1、英语应用文写作,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,英语句子（Sentences）英语段落（Paragraphs）英语篇章（Essay）,写作基础知识 (Basic Writing Skills),英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,第一节 英语句子 (Sentences),1.1.1.英语基本句型1.1.2.英语句子种类1.1.3.有效句子,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,1.1.1.英语基本句型 （Basic Elements of a Sentence）,英语句子的主要构成成份有： S = Subject 主语 V = Verb 动词 O = Object 宾语 C = Complement 补语 A
2、 = Adverbial 状语,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,英语的七种基本句型： SV: 主谓 SVO: 主谓宾 SVC: 主谓补 SVA: 主谓状 SVOO: 主谓（间接）宾（直接）宾 SVOC: 主谓宾补 SVOA: 主谓宾状,此外还有比较常用的There be 句型，表示“存在，有”,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,SV: The sun is shining. SVO: You should also consider this. SVC: The apple tastes good. SVA: I was at college. SVOO: Living at college giv
3、es me a sense of responsibility. SVOC: That makes me responsible for my own life. SVOA: You can put the dish on the table. There be：There are friendly people around to talk with.,Samples,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,Your dinner seems ready. ( ) I must send my parents a Christmas card. ( ) That class interested me
4、. ( ) My school is on the next street. ( ) Many students find that book very helpful. ( ) You may put your umbrella under the table. ( ) She was smiling. ( ) We have made her the head of our group. ( ),同步练习 Now read the following sentences and tell which clause type they belong to.,SVC,SVOO,SVO,SVA,
5、SVOC,SVOA,SV,SVOC,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,1.1.2.英语句子种类 （Types of Sentences）1.句子按其用途可分为陈述句、疑问句、祈使句、感叹句 2.句子按其结构可分为简单句、并列句、复合句、并列复合句,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,陈述句（Declarative Sentence): a declarativesentence makes a positive or negative statementOur warehouses have limited facilities.He is not the rival in negotiation.疑问
6、句 (Interrogative Sentence): a interrogative sentence asks aquestion.Will you please pay your prompt attention to this matter? (General Question),Example,我们的仓库设施很有限。,他不是谈判对手。,Example,对此问题，请及时加以注意。,Example,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,How old are you? (Special Question)Is the delegation leaving today or tomorrow?(A
7、lternative Question)You didnt go to Shanghai, did you? (Tag Question)祈使句(Imperative Sentence): an imperative sentenceexpresses a command or a request.Please think over the local tax rate.Dont open the door.感叹句( Exclamatory Sentence): an exclamatory sentence shows a strong feeling or emotion.What a l
8、ever boy he is!How careless she is!,Example,Example,Example,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,简单句（Simple Sentence): a simple sentence is one that consists of a single independent clause.We would appreciate a prompt reply.并列句（Compound Sentence): a compound sentence is onethat contains two or more independent clauses. I
9、 have finished the work, but there is still muchto do.,Example,Example,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,复合句（Complex Sentence): a complex sentence isone that contains one independent clause and oneor more subordinate or dependent clauses.I was reading a book when he came.并列复合句（Compound-complex Sentence): a compound-co
10、mplex sentence is one that contains at least two main clauses and at least one dependent clause. Inother words, it is a combination of a compound and a complex sentence She wears a red dress when she is in good mood,but she wears a blue one when she is in bad mood.,Example,Example,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,1.1
11、.3.有效句子(Effective Sentences)什么是有效句子？有效句子就是好句子。好句子除了语法结构正确外，必须思想完整，表达准确，生动形象，才能有效地表达作者的思想。那么如何写出好句子即有效句子呢？应遵循以下几点：,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,完整的句子 (Completeness)清晰的句子 (Clarity)简洁的句子 (Conciseness)平行结构的句子（Parallelism)5. 灵活多变的句子 (Variety),英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,1.写完整的句子 (Completeness)一个完整的句子既包括结构上的完整，也包括意义上的完整。(1) 结构上的完整,
12、英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,Sentence Completeness,Wrong: My name Helen.,汉语句子可以不用动词，主语也可以省略，而英语句子一般需要有主语和谓语动词才算完整。再者，与汉语不同，英语句子中及物动词的宾语不能省略。我们还可以用that、who或because之类的词把小句子连在一起，组成大句子。例如：,Wrong: They eat rice, and we eat, too.,Correct: My name is Helen.,Correct: They eat rice, and we eat rice, too.,Example,英语应用文写作多媒
