1、考研写作2,连俊霞 北京新东方学校,一、短文写作词句选择,1.1 替换词突破 1.1.1 常用词 to the best of my knowledge, I hold important: imperativeIt is imperative that (should) (建议) (3) show: unfoldIt is unfolded that (寓意) 1.1.2 例举, such as ,2019/8/13,Writing,2,一、短文写作词句选择,1.2 写作基本语法 1.2.1 正确与否的凭证 （1）动词唯一性原则 例： It is look like a network. I
2、t is my view that the hot pot represents cultural integration is delicious and nutritious. There are a large number of people are surfing on line.,3,句型选择,过去式&过去分词,representing,情态动词+动词原形,likev. I like my father. likeprep. I look/am like my father.,正确与否,正式与否,2019/8/13,become-became-become drive-drove-
3、driven,1.2.1 正确与否的凭证,This cultural “hot-pot” will looks more colorful than ever before. The hot pot looks very delicious and nutritious, it represents cultural integration.Some of them have went the crime road because of the Internet. That could let people becomes distant. Organize the volunteer is
4、also a good way to help to make the knowledge of the environmental protect well-known.,2019/8/13,4,gone,commit crimes,let, help, make,Organizing,protection,commit criminal acts/behaviors,1.2.1 正确与否的凭证,（2）一致原则 例： A stretching spider web is stick each person sits in their own work room.A large number
5、of people are use computer within a stretching spider web.The web connect people and stand off them from each other.,5,第三人称单数,名词单复数,rooms,computers,using,sticks,connects,stands,sitting,2019/8/13,one another,every,1.2.1 正确与否的凭证,Last but not least, develop other kind of things to replace the disposabl
6、e plastic bag.The market economy and competitive society drives many people to study hard for higher academic degrees.,2019/8/13,Writing,6,bags,（3）明确修饰关系原则 例： But it is unfortunately that I found yesterday that my passport was lost.The old man is sad at abandoned by his children.Recently the problem
7、 of white pollution aroused widely concern all over the world.,7,1.2.1 正确与否的凭证,adj.n.,adv.v./adj.,prep.n./v.+ing,being,2019/8/13,1.2.1 正确与否的凭证,Because the terrible result of “white pollution” is much seriously.The first proposition that should be emphsis is let more and more individuals realize the
8、seriously of use plastic bag.启示：检查内容：语法部分。,2019/8/13,Writing,8,emphasized,to,seriousness,using,bags,（4）特殊结构正确使用原则 例： Only in this way, will we make our friendship more and more stronger.It is apparent the future of the culture is more brighter along with the globalization.The more we use the Interne
9、t to communicate with others, the more strange we become.,9,1.2.1 正确与否的凭证,比较级,The more, the more,that,2019/8/13,倒装,will we make,and stronger.,much,more是比较级,stranger,2019/8/13,10,1.2 写作基本语法,1.2.2 正式与否的凭证 （1）被动客观表达原则 例： As is seen from the picture, As is depicted in the picture It is vividly depicted
10、in the picture that It is universally acknowledged that It is believed that （2）无缩写原则 Id like toI would like to cantcannotisntis not,穿衣戴帽原则,寓意,描图,（2）无缩写原则,This time, the flower cant stand in the heavy rain. =12分We cant imagine a society full of adults having the ability like seven-year-old children.
