1、高水平作文的要求：Criteria (IELTS Band 7 Descriptors)Task Achievement Addresses all parts of the task Presents a clear position throughout the response Presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or supporting ideas may lack focusCoherence there is a clear pr
2、ogression throughout Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use Presents a clear central topic within each paragraphLexical Resource Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision Uses less common lexical items with some a
3、wareness of style and collocation May produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling, and/or word formationGrammatical Range and Accuracy Uses a variety of complex structures Produces frequent error-free sentences Has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors引言段 一句用改写的方式扣
4、题，另一句承上启下。正文段 写两句或者三句，给出两个或者三个理由。结论段 一两句呼应主题，另一两句升华论述。一、赞同与反对型Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood.（不同意这个观点）This issue is a controversial one that affects the daily life of everyone. People
5、 usually take one side over the other, despite not having any idea about the subject. But in my case, I totally disagree with the title statement for my reasons below.With reference to living surroundings, the reason why I disagree with building a shopping center near my community is that it would b
6、e very noisy. Simply speaking, consumers or shoppers may disrupt the daily life of people in the local community. For example, if a shopping mall will be built, it would attract thousands of people and consequently, a lot of noisy and trash as well. Although the majority may stick to the idea that t
7、his new supermarket will be good for whole people in and out of the community, I still think its drawbacks outweigh the benefits.Second, a shopping mall always occupies much space. If a community newly includes a shopping mall, it will become crowded and may lose some grassland. Obviously, we will n
8、ot be able to see the green trees behind the mall or appreciate the night sky clearly. As an illustration, private cars and delivery trunks are always seen to come in and go out of the community. Consequently, what we may hear is noisy and what we see is a mess. Finally, if a shopping center were bu
9、ilt, the overall result would have an adverse effect on peoples health because automobiles emit exhausted gas and trash will be seen everywhere. Putting too much emphasis on this, it will obviously result in obscuring other facts. As far as I am concerned, I completely believe that we cannot ignore
10、the need of health due to the convenience of buying something. Moreover, it is impossible that we are crazy for healthy life in such an unpleasant condition.To sum up, I would state my point on this issue after analyzing the three reasons again. It is true that building a shopping mall in a communit
11、y will interrupt local residents and harm the environment and human beings health. So it is sagacious/wise to support the statement that it is better to build it in he suburb or other places. 分析版This issue is a controversial one that affects the daily life of everyone. People usually take one side o
12、ver the other, despite not having any idea about the subject. But in my case, I totally disagree with the title statement for my reasons below.With reference to living surroundings 主题词, the reason why I disagree with building a shopping center near my community 选取的观点 is that it would be very noisy 理
13、由一. Simply speaking, consumers or shoppers may disrupt the daily life of people in the local community 进一步说明. For example, if a shopping mall will be built, it would attract thousands of people and consequently, a lot of noisy and trash as well 举例说明. Although the majority may stick to the idea that
14、this new supermarket will be good for the whole people in and out of the community 相反的观点, I still think its drawbacks outweigh the benefits 重申观点.Second, a shopping mall always occupies much space 理由二. If a community newly includes a shopping mall 假设在这种情况下, it will become crowded and may lose some gr
15、assland 会导致的结果. Obviously, we will not be able to see the green trees behind the mall or appreciate the night sky clearly 进一步说明结果. As an illustration, private cars and delivery trunks are always seen to come in and go out of the community 举例说明. Consequently, what we may hear is noisy and what we see
16、 is a mess 这一段的结果.Finally, if a shopping center were built 列出 一个反面情况, the overall result would have an adverse effect on peoples health 这个情况的结果 because automobiles emit exhausted gas and trash will be seen everywhere 为什么. Putting too much emphasis on this, it will obviously result in obscuring other
17、 facts. As far as I am concerned, I completely believe that we cannot ignore the need of health due to the convenience of buying something 不同意的理由三. Moreover, it is impossible that we are crazy for healthy life in such an unpleasant condition.进一步说明你的陈述To sum up, I would state my point on this issue a
18、fter analyzing the three reasons again. It is true that building a shopping mall in a community will interrupt local residents and harm the environment and human beings health 总结全文三个理由. So it is sagacious/wise to support the statement that it is better to build it in he suburb or other places 提出建议，升
19、华论文. （同意这个观点）This issue is a controversial one that affects the daily life of everyone. People usually take one side over the other, despite not having any idea about the subject. But in my case, I totally agree with the title statement for my reasons below.With reference to living surroundings, the
20、 reason why I agree with building a shopping center near my community is that it will save more time. Simply speaking, current shopping center are always built so far away from home that the residents often spend much time to buy something. For example, living far away from shopping malls makes me s
21、pend one hour, even more to get to buy what I need in my daily life. Although the majority may stick to the idea that the new supermarket erecting near my community will bring inconvenience, I still think going shopping in the nearby shopping center will save a lot of precious time fir us.Second, sh
22、opping near home not only saves time, but saves money and energy as well. If people who buy things in a suburb cannot afford a private car, it will take them much money or energy to take buses or taxis. Obviously, it s an enjoyable thing that spending less time to buy what we need at nearby market.
