1、PART ONE,第一篇 教材梳理篇,话题写作（三） 安全问题篇,【话题点睛】 该话题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等,此类试题常以要点提示的方式来考查。【参考谚语】 1.Caution is the parent of safety. 小心驶得万年船。 2.Safety is a commodity. 安全就是商品。 3.Safety at first. 安全第一。,常用表达,【相关短语】 call the police 报警; ask teachers for help 向老师求助; go upstairs/downstairs 上/下楼; without permissio
2、n 未经许可; keep away from 远离; how to protect ourselves 如何保护我们自己;follow the school rules 遵守校规;obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则;be strict with 对要求严格,【亮点句型】 安全与自我保护 1.If we are in danger, we must call the police or ask teachers for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. 2.Self-protection is one of
3、the most important skills, especially for teenagers. 3. Its dangerous to swim in the river alone, so dont go to the river without permission. 4.All in all, we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.,安全规则及建议 1.We shouldnt crowd or push each other when we go upstairs or downs
4、tairs at school. 2.To be safer, we should keep away from the Internet bar, and go to school and go back home on time. 3.When facing an accident, the first and most important rule is to stay calm. 4.Friends can make our life colorful, but we must be careful to make friends, especially online.,【基础写作】
5、.根据汉语意思完成句子 1.我们应该尽我们最大的努力来确保我们是安全的。 We should try our best to we are safe. 2.我们需要和同学友好相处。 We need to our classmates. 3.对我们来说,吃更健康的食物和遵守交通规则是重要的。 Its important for us to eat more healthy food and . 4.我们必须对自己严格要求。 We must ourselves. 5.司机立刻拨打了120电话,救护车马上就到了。 The driver 120 at once and an ambulance cam
6、e .,make,sure,get,on/along,well,with,obey,the,traffic,rules,be,strict,with,called,in,no,time,.用括号内所给的单词或短语,将下列句子译成英语 6.自我保护对于青少年来说是最重要的技能之一。(self-protection)7.如今学生的安全正变成我们所有人的焦点。(focus)8.无论你是谁,做什么,安全是最重要的。(no matter)9.当我们交朋友时,尤其是在网上,我们应该小心一点。(be careful)10.在学校,我们应该遵守校规。(follow rules),Self-protection
7、 is one of the most important skills for teenagers.,Today students safety is becoming the focus to us all.,No matter who you are, what you do, safety is the most important.,We should be careful when we make friends, especially online.,We should follow the school rules at school.,典例分析,近几年来,校园欺凌(schoo
8、l bullies) 事件时有发生,学会自我保护是我们中学生需要具备的一种意识和能力,我们应该珍惜生命,注意自己的人身安全,做好自我保护。请以“How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈在生活中我们应该怎样自我保护(self-protection)。 提示 (1)不单独游泳; (2)谨慎交友; (3)遇到危险报警或向老师求助; (4)饮食及交通安全,要求 (1)词数:80100; (2)字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥 How Can We Protect Ourselves?,【写作模板】,【思路点拨】 1.要点提炼:主题是“生活中
9、我们怎样自我保护”,可从以下几个方面展开: 不单独游泳、谨慎交友、遇到危险报警或向老师求助、饮食及交通安全等。 2.本文是提建议类文章,注意should,can等情态动词的运用。 3.确定时态:一般现在时 4.确定人称:第一人称为主,【佳作赏析】 How Can We Protect Ourselves? Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. We should try our best to make sure we are safe. But how can we protect ourselv
10、es? Here are some suggestions. First, summer is coming. We must remember its dangerous to swim alone. Second, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Third, if we are in danger, we must call the police or ask teachers for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, w
11、e should obey traffic rules. We need to eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldnt crowd or push each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. All in all, we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.,【名师点评】 1.文章根据要点提示,逐一地阐述了如何保护自己,远离危险,并做到了适当展开,详略得当; 2.本文结构合理,思路
12、清晰,值得我们学习。开头:引出话题。正文:提出自我保护的方法。结尾:总结提醒。全文句式多样化,简单句和复合句相结合使用,使文章错落有致,给人良好的阅读体验。,A 2018十堰 3月26日是第二十三个全国中小学生安全教育日。今年安全教育日的主题是“普及安全知识,确保生命安全”。暑假即将来临,为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,学校将举行以安全为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列表格内容写一篇题为“How can we make ourselves safe?”的英语短文。,实战演练,参考词汇 be careful(小心) go bad(变质) 要求 (1)必须包含所给的全部要点及内容,可
13、适当发挥; (2)文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名; (3)字数80100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 How can we make ourselves safe? As teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important.,Possible version 1: How can we make ourselves safe? As teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important. Here are some of
14、 my suggestions. First, we are supposed to be careful when making friends online, which may bring us unnecessary troubles. Second, remember never to go swimming on our own in the river or lake because doing that will probably put ourselves into dangerous situations. Besides, in order to eat healthil
15、y and safely, wed better eat less junk food and not eat food that goes bad, for they will do harm to our health. At last, when traveling outside, take care of our personal things and call the police for help in time if we are in danger. In short, safety must come first!,Possible version 2: How can w
16、e make ourselves safe? As teenagers, to learn how to make ourselves safe is especially important. Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, we should take care of our personal things. If we are in danger, we must call the police for
17、 help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Dont eat bad food, eat little or no junk food. Besides, we shouldnt crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last but not least, summer is coming, we must remember its dangerous to swim
18、 alone. We must not swim alone in rivers and lakes.,B 2017黔南州 目前,校园暴力时有发生,已经危害到中学生的身心健康。作为中学生应该懂得如何规范自身的行为习惯,保护自身安全,远离校园暴力。请以“规范自我行为,做个合格中学生”为主题写一篇短文。 内容要点 (1)遵守学校纪律,听从老师、家长的教育,严格要求自己。 (2)远离网吧,按时上学、回家。 (3)待人礼貌、友好,不与同学打架。 (4)遇到困难多与父母及老师沟通。,要求 (1)必须用到以上信息,可适当发挥; (2)文章中请勿提及真实人名、校名等相关信息; (3)词数在80词左右,文章开
19、头已给出,不计入总词数; (4)要求句子连贯,语意通顺,书写规范。 参考词汇 follow the school rules, be strict with, keep away from the Internet bar, fight with Campus violence(校园暴力) happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful for students. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As a student,One possible version: Campus
20、 violence(校园暴力) happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful for students. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As a student, it is important to know how to be a good teenager. We should follow the school rules to behave well at school. Its good for us to obey the teachers and paren
21、ts. We must be strict with ourselves. To be safer, we should keep away from the Internet bar, and go to school and go back home on time. As teenagers, we should be friendly to one another, and dont fight with classmates. If we have difficulties in life, its best to talk about them with our teachers and parents. In a word, we should try our best to behave well.,
