1、短文改错 11、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 ( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线() 划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起) 不计分。Last month our class organized a hiking along the Chaobai River,which run through Hebei,
2、Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my disappoint, I found the river was serious polluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First, under my teachers help, I used the equipments from the school lab to test the quality of the river water. But then,I used the data I had collecte
3、d it to analyze the pollution of the water. Finally,I write a report on the pollution of the river to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we must make small changes to protect our water resources.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处每
4、处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分Nowadays fewer students take exercise due to various reason and some students fall ill every now and then because of they are not healthy or strong enough However， we
5、should take exercise regularly to improve our healthFirst of all， taking PE classes seriously In PE classes we can build up our bodies with the careful guidance of PE teachers Secondly， it is of great important to make it a routine to exercise after class or during breaks In addition， it was also a
6、good idea to join a sports club that you are interestedAs the old saying go， “The first wealth is health“ Lets do more exercise to live a better and healthy life3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（） ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线
7、，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。When I first reached junior high school without my parents, I was very happy. Then I saw them getting further away from school gate. I started crying because of the thought of not often seeing my parents drove me crazily, I was then ta
8、ken to my dorm in that I found other children very happy. I was sick because I hated eating the school food. I failed to concentrating in class. All I could think of was being at home with my family. As time gone by, I gradually adapted me to the school life. Thank to my parents, I finally learned t
9、o be independence and control my emotions.4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线() 划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起) 不计分。One Sunday, I was reading my book while it suddenly oc
10、curred to me that it was my mother birthday the next day. However, I forgot it complete. I was worried that I didnt prepare any present to her. At that moment, idea of online shopping came to my mind. I clicked the mouse and search some famous shopping websites. Having compared the price of many dre
11、ss, I chose one with a reasonable price which I supposed my mum would appreciate it and bought it as soon as possible. The next day I received the dress as expected without get out of my room. You see, online shopping is very convenient that it has made our life colorful.5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你
12、同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:把错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均匀仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起) 不计分。My father and I stayed at the south lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but
13、it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport .We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friend many photos taking in Beijing. The fo
14、od was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（） ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错
15、的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起)不计分。Yesterday we took part a tree planting activity organised by our class. Early-in the morning, we set out for Bantou Reservoir in Xiamen, When we were arrived there, we began to work immediately. Firstly, we dug holes that are slig
16、htly larger than the root balls. Next, we gentle placed the trees into- our new homes. After that, we refilled the holes use enough soil to support the root. Finally, we watered the trees. Three hours passed by after we knew it. Tired as we were, we felt exciting, talking and laughing all the way ho
17、me. How an unforgettable experience!7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线() 划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起) 不计分。In most schools, boys and girls learn together in a same cla
18、ssroom. Some private schools are for boys and girls only. Every province has official course that students will be taught in each grade. Schools lend textbooks their students. You will have to buy school supplies like pencils and paper for our children. Students can get help if they have special nee
