1、初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导,brainstorm,Teenagerscolorful life,We study .,We like listening to music.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often play Sports.,We go to KFC .,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,Teenagershealthy life,We study all day.,We like listening to music
2、.,We play computer games for long.,We like reading books.,We often play Sports.,We go to KFC.,Sometimes we travel.,Sometimes we stay up studying.,colorful,healthy,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行
3、假日休闲。,审,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点,如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your v
4、acation.,列,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.,Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a ni
5、ce body,加,加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,3 2 1 4 6 5,Second , we should keep quiet in the library. First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in o
6、ur daily life. Whats more, we ought to return books on time. Our school rules are good for us, I will try my best to follow them. Third , we must do lots of homework.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home
7、. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; 2.表示选择: or, eitheror; 3.表示转折
8、: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, lat
9、er, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking,关联词,Lets play the game.,_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doin
10、g kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friend
11、s or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,连,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . The
12、n some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美,美,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,Skill One M
13、ake your sentences correct,Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream.,once a week,Saving,be,achieve,Skill Two Express in different ways,Our parents really wish us to work har
14、d. Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study. The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the computers.We shouldnt eat junk food.We should stay away from the junk food.When he spoke, he got more excited.The more he spoke, the more excited he got.We should learn English
15、grammar.Its important to learn English grammar.,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,中考作文评分标准,第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表 达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,书面表达,以 “I have a dream”为题写
16、一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。 Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型供参考） My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/prefer To make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true,I have a dream Have you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool! Yeah, its my dream to be a professional bike rider. I fell
17、in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, Ive been riding for 5 years. Some people think its dangerous, I dont think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting? That is! To make my dream come true, Ill practice more after mid
18、dle school. Also, Ill watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I can enjoy the life I like best.,Passage One,I have a dream Anybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams. Most people always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is
19、very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire theyre free, they can do everything they want. When theyre flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even theyre the most beautiful animals. I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky. However, I know i
20、t wont be achieved any more. Its just a dream, in my heart.,Passage Two,Passage Three,I have a dream My dream is to be a basketball player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me become very happy and healthy. To make me dream come true. I need try to do it. And I need take so
21、me time to do it. I need practice every day. If my dream come true, I will more thy to do it.,Homework,自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学生觉的好，有些学生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的刊物上，开头已经写好。I did a survey about whether middle school students should run 1500 meters every
22、 day. Here are the results.,Thank you !,All of us have holidays in our daily life, but how do people spend their holiday? We did a survey and here are the results. from Cai Piaoli,Its nothing better than having a rest after working ! So how do people rest themselves on vacation? According to our sur
23、vey, there are several ways. from Zhang Shiyi,All in all, different people have different ways to relax themselves. But I suggest that we should enjoy the holiday, then we may work better. from Liu Miao,So this year, why not consider going outside? Spend your healthy holiday and then get more energy for work or study. from Wu You,
