1、1,英语六级 六级写作 Writing of CET6,六级作文的得分技巧 命题规律及模板 写作练习 备考建议,六级作文的得分技巧,六级作文技巧总结,卷面整洁 书写清楚 层次分明 中心突出 借助句式 重在变化,大学英语六级写作评分标准,一等： 文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，无重大语言错误，仅有个别小错。 二等： 文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，但有少量语言错误。 三等： 基本切题。有些地方表达不清，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，有些是严重错误 四等： 基本切题。思想表达不清，连贯性差，有较多的语言严重错误。 五等： 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，大部分有错误，且多数为严重错误。,具体要求,1
2、、打草稿后再动笔，减少涂改。 2、书写漂亮、工整。 3、避免错误。六级作文的主要错误集中在思路、标点、时态、单复数、结构等五个方面。,错误举例,1句子成分残缺 We always working till late at night before taking exams.（误） We are always working till late at night before taking exams（正）,2句子成分多余,This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for us. （误）One test ends, but an
3、other is waiting for you. （正）,3主谓不一致,Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. （误）Someone/Somebody thinks that reading should be selective. （正）,4动词时态误用,I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. （误）I was walking along the road and there were not so man
4、y vehicles on the street. （正）,5动词语态误用,The driver of the red car was died in the accident. （误）The driver of the red car died in the accident. （正）,6词类混淆,It is my point that reading must be selectively. （误）In my opinion, reading must be selective. （正）,Honest is so important for every person. （误）Honesty
5、 is so important for everyone. （正）,7名词可数与不可数的误用,In modern society, people are under various pressures（误）In modern society, people are under various kinds of pressure. （正）,8动词及物与不及物的误用,Because of his excellent performance, the boss rose his salary. （误）Because of his excellent performance, the boss ra
6、ised his salary. （正）,9.动宾搭配不当,We must make solutions to the problem. （误）We must find a solution to the problem. （正）,It also may help you to make success. （误）It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal. （正）,10.根据中文逐字硬译,Let us touch the outside world of campus.Lets keep in touch with the world outsi
7、de of the campus.,Dont forget to keep a good body health.（误）Dont forget to keep fit/healthy.（正）,4.为了做到文章层次分明、中心突出，建议采用“中心句+支撑句”的模式：1、每段第一句是topic sentence，（改编自该段相对应的提纲）。2、后面的支撑句是各个分支观点 ，即（supported sentences）。,5.英语文章结构三大特点：,1、 观点鲜明的开头； 2、 紧扣主题的结尾； 3、 有主题句且衔接自然的中间段落。,“起承转合”所需衔接词集锦：,起：nowadays, at pres
8、ent, first of all, firstly； 承：secondly, besides, moreover, furthermore, obviously, in addition, in other words;,转：however, on the other hand, but, instead, conversely; 合：therefore, so, as a result, in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion.,其他衔接词集锦：,1、列举 First of all, ;Whats more, ;Last but not t
9、he least, 2、举例说明 Lets take as an excellent example.,3、强调 It is obvious/ apparent/ conceivable that As a matter of fact,. There is no doubt that,. 4、并列 In (the) other words,5、对照 Contrast with. On the contrary (by contrast) On one hand,; On the other hand,. 6、比较 Comparatively,. Compared with,7、原因 Due
10、to/Owing to/Thanks to As a result of 8、结果 Because of this , As a result of that, Consequently,9、增加（补充） Moreover, Furthermore (what is more),For an addition,. 10、结尾（总结） According to what we have talked above, we can arrive at the conclusion reasonably /naturally that.,6.借助经典 句型,在平时的写作练习中多注意总结积累，每个话题都
11、要背上几句。尽量用在文章的开头结尾，以及每段的开头，这样才能引人注目。,经典句型,1、 is the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen (known/ heard/ had/ read, etc) e.g. Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。,2、Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V e.g. Nothing is more important than to receive educat
12、ion. 没有比接受教育更重要的事。,3、cannot emphasize the importance of too much. （再强调.的重要性也不为过。） e.g. We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过,4、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子（全世界都知道.） e.g. It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 全世界
13、都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的,5、There is no doubt that + 句子 （毫无疑问，.） e.g. There is no doubt that using the solar energy is clean. 毫无疑问,使用太阳能很清洁。,6、 That is the exact reason why （那就是.的真正原因） e.g. Summer is very hot , and that is the reason why I dont like it. 夏天很热。那就是我不喜欢它的真正原因。,7、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 （如此.