13、体教学课件,Wrong: Friendly people, another thing I like about college.,Correct: Friendly people, thats another thing I like about college.,Wrong: Some people have a natural ability to learn languages quickly. Because they know how to listen.,Correct: Some people have a natural ability to learn languages
14、quickly because they know how to listen.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,None of the following sentences are complete. Make necessary corrections to make them complete.,1. I dislike dogs because very smelly (气味难闻).,2. The dogs always noisy and try to jump on me when I go to visit.,-I dislike dogs because they are ve
15、ry smelly.,-The dogs are always noisy and try to jump on me when I go to visit them.,3. Ways of naming new babies different around the world.,-Ways of naming new babies are different around the world.,同步练习,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,4. In Guangzhou is hotter than in Beijing.,5. Dogs love to play with sticks. Fo
16、r example, go to get a stick if you throw it.,-In Guangzhou, it is hotter than in Beijing.,-Dogs love to play with sticks. For example, they go to get a stick if you throw it.,-Its too cold in this room.,6. Is too cold in this room.,7. Because we dont have enough time to take care of a pet.,8. A boo
17、k that you like.,- That is a book that you like.,-Because we dont have enough time to take care of a pet, we dont keep one.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,简单陈述句的语序 （Word order in Simple Statements）,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,bought,a hat,yesterday,The children,ran,home,The driver,shouted at,me,angrily,The car,stopped,suddenly,
18、Jack,read,the book,quietly,in his room,all afternoon,名，代，数，短语，从句,谓语动词,名，代宾，数，短语，从句,副词，相当于副词，短语和从句,I,They,are sitting,behind me,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,1.The film I enjoyed yesterday 2. A tree in the corner of the garden he planted. 3.This morning a book I from the library borrowed 4. A new school built they
19、in our village last year.,I,enjoyed,the film,yesterday,He,planted,a tree,In the corner of the garden,I,borrowed,a book,from the library,this morning,They,built,a new school,in our village,last year,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,(2)意义上的完整意义上的完整指句意要完整。它至少是一个简单句，只能有一个中心思想。请看下列句子：a. We are going to meet Jean Harris,an
20、d she is a professor of Englishliterature. Jim is one of the fastest runners.Ernest Hemingway was an American novelist, and he won the Nobel Prize for Literature in 1954.,Example,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,以上三个句子都不符合句子只有一个中心思想这一要求，句意不完整。可作如下修改： a. We are going to meet Jean Harris, and she is a professor of Engl
21、ish literature. 修改： We are going to meet Jean Harris, who is a professor of English literature.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,Jim is one of the fastest runners. 修改： Jim is one of the fastest runners of our school.Ernest Hemingway was an American novelist, and he won the Nobel Prize for Literature in 1954. 修改： Erne
22、st Hemingway, an American novelist, won the Nobel Prize for Literature in 1954.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,2.写清晰的句子 (Clarity)写作要注意句子的清晰度。以下几种情况妨碍文章的清晰，影响读者的理解。(1) 缺乏必要的细节。简洁尽管重要，但必要细节的缺乏也会使读者产生误解甚至不知所云。例如： a. He loves sports much more than his sister. b. When a person gets married, you take on new responsibilit
23、ies. c. The city has about one million.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,a句既可理解为“他比妹妹更喜欢运动”，也可以理解为“他喜爱运动胜过喜爱他妹妹”。为了使意义清晰明了，应该在该句的后半部补上相应的谓语：修改： He loves sports much more thanhis sister does.或：He loves sports much more thanhe loves his sister.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,b. When a person gets married, you take on new responsibilit
24、ies.b句中的a person和you 指代不明。 应改为：When a person gets married, he takes on new responsibilities.(泛指)或：When you get married, you take on newresponsibilities. (特指)c. The city has about one million.c句中，“one million”究竟指什么，缺乏必要的细节说明，应改为：修改： The city has a population of one million.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,(2) 缺乏连贯性。一
25、个完整的意思被不必要地切割成几个句子，这样 一连串的短句由于未能体现出相互间的关系，读起来费 解，妨碍思维。为了使句子连贯，应注意不要将联系密切的词分开； 应围绕一个中心意思，多用修饰语（如分词短语、介词短 语、从句等）。例如：Some people can not distinguish between colors .they aresaid to be color-blinded. 此句将其中一句改成定语从句 应该为：Some people who can not distinguish betweencolors are said to be color-blinded.,英语应用文写
