2017-2018学年七年级英语下册 书面表达（一）讲义 （新版）人教新目标版.doc

1、1书 面 表 达 （ 一 ） （ 讲 义 ）一、书面表达四步法请 以 “My ” 为 题 写 一 篇 英 语 短文 ， 描述 一 个 你 熟 悉 的 人。要求：1. 先将题目补充完整；2. 从外貌、兴趣、爱好、日常活动、职业等方面进行描述；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；4. 不 少 于 70 词。My 一审 审题半命题作文；写你熟悉的人；外貌、兴趣、爱好、日常活动、职业等； 禁止真实校名、人名；词数要求二理理要点 外貌、兴趣、爱好、日常活动、职业等理结构总 My father is strict with me in my study, but I love him.分 (1) Engl

2、ish teacher; tall; thin; strict; kind(2) on workdays; work; from morning to night; run; in the morning(3) on weekends; free; Saturday morning; take me out; have a walk; Saturday afernoon; help; homework;Sunday afternoon; go fishing with his friends总 This is my father. I love him.三定定人称 第三人称：my father

3、/he定顺序 部分地方考虑时间先后顺序定时态 一般现在时四查检查汉语式思维2动词形式固定搭配人称代词状语表达单词拼写例文赏析My FatherMy father is strict with me in my study, but I love him.He is an English teacher in Red Star Middle School. He is tall and thin with short black hair. He is strict but kind.On workdays, he is very busy working from morning to nig

4、ht.He likes getting up early and running in the morning.On weekends, he is usually free. So on Saturday morning, hed like to take me out and have a walk. On Saturday afternoon, he often helps me with my homework. Sometimes on Sunday afternoon, he goes fishing with his good friends.This is my father.

5、 I love him.二、写作训练营 描述交通方式日 常 生 活 中 ， 我 们 的 出 行 方 式 多 种 多 样 ， 你 心 目 中 最 好 的 出 行 方 式 是 什 么？ 请 以 “The Best Way for Me to Go to School” 为 题 写 一 篇 短 文 。要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名2. 词数：70 词左右一审 命题作文；我去学校最好的交通方式骑车二理理要点 是什么；为什么理结构总 The best way for me to go to school is bike riding.分 first, live not so far from scho

6、ol second, save time and money third, good for health总 So I think the best way for me to go to school is bike3riding. What about you?三定 第一人称；逻辑顺序；一般现在时四查例文赏析The Best Way For Me to Go to SchoolDifferent students go to school in different ways in my class, but I like going to school by bike.First, my

7、home is not far from school and it at most takes me 15 minutes to ride to school.Second, there is only one bus from my home to school. And it always takes me a lot of time to wait for the bus. I think its awaste(浪费) of time to spend long time waiting for it. But bike riding can save (节约) time.Third,

8、 bike riding is also a kind of exercise and it is good for my health.So I think bike riding is the best way for me to go to school.What about you?介绍活动情况现在是周六上午九点钟，根据下面 Linda 提供的信息，用现在进行时描述一下 Linda 一家人的活动情况。词数：70 词左右。father: read a newspapermother: clean the room Kate: practice the piano Linda: do he

9、r homework Tom: play with a toy car一审 记叙文；Linda 一家人周六上午九点的活动二理 理要点 5 个人，5 个要点理结构总 Its 9 oclock on Saturday morning. Lindas family are all at home.分 father, read a newspapermother, clean the room Kate, practice the piano Linda, do her homework4Tom, play with a toy car总 Everyone in the family is reall

10、y busy.三定 第三人称、长幼顺序、现在进行时四查例文赏析Its nine oclock on Saturday morning. Lindas family are all at home.Lindas father is reading a newspaper in the living room and her mother is cleaning the room now.Lindas sister, Kate, is practicing the piano in her own room. She is going to take part in a piano competition(比赛).Linda is doing her homework in her bedroom. Where is her little brother, Tom? Oh, he is playing with a toy car in the dining room.Everyone in the family is really busy, right?