23、As an illustration, when having a holiday, a mother can walk to go shopping with her family hand in hand. Consequently, they buy necessities effectively and enjoy a happy life. Finally, if a shopping center were built, the overall result would have an adverse effect on peoples quiet and peaceful lif
24、e, to some extent. Putting too much emphasis on this, it will obviously result in obscuring other facts. As far as I am concerned, I completely believe that each citizen should focus on their future convenience, but not on some noisy. Moreover, we spend more time indoor so that a large part of our l
25、ives cannot be interrupted directly.To sum up, I would state my point on this issue after analyzing the three reasons again. It is true that almost every person will welcome this action and it will bring a lot of advantages for us. So it is sagacious/wise to support the statement that it is better t
26、o build the shopping center near our community. 题 目 范 例 ： 同 意 与 否It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would e more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent d
27、o you agree or disagree?范 例 解 析 ：范 文 (多 种 技 巧 ）A criticism often heard these days is that the subjects taught in schools tend to be too academic, and contribute little to preparing a young person for the real-life tasks he or she will have to perform after graduation. They say that academic subjects
28、 are rooted in the past, and are not useful for solving modern problems. I disagree with this point of view for three reasons.My first reason is that it is the duty of parents, not teachers, to prepare their children to deal with the practical affairs of life. The home, not the classroom, is the ide
29、al place to learn about home management and interpersonal skills. As for work abilities and attitudes, they are best learned “on the job“ and under the supervision of an experienced older worker.My second reason is that academic subjects have withstood the test of time. They represent the accumulate
30、d wisdom of our ancestors down through the ages, and, far from being impractical, they equip us with the knowledge and confidence to make sound judgments about any problems which may crop up. In addition, academic subjects are good for training us in mental discipline, while practical subjects are w
31、eak in this regard.My third reason is based on the saying “Man does not live by bread alone. “ Schooldays devoted solely to instruction in down-to-earth practical matters would be dull indeed! Lessons in the best literature of the world, and the epoch-making scientific and geographical discoveries o
32、f the past enrich our lives and make us feel that we are part of the great family of mankind.All in all, the teaching of academic subjects in schools is entirely appropriate. It is my firmly held view that practical subjects have no place in the classroom. On the contrary, the curriculum should be m
33、ore academic!本 范 文 在 结 构 上 可 以 说 是 雅 思 作 文 的 一 个 经 典 范 例 ， 而 且 操 作 性 比 较 强 ， 也 就是 说 考 生 经 过 一 段 时 间 的 学 习 ， 完 全 可 以 写 出 这 样 的 文 章 来 。首 段 简 要 描 述 题 目 设 置 的 情 况 ， 说 有 一 种 观 点 认 为 学 校 教 的 课 程 学 术 性 倾 向 太 强tend to 的 意 思 是 “倾 向 于 某 事 “， 这 种 观 点 是 一 种 criticism 批 评 ） ， 所 以 这 种 观点 显 然 是 反 对 学 校 教 授 学 术 性 太
34、 浓 的 课 程 ， 紧 接 着 作 者 旗 帜 鲜 明 地 表 明 了 自 己 的 态度 “I disagree“我 是 不 同 意 这 个 观 点 的 “， 同 时 说 明 不 同 意 有 三 个 理 由 ， 读 者 读 到 这里 ， 就 可 以 判 断 出 正 文 将 会 从 三 个 方 面 来 阐 述 作 者 的 立 场 。 注 意 ， 这 里 作 者 是 说 “我 不 同 意 “， 而 不 是 说 “我 认 为 “， 这 一 点 就 体 现 出 agree or disagree 和 your opinion 两 类 题 目 在 写 法 上 面 的 细 微 差 别 。第 二 段 到
35、第 四 段 都 是 以 Myreason is开 头 ， 这 样 显 得 结 构 十 分 清 晰 ， 考 官 即使 不 去 细 读 文 章 的 内 容 ， 也 很 容 易 抓 住 文 章 的 整 体 思 路 ， 这 种 结 构 可 以 帮 助 考 生 构 建一 个 清 晰 的 文 章 框 架 。 回 到 文 章 的 内 容 上 来 ， 第 二 段 实 际 上 是 在 针 对 首 段 中 提 出 的 观点 进 行 反 驳 ， 首 段 中 说 学 术 性 的 课 程 不 能 帮 助 年 轻 人 解 决 在 实 际 生 活 中 不 得 不 去 解 决的 实 际 问 题 ， 第 二 段 就 说 帮 助
36、 孩 子 学 会 如 何 解 决 实 际 问 题 是 家 长 的 责 任 而 不 是 教 师 的责 任 ， 学 习 解 决 实 际 问 题 的 场 所 应 当 是 家 庭 而 不 是 课 堂 ， 至 于 工 作 能 力 和 态 度 应 当 在工 作 的 时 候 去 学 习 。第 三 段 提 出 作 者 的 第 二 个 理 由 ： 学 术 性 的 课 程 经 受 了 时 间 的 考 验 ， 是 我 们 的 祖 先积 累 下 来 的 财 富 ， 可 以 帮 我 们 对 任 何 可 能 出 现 的 问 题 做 出 比 较 正 确 的 判 断 。 同 时 与 实用 性 的 课 程 比 较 ， 学 术