14、以致于.） e.g. So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it. 时间如此珍贵，经不起浪费。,8、Adj + as be, 主语 + V （虽然.） e.g. Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. 虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。,9、It is the very time for sb. to do （该是.的时候了）e.g. It is the very time for the aut
15、horities to take proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 该是有关当局采取适当的措施解决交通问题的时候了。,10、There is no one but（没有人不.） e.g. There is no one but longs to get a job with high salary. 没有人不渴望得到一份高薪的工作,11、 It is obvious/ apparent/ conceivable that + 句子 （明显的） e.g. It is conceivable that knowledge plays an im
16、portant role in our life. 显而易见，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。,12、 be based on（以.为基础） e.g. The progress of the society is based on harmony. 社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。,13、be closely related to . （与.息息相关） e.g. Taking exercise is closely related to health. 做运动与健康息息相关。,14、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N./V-ing, （因为.） e.g. Thanks
17、 to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream. 因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。,15、have/has a great influence on （对.有很大的影响） e.g. Smoking has a great influence on our health. 抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。,经典句型和短语,1随着经济的快速发展/人民生活水平的显著提高With the rapid development of economy/the remarkable improvement of peoples living standar
18、d. 2面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges,3人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that4社会/科技发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social/technological development,5引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention 6 产生深远影响：have/has a profound influence on; have/has drama
19、tic/ undesirable effect on,7持有完全不同的观点 hold a totally different argument8对必不可少 be indispensable to ,9发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in 10正如谚语所说 As a famous western proverb/saying goes that,7.注意 词汇和句式的变化,词汇：同一文章中相同意思的词要争取不断用近义词替换，以显示文章用词的灵活性。 句子：不一定要用长难从句，只要避免相邻句子句式太多的一致即可。,经典替换词组,Good
20、: positive, favorable, great, rosy, fair, awesome, promising, perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, superior, etc.,,51,六级作文常用近义词集锦,1. important =crucial (extremely important), significant (amount or effect large enough to be important) 2.opinon=perspective, standpoint (means looking at an ev
21、ent or situation in a particular way),3.abundant=ample (enough and usually extra), plentiful (enough for peoples needs and wants) 4.stick=adhere, cling (hold on something tightly),5.build=erect (you can erect something as buildings, FORMAL), establish 6. primary=radical (very important and great in
22、degree), fundamental,命题规律总结及模板,,55,I. 常考题材：校园和社会,1、关于大学生对学习、校园生活及将来工作、人生等方面的看法和态度：e.g.: How to improve students mental health (08.12) The Importance of Reading Classics （06.12）,2、贴近社会变化的热点话题.e.g.: Traveling Abroad (06.6) Say No to Pirated Products（05.6） 出国 Studying Abroad or Home (1) 现在有越来越多的人出国留学 (
23、2) 出国留学与在国内学习的对比 (3) 你的观点。,考研 The Intensified Postgraduate Entrance Examination (1). 请简略叙述图表；(图表略) (2). 说明造成这种现象的原因和可能的结果； (3). 你的观点。,工作 Certificate and ability, which is more important? 1）有人认为找工作时证书越多越好 2）也有人认为找工作时能力最重要 3）我的看法,二、个人生活 1.守时，独立、信心的重要性、幽默感的重要性等观点论证型作文； 2.能力与分数、 聪明与勤奋、能力与长相、合作与竞争等对比选择型作
24、文； 3. 健康问题，譬如肥胖、垃圾食品、锻炼身体的重要性，等现象解释及问题解决型作文。,三、 环境问题能源短缺、资源浪费、环境污染、低碳环保、 塑料袋与一次性筷子、人口问题、地震海啸与核泄漏等现象解释与问题解决型作文,四、 旅游交通 出国旅游、乱刻乱画、私家车与交通堵塞,五、网络科技 网络教育、网吧问题、网络游戏、网络名人,六、和谐社会 食品安全、假冒伪劣商品等,备考建议,1、关注时事，培养思维。 2、总结积累相关词汇、短语及经典句型,常考体裁,六级作文常考察的体裁： 说明文 议论文 应用文,六级作文命题类型,(1). 观点类作文a.观点选择类作文b.观点论证类作文 (2). 现象类作文a.
