it because they received lots of lucky money, but some felt unhappy because the amount of homework they were given le
8、ft them having no time for fun activities. Many students expressed the hope that next year they will have less homework and more free time.,你参加学校的研究学习小组并对高三学生的体育运动的状况进行研究。最近你对高三学生的体育活动现状进行了调查。 【写作内容】请根据下列图例，用英语写一篇报告，并陈述你的观点。,【写作辅导】 1.写作有可能用到的主要短语和单词： 设施 facility， 提供资金的援助 offer some financial aid，体育活
9、动 physical activities， 体育训练 physical training， 健康状况差 be in poor health。 2.本文因为是对高三学生的体育活动现状进行了调查，属于普遍性问题，故应该使用一般现在时作为主流时态。,Recently I made a survey among senior 3 students on physical training. Only 35% of the surveyed students do sports. The reasons are as follows, half of the students having too m
10、uch homework and not enough time to do exercise, 30% of them complaining about no places where they can relax themselves and not enough training facilities, 10% living too far away from the places and some even not knowing how to take exercise. Because of the lack of physical activities, many studen
11、ts are in poor health, so we should realize the importance of taking exercise, and measures should be taken to improve the present situation. It would be greatly appreciated that our government and social organizations as well could offer some financial aid.,基础写作(共1小题，满分15分) 上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题， 在2600名
12、学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。 以下是调查数据： 偶 像 (idol)女 生男 生伟 人18 %18 %父 母25 %11 %影视明星50 %14 %体育明星6 %48 %（没有偶像）1 %9 % 写作内容 根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异； 4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；5你的偶像及理由。,Last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students about “Who is your idol?” The survey shows
13、 that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for m
14、e, Thomas Edison is my idol, because his inventions have greatly changed our life.,你们班同学上周五就“应该送什么样的礼物给同学或朋友”的话题展开了讨论，下面是讨论记录：,你的看法,As far as I am concerned ,it is better for usto make presents by ourselves because The receiver can sense our love and bestwishes to them in gifts made by us 957,Last F
15、riday ,our class made a discussion about what should be presents for friends or classmates .The results are as follows : 60% people thought it good to buy presents in shops where the gifts are elegant and beautiful ,they are fit for being prizes .The rest supported that they could make it themselves
16、 ,and they held the idea that not only can it show oneselfs talent ,but help to strengthen the aware of saving as well .As far as Im concerned ,making presents by yourself is a special way to show your wishes to your friends ,which they could feel the sincerely love from you,Find errors in the follo
17、wing sentences,1 Most of the students considered that we should present a goods as a gift 2 Our class had a discussion about presents for classmates and friends on last Friday . 3 It is a good choice to give presents buying from shop . 4 If without time ,we have no choice but to buy the gift from st
18、ores.,They had a debate on whether they should stop vehicleson the high way to rescue the dogs,Our class had a heated discussion last Friday on what gifts we should give to our classmates and friends. Sixty percent of our classmates said that they would buy gifts from a shop because they think such
19、gifts are delicate and pretty, thus proper for giving. However, the others prefer to make the gifts by themselves. On the one hand, this can show their personal outstanding skills and help them develop their abilities to do things themselves and on the other hand, they can use materials from home to
20、 make gifts, which can strengthen their awareness of importance of saving. In my opinion, giving gifts made by ourselves is a better way to express our feelings.,consider / believe,Dear mum,Ive just received your email expressing your concern that I am being distracted from my studies because of my
21、many after-school activities and the consequences of this for my future.(或Ive just received your email expressing your concern about my participation in so many after-school activities, the effect of this on my study performance and its consequences for my future) I appreciate what you say and am so
22、rry to have caused you so much worry. Im also touched that you understand my reasons for being attracted to such activities.Its true that I have been spending a lot of time with these groups but please dont worry. I find that these groups help me to relax, develop my thinking and actually improve my
23、 school performance, although my teacher is right that I do sometimes feel tired in class.来源:Z.xx.k.ComFor this reason, and to also relieve you of your worry, I have decided to limit my participation to only two groups this term. This way I can still enjoy the outside activities without affecting ei
24、ther you or my study performance.,第二节 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的书信，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Dear David,I am writing you this email because youre so busy every day with your studies and after-school activities that we seldom have chances to talk face-to-face. There is something that I am very worried about.Y
25、ou have always been an active boy, willing to help others and always looking for an opportunity to try something new or learn something different. I think these are wonderful qualities but I am concerned that they may be affecting your studies. In the past three months alone you have joined at least
