1、,学英语,中,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,课题:漫画式作文写作指导,顺昌一中 郭素萍,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,漫画作文,议论类,高考英语书面表达,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,McDull is a male pig who can be distinguished (told) by a birthmark on his right eye.,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,Cartoon writing,How to write a good essay?,Writing
2、steps:,1.读图,2.解意,3.谋篇,Difficulties?,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,Tasks:,1.To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons.2.To learn the basic structure(结构） of cartoon writing3.To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing .,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,Step1、 Describe the picture,顺昌县课题高中英语图
3、画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,Step2 解析图意：How you understand the picture? In the directions, you are given some hints(提示）in words which are important clues(线索）, or shown a picture, which allows you to explore a topic.(To find out the theme揭示的主题,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,What is its implied暗示 meaning ？,Theme？
4、主题？,Dont be too confident in real life.2.Be honest and modest（谦虚的.谦逊的）3.Dont judge a book by its cover.,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,Structure,1、Describe a picture,2、Interpret （解释、说明）its implied暗指的meaning Point out its implications(含意、暗指） in our life,3、Give your own comments/suggestions/solutions,篇章
5、结构,Step3谋篇,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,The First Part 描述Describe the picture:描述漫画-引出漫画主题with the details and for the theme,1.As is vividly shown in the picture, 2.As can be seen in the picture，3.In the picture, there are/is (are) doing,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,2. From the picture we can see tha
6、t there is a bottle.It has two hands and tries to put an label written “full”on its body. A smile is on the neck of the bottle. Inside the bottle is there a little water,1. In the picture we can see a bottle of less water whose label（标签、表记 ）is written full,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,How To Develop
7、 Your Arguments,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,How To Develop Your Arguments,Arguments,Interpret its implied meaning Point out its implications in our life,Give your own comment/ suggestion/solution,summing up: What lessons you learned from the picture,Part 2:,Part3.,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,1、The
8、 picture indicates (表明、暗示(conveys )the meaning that .,Part2：Useful expressions,2、It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that 3、This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,The third part：提出对策：引出对策例举对策-过渡(表达自己感想，并举例说明）,Opinion/suggestion/solution:1. As far as Im co
9、ncerned,2. From my point of view,3. It is better/advisable to4. I consider it necessary5. The picture convinces me it is even important to be a .,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,Dont be too confident in real life.Be honest and modest（谦虚的.谦逊的）Dont judge a book by its cover.,Example,Five minutes for you,
10、The picture is trying to convey the information to us that we should not be fooled by the appearance. We should know what they really are. Just like the bottle in the picture, only seeing the label we are easy to consider the bottle full of water. But actually it is half-empty. In our daily life, pe
11、ople tend to focus on the appearance, so what we should do is trying to dig out the truth. Just as the proverb goes, “Dont judge a book only by its cover.” Dont be taken in欺骗 by the false.,(Theme),(Explanation),(Reality/Solution),(Proverb),(Suggestion),Sample1,How To Develop Your Arguments,顺昌县课题高中英语
12、图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,The bottle wants to cover its weakness and wants to say something good to it.(purpose) Actually, what the bottle does is very stupid.(attitude/judgment) Nowadays, there are some people like the bottle in society. They always cover their disadvantages to make others think they are
13、 perfect and full of abilities. But if we get along with them for a while, well find that they almost can do nothing but tell lies. (reality/purpose) So, in my opinion, we should show others the real ability of us, and shouldnt cover our weaknesses. Whats more, we also need more knowledge to make us
14、 full.(suggestion),Sample 2,How To Develop Your Arguments,As a result, it is wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our heads full.,(Description),(Interpretation&Implication),(Suggestion),Analysis For the Whole Passage,As is shown in the picture, there is a half-empty bottle going t
15、o stick a label on its body, feeling proud and confident. (details),The picture seems to be explaining a kind of social phenomenon. We might often meet some people who look confident, trying to impress others with their “rich” knowledge. (reality/purpose) However, just like the bottle in the picture
16、, what they really know is just a little. There is no doubt that they need to learn more because what they have in their mind is far from enough. (result)As an old Chinese saying goes, “Empty bottles makes the loudest noise.” (proverb),顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,Practise:,Writing (图画式议论文)Direction
17、s: Study the following set of cartoons carefully and write an essay in which you should 1) Describe the cartoons 2) Interpret its meaning and point out its implications in our life. 3) Give your comments,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,In the street/In the center of the left picture is running a beauti
18、ful girl who is throwing the waste on the road. A disable man is walking painfully and throwing the waste into the rubbish box.,Part One :Describe the picture,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,As is described in the first picture, a beautiful girl, after eating a banana, is throwing the peel (或rubbish, g
19、arbage, waste, trash) away. On the contrary, a disabled man is struggling (或trying/trying his best) to put her trash into the rubbish can/box. In addition, we are informed by the caption (文字说明）that “The beauty is not on the face.”,lp,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,第一句总写也可以简单地写为：As is shown in the cart
20、oons, a beautiful girl and a disabled man present/display/exhibit different behaviors and attitudes.或It is symbolically illustrated (shown)in the set of cartoons that people behave differently towards the rubbish.,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,PartTwo： Despite(In spite of ) the girls youth and beauty
21、, it is the disabled man who is truly beautiful. True beauty comes from ones actions rather than ones appearance. While most of us enjoy pretty appearances, it is more important to cultivate培养 a clean and beautiful soul. Only such souls can create a beautiful society. 尽管这个女孩年轻貌美，但真正美的是那位残疾人。真正的美是出自行
22、动而不是外表，虽然我们每个人都喜欢漂亮的外貌，但更重要的是培养纯净、美丽的心灵，只有这样的心灵才能创造出真正美好的社会。,Conclusion:归纳总结或发表评论,套用句型:1.Therefore因此 from what we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that inner beauty is,Part Three,2.This is my point of view and I am sure.,One can easily find outside beauty while inner beauty is fo
23、und in personal qualities.Inner beauty is more important .,From above we can know that a real beauty comes from ones heart and it is a kind of spirit but not her or his appearance.,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,Homework,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,The burden of the students has been a hot topic for
24、years.As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy is dreaming in the deep well (tower), longing for the outdoor sunshine . It implies severe educational problems.,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,On the bottom of the well which stands for the burden of homework is a pitiful girl who is confronted(faced) w
25、ith a lot of homework. She is eager to go out of the well and enjoy the beautiful scene of the countryside.,顺昌县课题高中英语图画式议论文有效写作模式的探究 研讨课,The drawing describes a little girl who wears a pair of thick glass. She is forced to stay in this “ tower” which can be explained by the lots of homework in front of her on the desk. Instead of concentrating on study, the poor kid is dreaming of the outdoor sunshine and fields .,Thanks for listening,
