1、十天搞定托福作文笔记 (来自taisha http:/bbs.taisha.org/thread-1093010-1-1.html) 首先在前面说一句，为什么要把准备托福作文的笔记发在GRE作文版：0 K7 C# b: “ e6 d, A 1、很多考G的朋友没有考过T，反而忽略了很多基础的东西。 2、本人考过G，5天后考T，直至前天仍然觉得这本书上如下内容的可操作性很强，遂与各位分享。 3、支持Dincyfeng版主的年度大帖。6 n! L0 B6 m) 2 Y8 Z. I( E 4、攒人品。# F3 H$ N7 t+ B t“ c# L) ( 陈述完毕，有兴趣的浏览一下即可 , n$ m (
2、 T4 _( O* U 献给calmvalianceyy # z$ S1 w q) _ F 增加过渡段： A1好。 A1好，而且A2好。（这个“而且”，可以用科技发展啊技术进步啊之类的扩充） A2好。* S0 0 K! L / d6 R5 F3 D% 0 p+ v With the development of science and technology, more and more companies (including international companies and small companies) are founded, but there are not enough p
3、eople to take these positions. So a large number of working opportunities are provided to people who are still teenager students. In some countries, some people think if teenagers do a job while they are still studying in school, it may have a bad impact on their grade. Others consider that teenager
4、s should have jobs while they are still students. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter. Because teenagers can learn amount of useful experience through working and they think through the job they will acquire some knowledge of how to get a good relationship with others. u g. X n! j) j-
5、p8 e; r 3、2 v) h- r$ X9 l6 I ) q8 g/ q8 r定义式：7 a: $ |0 z: i6 V1 H 3 ( ?0 S; Technology refers to skills, knowledge, and techniques that human beings use in their daily life and work. As everybody may find, technology develops day by day. How does the development of technology affect our life? Many p
6、eople hold the opinion that it is due to the development of technology that human beings have access to the comfortable modern life. On the other hand, a number of people are always aware of all kinds of destructive influence of the technological development on us. As far as I am concerned, the deve
7、lopment of technology does far more good than harm to peoples happiness. , _, K7 X: $ K“ F$ : T5 Y j/ y% - M 8 + i! y+ _8 x+ a 正文部分每段安排： 13行主题句- : p/ C+ P+ S 48行细节论述 12行主题再现。/ y3 4 : P0 A; Q 0 O4 “ c1 e# x h“ f. o; U; n“ M1 ( t 主题句的要求：5 B+ X/ E2 f1 G. 7 s 1、8 N“ C$ * X+ W# / v; X要有概括性：5 F0 7 S: W U
8、Eg -. When I work in daytime, other people are also working, so I can work more efficiently. Eg +. Outside environment during daytime helps to promote efficiency in many ways. 解说：TS一定要概括，不要写成反例那样那么细节，不然后面的话不好展开了。0 7 F% 6 g7 K0 H4 X a6 Z0 l$ W. z _. A 3、 具体数据和引用权威：) J0 r k. U# L: b W8 L, P 想得4分以上必须注意
9、，因为4分要求说服力，5分要求appropriate examples。; 9 B# g- G+ w X3 i Eg.( n9 * 3 C H, B% t n; r My hometown used to have one million acres of forests. The town people are shortsighted as to sell trees for $10 per piece. Trees are sold at a rate of approximately 100 thousand pieces per year, according to the data
10、 from the government. Professor Selephant from Peking University, one of the best universities in Environmental Engineering, once said, the tress in my hometown will disappear within 10 years at this speed of lumbering.2 ( i# Q! ; M: 2 g 倒数第二段让步： Eg u0 p- g T J M$ Y9 F+ A h 用书面语代替口语：6 p; L- 9 3 u3 u
11、; I, A 1、 短语不够正式。 2、 |- S Thank Gratitude7 b8 q/ e2 f$ ?! K/ R* Try endeavor) Q4 C, ?; R/ d; h! W# x8 B 句式要多样： 1、5 F7 n5 A: | b A$ t$ A 长句优先$ v4 q3 X d* I5 M7 X* d 2、 x+ H, v2 D6 C摒弃There be句型！ Botany, the study of plants, occupies a peculiar position in the history of human knowledge.(陈述句，同位语，下定义)
12、For many thousands of years it was the one field of awareness about which humans had anything more than the vaguest of insights.(时间状语开头) It is impossible to know today just what our Stone Age ancestors knew about plants, but from what we can observe of pre-industrial societies that still exist, a de
13、tailed learning of plants and heir properties must be extremely ancient.（名词性从句）This is logical.(长短结合) Plants are the basis of the food pyramid for all living things, even for other plants. They have always been enormously important to the welfare of people, not only for food, but also for clothing,
14、weapons, tool, dyes, medicines, shelter, and a great many other purposes.(递进句型，排比) Tribes living today in the jungles of the Amazon recognize literally hundreds of plants and know many properties of each. To them, botany, as such, has no name and is probably not even recognized as a special branch o
15、f “knowledge” at all.(插入语，介词开头)。 3、( y7 Y* S o . |% E2 无灵主语，非人物主语开头。 4、. / , c5 F3 U0 V非主语成分起始句子： Eg. Adj. Basic to any understanding of Canada after World War II is its impressive populations growth. Adv. Too, often, students are forced to cheat on tests. Prep. From the shortage arises the demand f
16、or nuclear power as a new source of energy.( u0 c C# x b4 F% D“ C0 u1 M- U Ing. Ed. “ D( T( S# y( E! : d0 U 名词性从句 What was needed in reality was not taught in school.: l* k% Q) t9 ? O) r : D6 D* f* o# f8 S! H 修辞要用：! D“ G- R# i* v 1、2 v# Z% _# o6 d, c4 u8 O 比喻7 f7 x5 L9 g$ D3 w0 2、/ u: r2 l8 b4 排比：短词
17、排比。% D: C$ N7 k O8 j1 k5 l+ F 3、 引用( T! W1 U7 i+ W 时间安排：7 Z4 t+ B$ W% y( 3min列提纲 22min写正文 检查到最后一秒 检查重心：% ?3 l7 k# W0 s 1、 句法：不缺句子成分 2、 时态：包括语态esp.三单。 g4 Z8 # t. Q5 u 3、( v v N Q5 n1 . S主谓一致 4、/ w8 g$ I“ F“ o; B4 L% a f 避免性别歧视：5 N& A% p0 z d5 b, e! x0 j* * O 1、 he or she ，不过出现次数太多会很累赘* x/ i5 h. h1 S0 r 2、 m! u5 ( g2 Q( i( C7 h 能用they就别用he or she