19、ds included physical， emotional，behavioral and so on. Children got a report card several times during the school year tells you about their progress. Children must go to school every day. If they are absent from school because of they arc sick or for personal reasons, you may inform the school.8、假定英
20、语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线() 划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起) 不计分。My classmates and I decide to do something for our coming graduation. After the heated discussion, we
21、 agreed on making a video to record their school life experiences.Material collecting took us a whole weekwe interviewed our teachers or took pictures of almost every aspect of our school life. Edit the interview videos and pictures were tough. We debated about what to put into the video. Some compr
22、omises and arguments were unavoidable, but the video turned out to be perfectly. Several days later, when the video played at the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers had a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievements.答案以及解析1 答案及解析：答案： Last month our
23、class organized a hiking along the Chaobai River,which through runsHebei, Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my , I found the river was intdspoimeeiorlypolluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First, my tundwithteachers help, I used the from the school lab to test the qual
24、ity of the river water. equipntsmthen,I used the data I had collected it to analyze the pollution of the water. Finally,I ButAnd ritewoa report on the pollution of the river to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we (或删去 must)make small changes to protect
25、 our water mustholdresources.解析：第一处:考查时态及主谓一致。句意 :上个月,我们班组织了一次沿着潮白河的徒步旅行 ,这条河流过河北、北京和天津。河流的走向是一种自然现象,所以用一般现在时,which 指代的是潮白河,所以用单数第三人形式。所以要把 run 改为 runs。第二处:考查名词。句意:令我十分失望的是,我发现这条河受到了严重的污染。固定短语 to ones +disappointment 意为“令某人失望的是”,应该用名词 disappointment 做介词 to 的宾语。所以要把 disappoint 改成 disappointment。第三处:考
26、查副词。句意:令我十分失望的是,我发现这条河受到了严重的污染。此处是副词修饰动词 pollute,seriously 是副词 “严重“。所以要把 serious 改成 seriously。第四处:考查不定式。句意:在那时,我决心尽我所能保护它。此处是动词不定式作目的状语 ,所以加 to。第五处:考查固定短语。句意 :在老师的帮助下,我使用学校实验室的设备检测河水的质量。介词短语:with my teachers help 意为“在老师的帮助下”,所以要把 under 改成 with。第六处:考查名词。句意:在老师的帮助下,我使用学校实验室的设备检测河水的质量。句中equipment 是不可数名
27、词,所以不与 s 连用。所以要把 equipments 改成 equipment。第七处:考查连词。句意:接着我使用收集的数据来分析被污染的水。根据上下文语义可知应该是顺接关系,应该使用 and。所以要把 But 改成 And。第八处:考查句子结构。句意 :接着我使用收集的数据来分析被污染的水。关系代词that/which 指代先行词 date 在定语从句中作 collect 的宾语,可以省略,原句中的 it 是多余的。所以要删除 it。第九处:考查时态。句意:我最后写了一篇关于这条河的污染报告给当地政府。本文讲述的是过去的事情,全文都是还有一般过去时,所以要把 write 改为 wrote。
28、第十处:考查虚拟语气。句意 :在班级里我做了一次陈述,在这次陈述里我建议我们要做出改变来保护我们的水资源。动词 suggest 引导的宾语从句用 should+动词原形,should 可以省略。所以要删除 must。2 答案及解析：答案：Nowadays fewer students take exercise due to various and some students fall ill reasonevery now and then because of they are not healthy or strong enough. , we should /HwevrThusfoex
29、ercise regularly to improve our health. First of all, taking PE classes seriously. In PE takingeclasses we can build up our bodies the careful guidance of PE teachers. Secondly, it is of withundergreat to make it a routine to exercise after class or during breaks. In addition, it tanimporcealso a go
30、od idea to join a sports club that you are interested . As the old saying , wsi Aingoes“The first wealth is health.“ Lets do more exercise to live a better and life.healtyir解析： 1.reason 改为 reasons考查名词复数reason 是可数名词，其前有 various 修饰时要用复数形式故 reason 改为 reasons2 去掉 of考查词语用法because 意为“ 因为“，是连词，连接两个句子构成原因状语
31、从句；because of 意为“因为“ ，是介词，接名词或代词此处应是前者故去掉 of3 However 改为 Therefore/Thus考查副词前后两个分句是因果关系，用副词Therefore/Thus故 However 改为 Therefore/Thus4 taking 改为 take考查动词祈使句中用动词原形故 taking 改为 taketaking 改为take5 with 改为 under考查介词under the guidance of 意为“ 在 的指导下“ ，是固定搭配故 with 改为 under6 important 改为 importance考查固定句型be+of+
32、抽象名词，相当于 be+该抽象名词的形容词形成，主要用来表示主语的性质这一结构中的抽象名词前可用 great， little， no， some， any， not much 等修饰，以表示不同的程度，抽象名词常用 importance， value， use 等故 important 改为 importance7 was 改为 is考查动词时态因本文讲述的是一般事实，要用一般现在时态故 was改为 is8 加 in考查固定搭配be interested in 意为“对感兴趣“ ，是固定搭配故加 in9 go 改为 goes考查主谓一致主语 the old saying 是单数形式，谓语动词也
33、用单数形式goes故 go 改为 goes10 healthy 改为 healthier考查形容词比较级and 是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，better 和 healthier 是并列定语，都用形容词比较级故 healthy 改为 healthier3 答案及解析：答案：When I first reached junior high school my parents, I was very happy. Then I saw withouthem getting further away from school gate. I started crying because o
34、f the thought of not A/themyoften seeing my parents drove me , I was then taken to my dorm in I found other crazil thawicchildren very happy. I was sick because I hated eating the school food. I failed to onetrigain class. All I could think of was being at home with my family. As time by, I graduall
