1、Using Attributive Clause in Writing,定语从句在写作的简单应用,Enjoy the nice sayings & translate,Heaven rewards those who work hard, and flowers in spring come to fruition in autumn. 天道酬勤，春华秋实。（出处书大诰）（摘自中国国家主席习近平应邀出席博鳌亚洲论坛2018年年会开幕式的重要主旨演讲：“天道酬勤，春华秋实”。中国人民坚持聚精会神搞建设、坚持改革开放不动摇，持之以恒，锲而不舍，推动中国发生了翻天覆地的变化）,学“习”语，知典故,E
2、njoy the nice sayings,Success comes to those who share in one purpose.上下同欲者胜 （出处孙子. 谋攻）（摘自2017年习近平新年贺词：“上下同欲者胜 ”。只要我们13亿多人们和衷共济，只要我们党永远同人民站在一起，大家撸起袖子加油干，我们就一定能走好我们这一代人的长征路）,学“习”语，知典故,Enjoy the nice sayings,Heroes are those who know themselves and can overcome their own difficulties.自知者英，自胜者雄。（出处中说.
3、周公）（摘自2016.10.21习近平在纪念红军长征胜利80周年大会上的讲话：“自知者英，自胜者雄”，民族复兴梦想越接近，改革开放任务越繁重，越要加强党的建设）,学“习”语，知典故,What have you learned last week?,WHAT？,Revision,1. 构成要素 先行词：被定语从句修饰的 _ 或 _ 关系词：分为_ 和_ 定语从句：修饰 _ 或 _的从句，一般紧跟在_的后面。 2. 结构： _词+_词+从句3. 分类：_ 和 非限制性定语从句4.应用：可以用来描述_ 和_5.翻译：“的”,名词,代词,名词,代词,关系副词,关系代词,先行词,关系,先行,事物,人物,
4、限制性,引导非限制定 从，指代整个 主句的内容,主语或宾语,宾语,定语，表所属关系,状语,I am a student from Xiaosheng Middle School, _ is surrounded by many green trees.,which,Practice 1: 在空格中填入合适的关系词,The reason _I want to introduce my school is that it is one of the most beautiful schools in Shantou.,why,There are modern basketball courts a
5、nd playground _are available （可利用的）for us to take exercise.,that/which,I can well remember there was a time _ a blue sky and the green trees have kept me spellbound.,when,Whats more, there are many friendly classmates _ I could get along well.,with whom,More importantly, I have met a great number of
6、 excellent teachers _ have rich teaching experience.,that/who,I will never forget the classroom _ we study together.,where,This is the beautiful school _ I will spend three happy years.,where,Practice 2 把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句,I like the Mid-autumn Festival.The Mid-autumn Festival is as important a
7、s the Spring Festival.,People will try to go home for the family reunion.People work far from their homes.,There is a kind of special food for this festival. The name of the food is mooncake.,1) I like the Mid-autumn Festival which is as important as the Spring Festival.,3)There is a kind of special
8、 food, the name of which is mooncake. 3)There is a kind of special food, whose name is mooncake.,2) People who work far from their homes will try to go home for the family reunion .,Tip1: 写出两个简单句,主句,从句,主句,主句,从句,从句,Tip2:在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇（这个词在两个简单句中都有）,Tip3:把另一个简单句改成定从，从句要紧跟先行词(特别注意引导词的选择）,who,which,w
9、hich,定语从句运用于写作,Why do we learn the Attributive Clauses?,WHY？,写作中定语从句的主要作用：,1.增加词数,Today some teachers are visiting our class. The teachers are from Xiaosheng Middle School . Today some teachers who are from Xiaosheng Middle School are visiting our class.,I want to play basketball in the NBA.,2.可连接两个
10、包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复和句式单一,3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容,This is my uncle, a doctor. This is my uncle, who is a doctor.,I want to play basketball in the NBA, which is always my dream.,How do we use the Attributive Clauses in writing ?,HOW？,定从的使用情况,一： 两个（以上）简单句的合并, John is my best friend. John gave me a gift. He bought
11、this gift from USA,gave me a gift,John,which he bought from USA.,my best friend,（题干中出现两句（以上）涉及同一事物的简单句）,定从的使用,我们班是一个大家庭。,这个大家庭包括35个女孩和40个男孩。,Our class is a big family.,The family consists of 35 girls and 40 boys.,Our class is a big family, which consists of 35 girls and 40 boys.,consist of,Practice:
12、,二：插入语的使用,众所周知： 如上所述：,As we all know： As is mentioned above：,定从的使用,众所周知，中国有世界上最多的人口,As we all know, China has the largest population all over the world.,China has the largest population all overr the world, as we all know.,China , as we all know, has the largest population all overr the world.,正如上面所
13、提到的，定语从句用处很大。,_, the Attributive Clause is of great use.,As is mentioned above,如上所述，我支持后者的观点。 in favor of,I, as is mentioned above, am in favor of the latter view.,正如我们所期待的，她取得了第一名。,She , as we all expect, got the first prize.,三：非限指代整句的使用,我们不应玩手机，这会影响学习。 我们应该每天锻炼，这对身体好。,We should not play the mobile
14、phone,which has a bad effect on our study.,We should take exercise every day, which isgood for our health.,定从的使用,For example:,My school is a beautiful place.,My school is a beautiful place，where there are green trees, beautiful flowers , singing birds and fresh air.,Solution:,找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富,
15、我的学校是个美丽的地方。,有多美丽？ 因何美丽？,题干中只有一个孤立的简单句。,四：定从在要点增加上的使用,定从的使用,(2013年高考山东卷) 描述你的假期打算（包括兼职、旅游、志愿者等）,I would like to do a part-time job, which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.,Practice:,用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因,Traveling is one of my choices, which will enrich my life and broaden my hori