11、=12分,2019/8/13,Writing,11,cannot,cannot,一、短文写作词句选择,1.3 写作功能句型 1.3.1 描述图画 （1）个体群体化原则1,2019/8/13,Writing,12,个体 群体 化少量人 大量群体,2006 Directions: Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should describe the photos briefly; interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them; give
12、your point of view.,（1）个体群体化原则1,A man writes Beckhams name on his face, and the other spends 300yuan making a Beckhams hairstyle.the young man in the photo, express their enthusiasm by writing his name on their faces, the one in the hair studio, spend as much as 300yuan for a hair style modeling on
13、that of Beckham. 19分范文选句,2019/8/13,Writing,14,Some, like,while others, like,（1）个体群体化原则1,Some, like +图中人物 in the picture, do sth, while others, like +图中人物 in the drawing, do sth. A man writes Beckhams name on his face, and the other spends 300 Yuan making a Beckhams hairstyle. 17words Some, like the
14、man in the picture, write Beckhams name on their faces, while others, like the other man in the hair studio, spend 300yuan making a Beckhams hairstyle. 30words,2019/8/13,Writing,15,10,13,写作公式,Some, like +图中人物 in the picture, do sth, while others, like +图中人物 in the drawing, do sth. a large number of
15、people people in increasing numbers an increasing number of people the majority of people 适用于一幅图写作。,（1）个体群体化原则1, like+图中人物 in the picture, do sth.,（1）个体群体化原则1,2008 In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments.,（1）个体群体化原则1,
16、The two disabled men help each other walk forward. Some, like the two disabled men in the picture, help one another walk forward. People in increasing numbers，like the two disabled men in the picture, help one another walk forward.,11,13,（1）个体群体化原则1,写作公式* 两幅图写作Some, like +图中人物 in the picture, do sth
17、., while others, like +图中人物 in the drawing, do sth. 一幅图写作(increasing), like+图中人物 in the picture, do sth.,2019/8/13,Writing,19,1.3.1 描述图画 （2）个体群体化原则2 people/human beings主语 those who 2005年 People should remember that they are much indebted to their parents for their birth and growth. Those who tried e
18、very means to avoid their duty of looking after their elders should bear in mind that they are much indebted to their parents for their birth and growth.,1.3 写作功能句型,2019/8/13,Writing,20,12,18,（2）个体群体化原则2,写作公式 Those who do sth. 2009 People do not talk to one another face to face. Those who communicat
19、e with others through Internet seldom talk to others face to face.,2019/8/13,Writing,21,10,13,1.3 写作功能句型,1.3.1 描述图画 （3）双重否定原则 2005This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of how elders are treated by their grown-up children in some of the families in China. 写作公式This picture reveals a not-uncom
20、mon phenomenon of+n./that+从句,2019/8/13,Writing,22,1.3 写作功能句型,1.3.1 描述图画 （4）比喻手法原则 写作公式A see(s) B as C. 2007 The goalkeeper sees himself as such a dwarf that he cannot keep the ball from the goal. The player/forward regards the keeper as a giant who almost cover the whole goal.,2019/8/13,Writing,23,s
21、ee: regard, view,1.3 写作功能句型,1.3.1 描述图画 （5）状语分词化原则 2003Looking at it carefully, the flower is protected from the rain outside the warm house.写作公式分词作状语，与主语主被动保持一致。,2019/8/13,Writing,24,13,=10,we find,green house,the flower is going to wither and die.,Living without the protection of the green house,1.
22、3.2 总结寓意 （1）强调化原则 2008It is teamwork that makes it possible for them to go anywhere they want to. 写作公式It is that makes it adj. to do sth 2002 It is love that makes it possible to overcome all difficulties.,1.3 写作功能句型,2019/8/13,Writing,25,=19,强调句强调的是成分（主、宾、状）.,1.3.2 总结寓意 （2）广泛化原则 2008It has been univ
23、ersally acknowledged that the ability of teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess. 写作公式It has been universally acknowledged that that anyone who wants to should possess.,1.3 写作功能句型,2019/8/13,Writing,26,=19,It has been universally acknowledg
24、ed that confidence is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.,（2）广泛化原则,(2010-Text1) Of all the changes that have taken place in English-language newspapers during the past quarter-century, perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline
25、 in the scope and seriousness of their arts coverage. 写作公式 Of all the changes that have taken place in during , perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline/sharp increase in .,2019/8/13,27,（2）广泛化原则,2009 Of all the changes that have taken place in the communication means during the
26、past half a century, perhaps the most far-reaching has been the inexorable decline in face-to-face intercourse.,2019/8/13,Writing,28,（2）广泛化原则,2010 Of all the changes that have taken place in international culture during the past half a century, perhaps the most far-reaching has been the sharp increa
27、se in culture blending.,2019/8/13,29,1.3.2 总结寓意 （3）动词名词化原则 2003The real implication of the author is that everyone has to meet difficulties in their life experience, so we have to make adequate preparations for them. 写作公式The real implication/meaning/indication of the author/picture(s) is that ,1.3 写作功能句型,2019/8/13,Writing,30,=17,The author implies that,（3）动词名词化原则,动词名词化扩展 2003We cant imagine a society full of adults having the ability like seven-year-old children.It is beyond imagination that a society is full of adults . 公式It is beyond imagination that ,2019/8/13,Writing,31,
