1、 中鸿智业信息技术有限公司缩写写作指导缩写就是在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下，对原文的字数、篇幅加以缩减的写作练习。它要求学生适当改写某些句子，组织材料，摘取一些要点连接成文，使之成为一个有机的统一体。例文赏析将下列文章缩写成 180 个单词左右的短文。Once upon a time there were six blind men who lived in a village in India. Every day they went to the road nearby and stood there begging. They had often heard of elep
2、hants, but they had never seen one, for being blind, how could they?One morning an elephant was led down the road where they stood. When they heard that an elephant was passing by, they asked the driver to stop the beast so that they could have a “look“.Of course they could not look at him with thei
3、r eyes, but they thought they might learn what kind of animals he was by touching and feeling him. For, you see, they trusted their own sense of touch very much.The first blind man happened to place his hand on the elephant s side. “Well, well,“ he said. “This beast is exactly like a wall.“The secon
4、d grasped one of the elephants tusks and felt it. “Youre quite mistaken, “he said. “Hes round and smooth and sharp. Hes more like a spear than anything else.“The third happened to take hold of the elephants trunk. “You re both completely wrong, “he said. “This elephant is like a snake, as anybody ca
5、n see.“The fourth opened both his arms and closed them round one of the elephant s legs. “Oh, how blind you are! “he cried. “Its very clear that hes round and tall like a tree.“The fifth was a very tall man, and he caught hold of one of the elephant s ears. “Even the blindest person must see that th
6、is elephant isnt like any of the things you name, “he said. “Hes exactly like a huge fan.“The sixth man went forward to feel the elephant. He was old and slow and it took him quite some time to find the elephant at all. At last he got hold of the beasts tail. “Oh, how silly you all are!“ cried he. “
7、The elephant isnt like a wall, or a spear, or a snake, or a tree; neither is he like a fan. Any man with eyes in his head can see that hes exactly like a rope.“Then the driver and the elephant moved on, and the six men sat by the roadside all day, quarrelling about the elephant. They could not agree
8、 with one another, because each believed that he knew just what the beast looked like.It is not only blind men who make such stupid mistakes. People who can see sometimes act just as foolishly.析：此文缩写要以六个盲人摸象为主要线索来组织材料，要做到内容全面概括，语言通顺、简练，不能摘录原文中的句子生硬地拼凑。范文： 中鸿智业信息技术有限公司The story is about six blind men
9、 in India who quarrelled about an elephant. Since they had never seen an elephant before, they wanted to know very much what it was like.One day an elephant was driven down the road where the blind men stood begging. They asked the driver to stop the beast so that they might learn what it was like b
10、y touching and feeling it.The first blind man happened to touch the elephants side and thought it was like a wall. The others got hold of its tusk, trunk, leg, ear and tail, and so they had different ideas about the animal. They began to quarrel because each of them believed he knew exactly what the elephant looked like. They could not agree with one another, so they quarrelled and quarrelled.The story tells us that people sometimes make foolish mistakes as the blind men when they take a one-sided view of things.