37、性 的 课 程 在 训 练 大 脑 思 维 方 面 也 占 有 优 势 。第 四 段 阐 述 第 三 个 理 由 来 证 明 作 者 的 观 点 ， 先 引 用 一 句 话 “人 不 仅 仅 靠 面 包 活着 “， 言 下 之 意 就 是 说 实 用 性 的 课 程 就 像 面 包 一 样 ， 并 不 是 生 活 的 全 部 ， 学 术 性 的 课程 使 生 活 变 得 更 加 丰 富 多 彩 。综 合 以 上 谈 到 的 三 个 原 因 ， 文 章 在 结 尾 段 指 出 ： ALL in all(总 而 言 之 ， 在 学 校学 术 性 的 课 程 是 完 全 适 合 的 ， 然 后 进
38、一 步 引 申 说 明 观 点 ： 实 用 性 的 课 程 在 课 堂 上 是 没有 立 足 之 地 的 ， 应 当 多 设 置 一 些 学 术 性 的 课 程 。这 类 文 章 就 是 要 写 清 楚 自 己 的 观 点 是 同 意 还 是 不 同 意 ， 绝 对 不 要 含 糊 其 辞 ， 要 态度 鲜 明 ， 同 意 就 是 同 意 ， 不 同 意 就 写 不 同 意 。 Discuss 类 的 文 章 可 以 在 文 中 不 明 确 表态 ， 但 是 agre e ordisagree 类 的 文 章 一 定 要 说 清 楚 自 己 的 态 度 是 什 么 。2、喜好选择型Some s
39、tudents choose to study at home by using technology such as computer, television or the Internet, but others believe it is better to study at traditional school.Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.Different people have different views on how to study. When
40、 faced with the decision of studying at home by using modern technology or studying at traditional school from teachers, quite a few would claim the former choice will be more meaningful for all students. But others, in contrast, deem that staying and learning at school should be treated as the prem
41、ier choice and that is also my choice. Among endless factors which influence how to choose a better way of learning, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity/preference for /inclination to learning from school is that conventional school education provides yo
42、u with good opportunities to make friends and to develop your social skills. Staying in schools lets you become sufficiently prepared before you graduate from schools. The team spirit that is cultivated at school through student cooperation cannot be achieved through studying at home.Another reason
43、can be seen by every person is it is much easier to concentrate on learning knowledge in classes than at home. This is not only because everybody studies together in classes, but because there are not so many distractions at school as there are at home. In addition, well-established schools supply s
44、tudents with a variety of advanced studying equipment.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in the position of advantage because teachers in schools may help you solve a problem timely and directly. After you finish an excellent job, you may share the success and pleasure with your t
45、eachers and classes. So it highly improves the efficiency of comprehension and you will build more powerful confidence.To sum up,I am one who has been studying in schools for twelve years and I will continue to study for five more years. There is no doubt that studying in schools and classes brought
46、 more benefits and I would prefer to choose the latter. 举一反三Some people choose to work in a large company, but others believe it is better to work in a small company.Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.Different people have different views on work choice.
47、When faced with the decision of working for a large company or working for a small company, quite a few would claim the latter choice will have more advantages. But others, in contrast, deem that working for a large company should be treated as the premier 首要的 choice and that is also my choice/point
48、. Among endless factors which influence the final decision of working in a large company, there are three conspicuous 明显的 aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity/preference for /inclination to working in a large company is that jobs in big companies such as Microsoft or Intel offer mor
49、e opportunities for promotion than those at small computer company. Although some small companies may grow fast and also require more talents, I would rather to choose a company which has more positions to compete.Another reason can be seen by every person is that a large company often gives us more confidence to achieve success. For example, being employed by a global enterprise would prove my ability and techniques. We would, therefore, at such time, believe in ourselves since we were hired by a large powerful enterprise. The argument I support in the first paragrap