25、现象阐释类b.问题解决类 (3). 图表类作文a.影响分析类b.问题解决类 (4). 应用类作文a.书信b.演讲,一.观点选择型作文,此类作文直接要求考生比较两种对立的观点或做法，进而表明自己对问题或事务的态度或观点，做出选择。,观点选择型关键句式,There is a general discussion nowadays on the problem of .Some argue/ hold that, but others set forth a totally different argument about the issue. 如今，XX问题引起了广泛的讨论，有些人认为，但其他人则
26、对此持有完全相反的观点。,In reaction to the phenomenon/ in answer to the problem / in response to the on-going social change , some people believe In their minds,However, others maintain .In their eyes,对于这种现象/解决该问题/社会变化，一些人认为然而，其他人则认为在他们看来,Personally, I side with the former/ latter opinions. 就我个人而言，我支持前（后）一种观点。
27、 I am of the opinion that priority should be given to我首先赞成,In conclusion, it is clear that 因此，很显然What conclusion can be drawn from all the above said, it is 综上所述，我们可以得出这样的结论,观点选择类作文模板,There is no consensus among people as to the view of (_).The opinions vary from person to person. Some people hold t
28、he idea that (_).A case in point is that (_).,However, other may have a quite different view. According to them, (_). The most typical example is that (_).,Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with (_). Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying
29、to some extend, but (_) is more convincing.,观点论证,此类作文往往要求考生根据题目给出论点，按照提纲的结构要求对其下论证，然后表明自己的立场和看法。通过摆事实、讲道理的方式剖析事物，论述事理，发表意见，确立或否认某一主张。,观点论证型常用句式,When asked about (_),some people hold the idea that (_).As far as they concerned with/about , (_). 当问及时，一些人持有这样的观点；在他们看来，,But I could not agree with them in
30、 several points. In my opinion, (_). 然而，我却不赞同他们的看法。在我看来，,The reason for my choice are listed as follows. 我之所以做出这样选择，原因如下： First of all, (_).What is more, (_).Last but not the least,(_). 首先，；其次，；最后，,For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that (_). 基于以上原因，我坚持认为，,观点型作文模板,When asked about (_)
31、,some people hold the idea that (_).As far as they are concerned, (_).But I could not agree with them in several points. In my opinion, (_).The reason for my choice are listed as follows.,First of all, (_).What is more, (_).Last but not the least,(_). For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believ
32、e that (_).,二、 现象类作文,此类作文主要要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释并加以评论，其基本结构是：首先说明现状；其次阐述这种现状产生或存在的原因；最后做出分析，指出其影响，提出解决建议或总结观点。,a.现象阐释类作文关键句式,Recently, the phenomenon ofhas become the focus of the public concern. 近年来，现象引起公众极大地关注。,It is no easy/simple task to offer the reason for this phenomenon which involves more than on
33、e complicated factor. 要解释该现象的原因并不容易，因为其中涉及到很多复杂的因素。,Among all the important/ convincing reasons for,one should be emphasized 在所有重要、有力的原因中，我们应当重点关注,The significant effects of this phenomenon are undeniable, which can be concluded as the following aspects. 这一现象的重大影响是不可忽略的，可大致归结为以下几个方面：,On one hand, ;
34、On the other hand, 一方面，；另一方面，,现象阐释类作文框架,Recently, the phenomenon ofhas become the focus of the public concern. What are the reasons for the phenomenon? On my standpoint, there are several as follows.,First of all, (_).What is more, (_).Last but not the least,(_). The significant effects of this phen
35、omenon are undeniable, which can be concluded as the following aspects. On one hand, ; On the other hand,b.问题解决类作文关键句式,In recent years, with the development of the economy/society/peoples living standard, we are facing a serious phenomenon that 目前，随着经济/社会的发展/人民生活水平的提高，我们正面临着一个严峻的社会现象，。,In order to s
36、olve this problem, it is essential for us to discuss the causes of it. 为了解决这一问题，我们有必要首先分析其原因。,What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are several reasons as follows. 在我看来主要有如下几条原因：,First of all, (_).What is more, (_).Last but not the least,(_). 首先，；其次，；最后，,In view of the seriousness