35、y gtadapted to the school life. to my parents, I finally learned to be meyslfThanks indepctand control my emotions.解析：第一处：考查介词。without“没有”，with“和在一起”。根据下文 Then I saw them getting further away 可知，作者的父母陪着他去上学。故 without 改为 with。第二处：考查定冠词或形容词性物主代词。此处特指“我学校的校门”，应使用定冠词或形容词性物主代词。故 school 前加 the/my。第三处：考查连词
36、。because 是连词，其后接从句；because of 后接词组，此处是从句，应去掉 because 后的 of。故去掉 because 后的 of。第四处：考查形容词。固定搭配：drive sb./sth.+adj.“使某人/某事怎么样”。故 crazily 改为crazy。第五处：考查定语从句。此处先行词是 my dorm，关系词在介词 in 后，应使用关系代词which 引导，in which=where。故 that 改为 which。第六处：考查动词形式。固定搭配：fail to do sth.“没能做某事 ”。故 concentrating 改为concentrate。第七处：
37、考查动词形式。as 引导时间状语从句，此处做谓语，根据语境，应使用一般过去时。故 gone 改为 went。第八处：考查代词。固定搭配：adapt oneself to“ 使自己适应”。故 me 改为 myself。第九处：考查固定短语。固定短语：thanks to“由于，多亏了”。故 Thank 改为 Thanks。第十处：考查形容词。此处做表语，意为“最终我学会了自立”，应使用形容词。故independence 改为 independent。4 答案及解析：答案： One Sunday, I was reading my book it suddenly occurred to me th
38、at it was my whilenbirthday the next day. However, I forgot it . I was worried that I didnt mothers compltyprepare any present her. At that moment, idea of online shopping came to my mind. I tofrAtheclicked the mouse and some famous shopping websites. Having compared the price of seachdmany , I chos
39、e one with a reasonable price which I supposed my mum would appreciate dresit and bought it as soon as possible. The next day I received the dress as expected without out of my room. You see, online shopping is convenient that it has made our life getin verysocolorful.解析：1. while 与延续性动词连用,一般用进行时;whe
40、n 与非延续性动词连用,一般用过去时。此处是 occurred 要用 when 不用 while,故把 while 改为 when。2. 后面有名词 birthday,此处表示妈妈的生日,用所有格形式, 故把 mother 改为 mothers。3. 此处修饰动词 forgot 用副词,指完全忘记,故把 complete 改为 completely。4. prepare for“为做准备”, 是固定搭配,故把 to 改为 for。5. 此处特指网上购物的想法,表示特指用定冠词 the,故在 idea 前加 the。6. 此处与 and 前的动词 clicked 并列也用过去时,故抵 searc
41、h 改为 searched。7. dress 是可数名词 ,此处由 many 修饰用复数形式,故把 dress 改为 dresses。8. 句中包含定语从句,先行词是 price,关系代词 which 指代 price 在定语从句中作宾语,it 是多余的,故删除 it。9. 在介词 without 后动词用-ing 形式,故把 get 改为 getting。10.句中是 sothat句型,表示“如此以至于”,故把 very 改为 so。5 答案及解析：答案：My father and I stayed at the south lake Hotel for a week when we Bei
42、jing last vistedmonth. It is in the downtown area, it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public /butsondtransport .We lived in a double-room with a big bath. What I liked best the free comfrtlybe werashigh-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also
43、sharedmy friend many photos in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, forwithtkingaeand we enjoyed several local .dshiIt is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of who is going to a mineBeijing.解析：1.第一句:visitvisited。 考查时态。因为句中有明确的表示过去的时间状语 last month,所以visit 要用过去
44、式。故把 visit 改为 visited。2. 第二句:butso/and。考查连词。根据上下文的逻辑关系可知,此处为因果关系,而不是转折关系,故把 but 改为 so。也可以理解成顺承关系 ,把 but 改为 and。3. 第二句:去掉 anywhere 前的 to。 考查介词。anywhere 为副词,其前不需用介词。故去掉to。4. 第三句:comfortablycomfortable。 考查形容词。此处应该用形容词修饰后面的名词double-room。故把 comfortably 改为 comfortable。5. 第四句:werewas。 考査主谓一致。根据句子结构可判断出 Wha
45、t I liked best 是主语从句。一般来说,主语从句视为单数,故应用 was。6. 第六句:forwith。 考查介词。短语 share with sb. sth.的意思是“和某人分享某物/事”。故把 for 改为 with。7. 第六句:takingtaken。 考査非谓语动词。根据句子结构可判断出,此处在句子中作定语,修饰 photos,又因 take 与 photos 是动宾关系,故用过去分词 taken。8. 第七句:dishdishes 。 考査名词复数。 dish 在此表示“ 菜肴”, 为可数名词,前面有 several修饰,故用复数形式。9. 第八句:such 后加 a。
46、 考査冠词。hotel 为可数名词单数,且此处表泛指,故要在其前加上a。10. 第八句:memine 。 考查代词。此处是双重所有格 ,of 后应该用名词性物主代词 mine。6 答案及解析：答案：Yesterday we took part a tree planting activity organised by our class. Early-in the Ainmorning, we set out for Bantou Reservoir in Xiamen, When we were arrived there, we began to work immediately. Fir
47、stly, we dug holes that slightly larger than the root balls. Next, we arewplaced the trees into- new homes. After that, we refilled the holes enough gentlyourthei sinuegsoil to support the . Finally, we watered the trees. Three hours passed by we knew it. rts aftrboTired as we were, we felt , talkin
48、g and laughing all the way home. an unforgettable xcitnged HwWhtexperience!7 答案及解析：答案：In most schools, boys and girls learn together in same classroom. Some private schools atheare for boys girls only. Every province has official that students will be taught in andor courseach grade. Schools lend te
49、xtbooks their students. You will have to buy school supplies like Atpencils and paper for children. Students can get help if they have special needs uryo includegphysical， emotional，behavioral and so on. Children a report card several times during the goteschool year / you about their progress. Children must go to school every day. A/thawictelsingIf they are absent from school because of they arc sick or for personal reasons, you inform mayustthe school.解
