1、大学英语四级测试作文评分标准,2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。 8分：基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。,大学英语四级测试作文评分标准,11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。 字数不够扣分。（各段已给出的主题句均不得计入） 段落不够扣分。,Say no to pirated products,There are a lot of pirated pro
2、ducts in our market now. It made a bad effect to our lives and also made many companies had a big loss. Around my school, there are l lot of pirated CD sellers. A big deel of students have bought them. They did this because they are poor at intellectual property,评分样卷 (1),rights. They only wanted to
3、buy cheap thing but this is copyright infringement. If more and more people buy pirated CD, those singer wont sing because they cant earn enough money to work at music. Then we have no music. How terible are our lives if there are no music. I cant image it.,What we can do? We must say not to pirated
4、 products. We souldnt buy those pirated products and tell our friends not to buy too. We can force the law of intellectual property rights so that we didnt infringe sbs copyright then well never do it again.Lets say no to pirated products.,评分样卷 (1),Say no to pirated products,There are a lot of pirat
5、ed products in our market now. It made a bad effect to our lives and also made many companies had a big loss. Around my school, there are l lot of pirated CD sellers. A big deel of students have bought them. They did this because they are poor at intellectual property,评分样卷 (1),rights. They only want
6、ed to buy cheap thing but this is copyright infringement. If more and more people buy pirated CD, those singer wont sing because they cant earn enough money to work at music. Then we have no music. How terible are our lives if there are no music. I cant image it.,评分样卷 (1),5分,基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误
7、。,What we can do? We must say not to pirated products. We souldnt buy those pirated products and tell our friends not to buy too. We can force the law of intellectual property rights so that we didnt infringe sbs copyright then well never do it again.Lets say no to pirated products.,评分样卷（2）,Nowadays
8、 piracy is becoming a serious problem. Pirated products can be seen every where, including books, video tapes, and many digital products. This really does harm to society. Many consumers choose pirated products because of their low prices. But they dont realize intellectual property rights should be
9、 protected and this kind of behavior infringes copyrights of those who,评分样卷（2）,produced them initially. Because of piracy, many writers and singers have to stop writing or singing. Because the more books they write or the more songs they sing, the bigger loss they will make. They have lost confidenc
10、e of the market. On the other side, pirated products always have poor quality so that people bought them dont really benefit from the low price.,评分样卷（2）,From the harms mentioned above, we should take actions to fight piracy. First, the government can make laws to punish those selling pirated product
11、s. Second, the market can decline the price to encourage people to buy real products. Last but not least, more education should be given to help people realize the harm of selling or buying pirated prducts.,11分,切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误,评分样卷（3）,Nowdays, pirated products can be seen everywhe
12、re. Piracy has became a big problem of our society.What is its reason? Will it do bad to our society? We know intellectual property rights is very important. As soon as you write a novel, or draw a painting, you won property right. Because you spent your time, wasted you energy and that was a progre
13、ss of arts, others cant use without you agree.,评分样卷（3）,Whats the result if others directly copy your product? He can get wealth and fame easily, however youthe father of the product will get nothing.Its clear that copyright infringement is inlegal. If this kind of behavior cannot be controlled effec
14、tively, no one will write a novel carefully. Social market will be disturbed or even lead to a destruction.,评分样卷（3）,8分,基本切题，思想表达尚清楚，基本连贯，有个别严重的语言错误及用词不当，但可以理解。,Then how should we do? Several months ago many popular singers call on their fans not going to buy pirated CDs. Although pirated CDs are qui
15、te cheaper, they do bad to the popular song world. As a adult, we should know what is right. If we continue to buy pirated products, we will break the law.,评分样卷（4）,Presently, the phenomenon of piracy is quite serious. In many places we see people peddling pirated products. And it would sound strange
16、 if one says he has never used any pirated products.What factors account for this phenomenon? We can consider it from two aspects. On the one hand. Pirated products are much cheaper than copyrighted ones. So they are very attractive to people, especially,评分样卷（4）,.youngsters, who are not financially
17、well-off. On the other hand, with highly developed technology, it is not difficult to make pirated products. With one authorized copy, the illegal producers can make thousands of copies at a very low cost, thus making huge profits.In this way intellectual property rights are seriously infringed. Hon
18、est producers will lose the motivation to develop new products.,评分样卷（4）,Meanwhile, pirated products are often low quality, thus damaging the interests of buyers.Can we do something to stop the phenomenon? Yes! Firstly, we should stop using pirated products. Then their markets will perish. Secondly,