26、作多媒体教学课件,b. He found the kitchen window open. He put a ladder against the window. He climbed in. 此句子可改为： Finding the kitchen window open, he put a ladder against it and climbed in.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,(3) 随意转换。英语句子的时态、语态、语气等在句中必须保持一致，随意转换往往造成句子意思模糊不清。 时态的随意转换。 They did not know when they will go to the G
27、reat Wall.应改为：They did not know when they would go to the Great Wall.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,b. He worked late into the night yesterday but gets up early this morning.应改为： b. He worked late into the night yesterdaybut got up early this morning.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件, 语态和主语的随意转换。 He was running very hard in the rac
28、e and his ankle was broken.应改为：He was running very hard in the race and broke his ankle.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,b. The teacher left the classroom after the lecture was finished.应改为：The teacher left the classroom after he finished the lecture.或：Having finished the lecture, the teacher left the classroom.,英语应
29、用文写作多媒体教学课件,c. She reviewed the lessons and all the exercisesassigned by the teacher were done.应改为：She reviewed the lessons and did all the exercises assigned by the teacher.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,语气随意转换。 a. First stop the noise and then you may start discussion.应改为：First stop the noise and then start disc
30、ussion.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,b. Students should learn to solve problems independently. Dont rely on your parents help.应改为： b. Students should learn to solve problems independently. They should not rely on their parents help.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件, 人称和数的随意转换。a. If one has talents, we will belikely to succeed.应改为：
31、If one has talents, one will be likelyto succeed.或: If we have talents, we will be likely to succeed.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,b. If a person is selfish, they will have few friends. 应改为： b. If a person is selfish, he will have few friends.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件, 代词指代不明。 The pollution in this area is serious; they sh
32、oulddo something about it. 应改为：The pollution in this area is serious; the governmentshould do something about it.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,同步练习: Correct the following sentences if necessary,There are always a lot of good news over the radio. Each of the plans has its advantage. Either you or I are to clean th
33、e room. All those who want to go on the trip should get his equipment ready immediately.,is,am,their,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,5. Paid little attention to his table manners.6.The teacher giving such a hard exam.,-He paid little attention to his table manners.(add a subject),- The teacher is giving such a hard
34、exam. (add a helping verb),英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,7.When only five years old, my father took me to a circus(杂技团).,_ When only five years old, I was taken toa circus by my father. _ When I was only five years old, my fathertook me to a circus.,8. A car drove down the street decked with ribbon.（用缎带装饰起来的） _ A
35、car decked with ribbon drove down the street. (Misplaced modifier误置修饰语）,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,3.写简洁的句子 (Conciseness)简洁就是用尽可能少的词表达尽可能充分的意思。在不改变句子意义的情况下，在能用词的地方，不用短语；在能用短语的地方不用句子。,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,比较下列两个句子： a. He expresses a number of clever expressions much to the audiences delight. He delighted the audience
36、with his clever expressions b. This morning I went to the classroom, when I got there, I saw many people in the classroom. This morning I went to the classroomand saw many people there.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,要想使句子简洁应注意以下几点：(1) 避免重复意义相同的词。 a. It was blue in color. b. It was small in size. c. In my opinion,
37、I think your plan isfeasible. d. Mary is a quiet and careful woman. 以上划线部分都属于意义重复，应去掉。,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,又如：He gave many reasons for his failure, but the reasons he gave were not convincing. 应改为：He gave many reasons for his failure, but none of them was convincing.,Example,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,(2) 避免使用累赘的词。