16、zon.,I would like to do voluntary work, which will make a great contribution to society .,Translate the following sentences.,1.我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆 于拓宽视野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。,2.你知道，中国结非常受中国人的喜欢。(Chinese knot）,3.当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情， 这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。,4.人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的 特殊食品。,1.I would visit some museums
17、which should not be missed to widen my horizons as well as enrich my knowledge. (2013山东高考满分作文),我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆对于拓宽视野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。,2.As you know, Chinese knots are very popular with Chinese people.(2013新课标全国卷满分作文),你知道，中国结非常受中国人的喜欢。,4. People can enjoy the moon while eating mooncakes, which are the
18、 special food for this festival. (2013辽宁高考满分作文) 人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。,3.Nowadays parents have done everything for their single children, which makes the children rely on their parents badly. (2013福建高考满分作文),当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情， 这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。,作文中是不是越多定语从句就越好,？,2017年全国卷 假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参
19、观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.展览时间、地点； 2.展览内容。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Dear HenryIm Li Hua, who is the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now Im glad to tell you there will b
20、e a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition which is held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.The exhibition, the theme of which is “beauty of China“, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Our clubs works will be displayed, and
21、 we have a valuable set of paper-cutting which is created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. Im sure it can leave a wonder
22、ful impression on you! Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua,Dear Henry,Im Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now Im glad to tell you there will be a Chinese pape
23、r-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.The exhibition, the theme of which is “beauty of China“, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our clubs works be displayed, but we also have a
24、valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. Im sure it can leave a wonderful impression on yo
25、u! Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua,1,2,3,Please add anything you like and anything you want,Please add anything you like and anything you want,Please add anything you like and anything you want,contents,Dear HenryIm Li Hua, who is the leader of the paper-cutting club in our
26、 school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now Im glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition which is held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.The exhibition, the theme of whic
27、h is “beauty of China“, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Our clubs works will be displayed, and we have a valuable set of paper-cutting which is created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, fro
28、m which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. Im sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua,范文一,1,3,2,4,5,1,2,3,Please add anything you like and anything you want,Please add
29、 anything you like and anything you want,Please add anything you like and anything you want,contents,Dear Henry,Im Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now Im glad to tell you there wi
30、ll be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.The exhibition, the theme of which is “beauty of China“, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our clubs works be displayed,
31、 but also we have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. Im sure it can leave a wonder
32、ful impression on you! Im looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua,范文二,高考英语满分作文“黄金三定律”: 行文清晰、准确、简洁三点,1,2,held by our school.,名词短语作同位语,created by a famous artist of this field.,过去分词做后置定语,not only but also 倒装句,作文中是不是越多定语从句就越好,？,Two or three Attibutive Clauses are enough in one composition ! 除定语从句外，我们可以用并列句，非谓语做后置定语或状语，用介词短语（with+宾语+宾补），名词性从句等复合句，强调句，倒装句,重写这次月考作文: 1、12分以下，先用简单句，再用1-2句定语从句整合句子； 2、12-16分至少使用2句以上的定语从句； 3、16分以上，尽量句式多样化。,Homework,THANK YOU,