19、the government should take more effective measures to ban piracy. Finally, the price of authorized products should be lowered. If these suggestions can be put into practice, we can certainly stop piracy!,14分,切题，文章通顺，语言规范。句法有一定变化，用词适当。有个别小错，但不影响理解。,检查语法,1. 动词 时态，语态是否正确 2. 名词 单数、复数、可数、不可数，专有名词大小写 3. 主
20、谓一致 分清主句和从句，使各自的主谓一致 4. 形容词、副词 用法是否正确，比较级与最高级是否得当 5. 介词、连词 搭配是否正确 6. 其他关联词 用法是否正确 7. 单词拼写 8. 标点符号,九句话模板,1. 引导句（套入标题）,2. 主题句,3. 展开句（简单描述）,4. 主题句（提出论点）,5.6.7.,论据1论据2论据3,8. 总结句（概括全文）,9. 结束句（重复主题,第一段,第二段,第三段,Class work,套用九句话模板,Stop Smoking,（1）吸烟的问题越来越受到人们的关注 （2）吸烟的害处 （3）你的想法,Model,(1) There has never be
21、en an agreement as to the issue of smoking. (2) Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question. (3) They have realized that smoking does great harm to health.,Model,(4) The harm of smoking can be seen from the following. (5) First, it can cause cancer. (6) Second, it
22、 pollutes the environment. (7) Third, it causes great waste of money.,Model,(8) In short, smoking does great harm to health. (9) Effective measures should be taken to stop smoking.,Model ( developed one ),(1) There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking. (2) Recently, however, more a
23、nd more people begin to pay attention to this question, and some even write to the government calling for policies to stop smoking. (3) They have realized that smoking does great harm to the health of smokers and non smokers as well.,Model ( developed one ),(4) The harm of smoking can be seen from t
24、he following. (5) First, it can cause cancer. A recent survey by the WHO shows, of the diseases which cause death every year, nearly one third has to do with smoking. (6) Second, it pollutes the environment. Cigarettes ends may dirty our air and water.(7) Third, it causes great waste of money. Is it
25、 wise to spend nearly thirty yuan each day for something which will kill you eventually?,Model ( developed one),(8) In short, smoking does great harm to health. (9) It is high time that effective measures were taken to stop smoking.,Writing Samples,On Competition,On Competition (Sample 1),Peoples op
26、inions on competition vary from person to person. Some people like competition which, they argue, could urge people to work hard. The more fierce the competition is, the more sufficient they will be. They share the belief that it is the competition that results in modern civilization.,On Competition
27、 (Sample 1),Nevertheless, on the other hand, some people insist that our human beings shouldnt compete with one another any more. It is too tired to keep the rapid pace of the life. Cruel competition must lead to much pressure which is unnecessary.,On Competition (Sample 1),From my own perspective,
28、I think everything has two sides. And competition is no exception. Both of the two views make sense. We should learn to how to compete with and how to release pressure from competition. After all, you must face competition in modern society.,On Competition (Sample 2),Some people think that competiti
29、on is good to the development of the society. Because of competition, companies increase their quality of service to attract much more customers so that customers can enjoy better service. On the other hand, competition can inspire ones potential so that people work harder and more efficiently.,On C
30、ompetition (Sample 2),Moreover, others have a negative attitude to competition. They think that someone use bad manners to defeat his competitor due to competition and people become more and more merciless.,On Competition (Sample 2),I think that competition in a proper extent is nessecary. We cant d
31、eny the function of competition, but we also should compete with each others in a right and proper way. Only in a fair environment can we benefit from competition.,On Competition (Sample 3),Nowadays, there are more and more competitions in our life. And people have different ideas about them.,On Com
32、petition (Sample 3),Some people think that competition is necessary. It can helps us become stronger and find our disadvantages. If there is no competition, people can hardly make progress.,On Competition (Sample 3),However, some people against the view above. They think competition is useless in ou
33、r lives. Because too many competitions can cause arguments between two persons. And there are many unfair competitions now.,On Competition (Sample 3),In my opinion, competition is necessary. Only competition can help us make more progress. So we should be brave enough to face the competition in our
34、life.,On Competition (Sample 4),Nowadays, its common to see competition everywhere. You can see it on campus, in job market and in a swimming pool as well.everything has two sides. So do the opinions to competition.,On Competition (Sample 4),Some people insist that competition is part of human life
35、which can not be avoided. It has been there ever since man-kind came into being.yet, others do not share the same idea,On Competition (Sample 4),They argue that competition causes stress which lead to suicide and many other serious problems. Competition does harm to peoples health as well as the “health” of the entire society.,On Competition (Sample 4),As for me, I think that both of their reasons are partly right. Competition is unavoidable in modern society, and if it can be controlled to a certain extent, it will be good for people; if not, surely it will harm the society.,