38、累赘的词指的是拖泥带水，啰啰唆唆的词或词组。例如： She was told of the fact that eating junk foodmight harm her health. b. Mrs. Smith likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France. c. There are some students who cheat in exams. 以上划线部分都是累赘的词，应去掉。,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,同步练习,The chairman will give up his job nextyear
39、because of old age. -The chairman will retire next year.,The woman who is dressed in black over there is the person who is now in charge of our sales department. -The woman in black over there is the manager of our sales department.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,4.写平行结构的句子（Parallelism)在一个句子中，有几个表达相近或相对意义的并列成分时，应该使
40、用词性一致的排比结构，这就是写作中的平行结构原则。两三个词性相同的词连成一串，形成平行结构。这种结构能使句子显得严谨，层次分明，增强感染力。例如：,Example,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,a. The article is short, informative, andreading it was easy,应该为： The article is short, informative, and easy to read. (three adjectives),b. Knowing what to do and to do it well willbring you success.,应该
41、为 Knowing what to do and doing it well will bring you success. (two gerund phrases),英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,再看下例：In summary, I do like a lot of things about college, as I said beforebeing on my own, talking with friendly people, having Fridays off. (这里是3个动名词短语并列。),英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,同步练习 1. She spends her free t
42、ime reading, listening to music, and she works in the garden.She spends her free time reading, listening to music and working in the garden.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,2. The teacher told us that we should read our text and to write a short review of it. The teacher told us that we should read our text and writ
43、e a short review of it. Or: The teacher told us to read our text and write a short review of it.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,3. Mr. Butler is a man of wide experience and who is very popular with his co-workers. Mr. Butler is a man of wide experience and great popularity among his co-workers.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,4. W
44、ould you prefer to go for a walk outside or staying indoors?,Would you prefer to go for a walk outside or stay indoors?,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,5. Please clean the kitchen, the heat must turn down, and lock the doors.,Please clean the kitchen, turn down the heat, and lock the doors.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,6. The man
45、ager told Henry that he had only two choices: to work harder or leaving the company.,The manager told Henry that he had only two choices: to work harder or to leave the company.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,7. My best friend is honest, clever, and works hard., My best friend is honest, clever, and hard-working.,英
46、语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,8. After the long trip, I was tired out, thirsty, and wanted to eat.,After the long trip, I was tired out, thirsty, and hungry.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,5.写灵活多变的句子 (Variety)要使文章生动吸引人，写作时要经常变换句型和句子结构。(1) 句子开头多样化,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件, 分词或分词短语开头。 a. We reached our destination exhausted. 应该为：Exhausted, we
47、 reached our destination. b. I finished my homework and began to review the lessons. 应该为： Having finished my homework, I began to review the lessons.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件, 形容词开头。 He was intelligent and hard-working, and he graduated with honors.应该为： Intelligent and hard-working, hegraduated with honors.,英
48、语应用文写作多媒体教学课件, 介词短语开头。 a. The girl was in despair and turned to her friends for help. 应该为： In despair, the girl turned toher friends for help.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件, 不定式短语开头。 a. He worked hard day and night to pass the exams. 应该为：To pass the exams, he workedhard day and night.b. He spoke slowly and emphatically to make everything clear. 应该为： To make everything clear, he spoke slowly and emphatically.,英语应用文写作多媒体教学课件,(2) 句型多样化。用排比句、修辞疑问句、倒装句等多样化的句型能增添语言的渲染力，增加文章的艺术色彩。例如：a. The more we get together, the happier wellbe.b. Why is it that the more connected we get, themore disconnected I feel?,