26、 four different student clubs. I see these activities taking up more and more of your time. Youre always discussing something with your classmates or surfing online. Youre also devoting less time to homework and even your teachers say you are looking very sleepy in class.I know that these kinds of a
27、ctivities are fun and can help your development, but I think they have started to damage your performance at school. Please remember the most important thing at this stage of your life is your studies. Right now you should do your best in your examinations as it will give you more choices is your fu
28、ture. I beg you to focus on your main goal and not to throw away all your years of hard work Your loving mother 【写作内容】 1. 以约30词概括书信的主要内容。 2. 以约120词谈谈你对参加学校社团或俱乐部活动的看法，内容包括：（1） 你读信后的感受；（2） 你是否赞成你妈妈的观点，并陈述理由；（3） 你对你妈妈的承诺。,认真审题，审体裁，抓要点,Dear mum,Ive just received your email expressing your concern that
29、I am being distracted from my studies because of my many after-school activities and reminds me of the consequences for my future.,letter,Summary 2,Dear mum ,Ive just received your email expressing your concern about my over-participation in after-school activities which has a bad effect on my study
30、 performance and reminding me of its consequences for my future,Dear mum ,I am sorry to keep you concerned about my study performance and future due to my over-participation after-school activities .,你对参加学校社团或俱乐部活动的看法你 1读信后的感受；,Thank you for reminding me of the importance of my study .Reading your l
31、etter ,regrets and appreciation are filled with my heart and soul. I appreciate what you say and am sorry to have caused you so much worry. Im also touched that you understand my reasons for being attracted to such activities.,Its true that I have been spending a lot of time with these groups but pl
32、ease dont worry. I find that these groups help me to relax, develop my thinking and actually improve my school performance, although my teacher is right that I do sometimes feel tired in class. On the other hand ,as a Senior 3 student, I should be ambitious enough to attach great importance to my le
33、ssons. After all ,time and tide wait for no man . So I will try my best to balance activities and study , trying to make activities help refresh myself to study more efficiently .,（2）对于学校社团或俱乐部活动，你是否赞成你 妈妈的观点，并陈述理由；,你对你妈妈的承诺,Now I have made up my mind to limit my participation to only two groups thi
34、s term and hope to relieve you of your worry.,Therefore I will spare no efforts to break away from the busy social activities, instead, I will attach enough importance to my study and devote myself to my lessons to struggle for a bright future.,Dear Patti,Im writing to you for some advice on my stud
35、ies. As you know, football is a very popular sport in the world and I am attracted to it and I have fallen in deep love with it, which makes me feel so crazy. I have been spending lots of time doing many things related to it, like watching football matches, reading newspapers and magazines, and sear
36、ching the Web for more information about football. As a result, it has certainly disturbed my normal study. Though I know to be a football fan is my hobby and my major objective is to learn. I am still a senior two middle school student, and Ill have my own business even when I grow up, so I am not
37、likely to do a job in the field of football. But now I cant stop myself from getting involved further with football. So I feel very de pressed and want to know how to deal with the contradiction (矛盾) between my studies and hobbies. Yours sincerely,Li Ming,Dear Li Ming,Thank you for your letter. From
38、 your letter. Ive known something about your situation. You are very depressed because of the contradiction that you cant tear yourself away from football, which has been disturbing you so much that you cant concentrate on you lessons.Hobbies are very important to a person, without which life wont b
39、e as colorful as it should be. They can cheer you up and improve your comprehensive abilities, but they also require time and devotion. You are still a student, whose main task should be gaining knowledge, so you must know which is more important thing to do in different life periods. Otherwise, you
40、 would regret having been too much addicted to that in the future. A hobby is like gold under the ground, and it will not come to you unless you dig it out yourself. If you can treat study as one of your hobbies, it will be more enjoyable. I hope you can find yourself in the right place and have fun
41、 from your study.Yours sincerely,Patti,have an interview with sb about sth interview sb about sth,Last Wednesday ,I had an interview with Mr. Wang, an English teacher, concerning the issue of English word spelling among middle school students . According to Mr. Wang , slightly more than half of the
42、senior middle students English handwriting are very poor, and about 45%of them can not spell words correctly although they are able to speak .He also pointed out that the causes for spelling problems are that there are no specific word spelling checks in exams ,and there are no enough training .Wors
43、e still ,the students are lazy to memorize. He suggested that we should raise the awareness and place great emphasis on that ,and above all ,we should master skills while we are training ourselves.,Habits ,whether good or bad ,are gradually formed by an unseen force. Once formed, they are hard or even impossible to get rid of .So for your good ,break them and build smart ones.,