37、of the phenomenon, effective measures should be taken as follows. 考虑到这一现象的严重性，有关部门必须采取如下有效措施。,On one hand, it is high time that people all over China realized the seriousness of the phenomenon; on the other hand, the government should issue laws and regulations to put the situation under control. 一方
38、面，必须使举国上下意识到这一现象的严重性；另一方面，政府应当制定相应的法律法规来控制这一局面。,b.问题解决型作文框架,In recent years, with the development of the economy/society/peoples living standard, we are facing a serious phenomenon that,What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are several reasons as follows. First of all, (_).What is
39、more, (_).Last but not the least,(_).,In view of the seriousness of the phenomenon, effective measures should be taken. On one hand, it is high time that people all over China realized the seriousness of the phenomenon; On the other hand, the government should issue laws and regulations to put the s
40、ituation under control. Only in these way can we successfully solve the problem. words:101,三、图表型作文,此类作文要求考生从提示性文字或图表、图画入手，解释提示性文字、图表、图画反映出的问题，提出问题的危害性或解决这一问题的紧迫性；然后对问题展开分析，提出解决问题的方案或应对措施；最后一段要求考生表明自己的态度、做法等。,a.影响分析型关键句式,The chart / graph/ table/ picture describes that the figure declines/ falls smoo
41、thly/ markedly. It indicates that 图表显示数字下降平缓，这表明.,There may be a combination of factors which contribute to / are responsible for 可能是好几个因素造成的结果。,There may be several possible reasons to this phenomenon, which will be demonstrated as follows. 可能有几个原因导致了我们下面所要阐述的现象。,The significant effects of this phe
42、nomenon are undeniable, which can be concluded as the following aspects. 这一现象的重大影响是不可忽略的，可大致归结为以下几个方面,On one hand, ; On the other hand, 一方面，；另一方面，,现象阐释类作文框架,As is shown in the graph above, we can see clearly that great changes have taken place in fromto The first years saw The last years witnessed ,
43、What are the reasons for the? On my standpoint, there are several as follows. First of all, (_). What is more, (_).Last but not the least,(_).,The significant effects of this phenomenon are undeniable, which can be concluded as the following aspects. On one hand, ; On the other hand,b. 问题解决型关键句式,As
44、is described in the chart /graph/ table/ picture, in the past few decades there have arisen sharp increase in 如图所示，在过去的几十年中，急剧增长,It is important that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation. 采取有效措施防止这种情况的发生很重要。,There is no immediate solution to the problem of,but might be helpful/
45、 but the general awareness of the necessity of might be the first step. 虽然问题没有现成的解决办法，但是,是有帮助的/但是意识到.的必要性应该是解决问题的第一步。,In order to make our world a better place in which we live, we should make great efforts to 为了让我们生活的世界变得更加美好，我们应该努力,According to what we have talked above, we can arrive at the concl
46、usion reasonably /naturally that. the best way to solve this problem is 综上所述，我们自然能得出以下结论，即解决这一问题的最好的办法就是,Following this method may not guarantee the success in solution to, but the payoff will be worth the effort. 这些方法并不一定能成功解决，但是其结果是值得付出努力的。,问题解决型作文框架 As is shown in the graph above, we can see clea
47、rly that great changes have taken place in fromto The first years saw The last years witnessed ,What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are reasons as follows. First of all, (_).What is more, (_).Last but not the least,(_).,According to what we have talked above, we can arrive at the
48、 conclusion reasonably /naturally that. the best way to solve this problem is Although, following this method may not guarantee the success in solution to, but the payoff will be worth the effort. Word:101,四、应用类作文信函,应用文重点考察信函，要求考生按照这个场景给相关人士写一封短信，并在信中明确表达自己写信的原因、动机、目的和愿望等。 注意事项： a.英语书信的格式公函、私函 ; b.应
49、用恰当的句式和语句； c.不要写真名。,应用型作文书信关键句式,Dear Sir or Madam Mr. Mrs. Miss. Ms Yours sincerely, yours truthfully, Love, Yours affectionately,开头用语,How time flies! We havent seen each other for a long time. All the things here are going on pretty well, I just miss you so much! It is so great to here from you again.,
