1、,civilized school,双中 苏冬梅,composition,“学校是我家，文明靠大家！”作为中学生，我们应积极参与文明学校(civilized school)的建设。请根据以下标语的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。,1. 文明用语我来说，文明行为我来做。2. 草儿绿、花儿香，环境优美人健康。3. 安全意识，时时不可忘，文明之道，刻刻铭记心。 respect(尊敬); be polite to; obey(遵守); traffic rules; zebra crossing(斑马线),审题，列提纲,Beginning(已给) Body1.用语，行为2.环境
2、3.文明出行 Ending 能收尾呼应最好,尊敬老师和同学 Respect our teachers and classmates对别人友好be polite to others 我们应常把“谢谢”“对不起”长挂嘴边。 We should always remember to say “thank you” and “sorry”.,1. 文明用语我来说，文明行为我来做。,2. 草儿绿、花儿香，环境优美人健康。,We shouldnt pick flowers and walk on the grass.,(pick),(Walk on ),We mustnt throw litter any
3、where, we should put it into the dustbin.,(litter),3.安全意识，时时不可忘，文明之道，刻刻铭记心。,we must obey the traffic rules on the way to school and home.,(obey),When we cross the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustnt cross the street when the traffic lights are red.,(zebra crossing),让我们尽自己最大的努
4、力使校园变得更美，使之成为文明校园。 Lets try our best to make our school more beautiful and make it a civilized school.,连句成篇，注意时态,Our school is now making its effort to become a civilized school. As students, what should we do?We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in
5、 need and be friendly to the people around us. And we should always remember to say thank you and sorry .,Besides, we must obey the traffic rules on the way to school and home. When we cross the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustnt cross the street when the traffic lights are red.,Whats more, we should protect our environment. For example, we mustnt walk on the grass and pick flowers . Litter mustnt be thrown everywhere.Lets try our best to make our school more beautiful and make it a civilized school.,
