1、英语四级作文写偏题篇一：2015 年 6 月大学英语四级作文真题及范文2015 年 6 月大学英语四级考试作文真题及范文How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provid
2、ed modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support.
3、 Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if theyd seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for comm
4、unication, entertainment, banking and shopping.True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online porn
5、ography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.范文一As is clearly depicted in the above picture, a daughter tells his mother a piece of good news that she has bee
6、n admitted to a university as her mother desires. There is no denial in saying that the cartoon leaves us such a deep impression that we cannot help thinking over a question: What role should parents play in their childrens growth?From my point of view, during the process of a childs growth, the rol
7、e of parents is mainly listed as the following two aspects. On one hand, there is no doubt that parents are liable to take good care of their children. On the other hand, in childrens personal growth, parents ought to play a role as a person who helps children develop self-dependence, which carries
8、more significant to childrens future life. In other words, parents should encourage their sons or daughters to be independent rather than reliant on others.To conclude, in childrens personal growth, parents are responsible to care for their children. However, considering that they will grow up and l
9、ive their own life in some day, parents should enable their children to acquire the ability to be self-independent.Go to school, the right choiceAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon given above, we can observe that a son, holding a smart phone, says to his mom, “why am I going to school if my phone
10、 already knows everything?” there is no doubt that the picture strongly reflects that phenomenon that more and more students object the idea of going to school when they have a phone, which can help them know everything. However, it is by no means a sensible idea.It is generally acknowledged that go
11、ing to school is not outdated. Whereas, it will remain as vital as it used to be. To begin with, going to school makes it possible to study with classmates and make progress together. As the old saying goes, “many hands make light work.” If students can study together, they can arouse the interest a
12、nd cooperate with each other, thus making study more easy and enjoyable. Whats more, going to school means the face-to-face communication. It goes without saying that this way is more direct and effective, where we can raise questions and solve all the questions on spot. Last but not least, mobile p
13、hones cannot replace school. When using mobile phones. There are more chances for students to distract their attention. In addition, they may easily addicted to the games on the phone.On the whole, as far as I am concerned, mobile phones do help us study in some ways. Nevertheless, it can by no mean
14、s replace go to school. Going to school is the sensible choice. And school is the place where you can benefit the most.篇二：大学英语四级写作评分标准英语四级考试作文评分标准一、作文评分标准1.本题满分为 15 分。2.阅卷标准共分五等:2 分、5 分、8 分、11 分及 14 分。各有标准样卷 1 至 2 份。3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如 8 分）相似，即定为该分数（即 8 分）;若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可加 1 分（即 9 分）或减 1
15、分（即 7 分） 。但不得加或减半分。4.评分标准:2 分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5 分基本切题。表达思路不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8 分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11 分切题。表达思路清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14 分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。二、 作文的种类若从作文体裁划分，英文作文有议论文（Argumentative Composition） 、记叙文（Narrative Composition） 、描写文（D
16、escriptive Composition）和说明文（Expositive Composition） ，等等。四、六级作文最常见的是前两种。但若从考试的题型来看，则包括以下几种:1、提纲式作文用英文或中文给出提纲（outline ） ，要求按提纲写作，目前来说，这种提纲经常是以三段的形式给出，又称三段式作文，这是四级考试的主要形式。如：1993 年 6 月大学英语四级作文题。2、图表式作文包括表格式作文。这类作文要求考生用简洁、生动的语言把图中所提供的信息准确、完整地表达出来。这类作文在四级考试中只是偶然才会出现。如:1991 年 6 月四级考试的作文题。3、情景式作文用中文或英文给出一个情
17、景，让你自己去说明或评论。这类作文多见于六级和 TOEFL 考试之中。例:有些发明如电灯、火车、电机等，对人类极为重要。请再举一个你认为重要的发明事例，并说明你为什么认为它重要?三、 写作的方法（这里只谈四级中出现最多的提纲式）提纲式（三段式）作文（以考场中占绝大多数的议论文写法为主）（一）抛开句子的构成、段落的展开、各类文体作文的写作技巧等理论不说，单就实用的原则来看，写四级作文应注意的主要方面有五:1.切题 2.干净 3.减少错误 4.开门见山 5.闪光点。1.切题。拿到作文试卷后的第一件事就是审题。作文不跑题，这似乎已是老生常谈，但要完全做到，也并非像有些考生想象的那般轻而易举。例如:B
18、enefits of Sports（运动的好处）自然应该写运动的好处。但有些考生在列举了一系列运动的优点之后，又写道:“运动固然好处很多，但也应避免运动的过量，否则，过量的运动还是有害的。它可以使人过度疲劳，损害心肌，拉伤大腿，等等。 ”殊不知，这样写着写着，不知不觉中已跑题了。本文要求你写运动的“好处” 。至于其“副作用”或“坏处” ，根本不应在文章的讨论范围之内。又如: 有的考生写“How university graduates find work”一文，竟写成了自己喜欢什么样的工作。这样一来，你词汇量再大，语法知识再好，也只能是“南辕北辙”了。假如把文章的重点放在“如何”一词上，就算抓
19、住了要害。比如如何去面试，如何写自我简介，如何进行自我包装和推销，等等。由此看来，切题一事，绝不可掉以轻心。2.干净。干净本不应列在作文的五项注意事项之内，但大家不要忘记，作文是人改的，人是有情感的。自然是喜欢干净讨厌潦草肮脏。阅卷人员每人每天要批改上百份试卷。试想你的作文如果潦草不清，成片涂改，他们会费力地去辨别甚至猜想你的本意吗?因此，作文干不干净已不再是一个战术性小事，而成了一个战略性问题。记住，把你的作文写得干净整齐就等于向阅卷人员发送一个信息“老师，我尊重你的辛勤劳动!”这对自己作文的得分，不是很有帮助吗?3.减少错误。写作过程中碰到自己不会写或拿不准的词或句型，是写还是不写?我们的
20、看法是，尽可能不写，可以采取避开或用别的替代的方法，英语中叫做“play safe”。 四级作文万一写不太高明，那也首先要保证减少错误:尽量让你的作文做到无懈可击! 例如:About Hong KongThe Present StateHong Kong s PastIts Future让我们以第一段香港的“现状”为例来看一下:Hong Kong is in the South of China.It is a beautiful and prosperous city.Its people are brave and diligent.Its position is unique and i
21、ts economy is booming.People call it“the pearl in the east”.其中，当你写到 prosperous，diligent，unique，booming 等词的时候，若是拿不准，怎么办呢?这时，脑子要学会急转弯，可以用busy，hardworking，special，甚至 good 来替代。尽管 busy 并不能完全代表 prosperous 的意思，但是，车水马龙、热闹繁忙的景象，还是可以基本上表达出来的。需要指出的是， “play safe”这一招并不意味着我们不必下苦功去记一些必要的、十分基本的词汇，有些词的使用率很高，比如 compu
22、ter，environment，efficiency 等，是避不开的。还有的考生上了考场，连 modern，society，pollution，甚至 benefit 这类词都拼写不准，那就不能不给人一个基本功太差的印象。4.开门见山。5. 闪光点。这两个术语是什么意思呢?让我们看一看“ Good Health”这篇作文。Importance of good healthWays to keep fit.My own practices.先看第一段“好身体的重要性 ”，有的考生写道:“With the rapid development of our economy，with the impro
23、vement of our living standard，with more and more people s realization of the importance of good health，now people are attaching greater importance to their health.”“随着经济的飞速发展，随着人民生活的改善，随着大家对健康的重要性的了解，”不要忘记，四级作文总共才要你写百十来个字，你一开头就罗罗嗦嗦说了三四十个字，还没有说到正题上，多么不得要领。切记，好的作文应该单刀直入，直截了当。不要兜圈子，绕弯子，第一句话最好就采用“topic
24、sentence”，点明主题，重点突出这叫“开门见山” 。因此，我们上来就应该写:“Good health is important to everyone.”“开门见山”之后，也就是旗帜鲜明地亮出自己的观点之后，下面我们应该用事例来支持自己的观点，这些事例，就叫做“闪光点” ，如果事例很多，还可以采用“First” ， “Second”， “Third”这类的排列方法。有的考生会说，写议论文先端出论点，再给出论据，这我知道，但是，有时候我想不起来事实或例子来支持自己的结论怎么办?这时，有两个相当重要的词汇大家应该铭记在心“with”和“without” ，尤其是后一个，议论文中几乎可以算是一
25、把开启各式门锁的“万能钥匙” 。如:Good health is very important to everyone.With it，we can study hard;We can serve the country;We can do everything as we like.Without good health，everybody knows，we will fail to do things;We can twork efficiently;We may stay in hospital;We ll become aburden of our family，etc.记住，with
26、、without 不是在说废话，而是在用“正证法”和“反证法”来论述事情。我们再看第二段“保持健康的方法” 。In my opinion，there are two ways for me to keep fit.First，we must eat a balanced diet.That is to saywe must eat not only eggs，fish，meat but also some vegetables and fruit everyday.Besides eating，drinking clean water is also important.Never get a
27、ddicted to drinking the so-called“soft drinks”.Second，exercising is a vital part of our daily life.We can do some running in the morning and play football in the afternoon.至于第三段， “我的实践 ”，有的考生会问:“写点什么呢?”不要忘记，第二段中提到“吃”与“锻炼”是保持健康的最佳途径，那么，第三段还写“吃”与“锻练”我自己是怎么做的，不就行了吗?还有人会说:“我以前做得不好，那我就写自己的决心和保证吧!” “From
28、today on，I will.;I will.;”或者“I plan to do it as follows.”那叫“我的实践”吗? 顶多算是“我的希望”或“我的计划” 。这样写就跑题了。可见，切题不仅是指全文，三段中的每一段也存在是否切题这样一个问题。有的考生这样写第三段，就基本上可以说是达到要求了:As a university student，I pay much attention to my physical exerciser.I do some swimming in Summer and some skating in Winter，I often play badminto
29、n and tennis.I m also careful with my diet.In a word，keeping healthy is not very hard if you just take it seriously.（二）有人可能会问:知道了这几项原则，上了考场我为什么还是写不出来呢?这就牵涉到英文作文的两大考试目的了。英文作文到底要考大家什么?我们认为，主要考查你的两大方面思路表达与英文水平。 有的考生一拿到作文题常常会抓耳挠腮，不知道该写些什么，肚里空空如也，这叫做:“没有思路”;也有的人，思路倒有，只是“英文水平”较低;当然，更有一些人“思路”没有， “英文”也不怎么样，
30、要拿高分，其难度就可想而知了。下面，我们分别来谈谈“思路”与“英文”这两件事。大家知道，到了考场上，作文的第一件事是思路。有些人，没有思路，只好随心所欲，信手写去，写着写着，自己也不知道写到哪里了。这种作文，难道会条理清楚?难道会中心突出?又怎么能做到干净整洁，不乱涂乱画?因此，拿到作文后的第一件事就是要审题并列出一个提纲。这就好比家中要待客先列出一份菜单一样。菜单列好后，按单去把菜买好，这就叫“素材” ，再炒好端上桌，就叫“英文表达”了。没有菜单，再高明的作家也会“巧妇难为无米之炊”的。列“菜单” ，即作文的提纲不必过长，寥寥数语，中、英文皆可。万一上了考场没有稿纸，把准考证翻过来，只言片语
31、可矣! 例如作文“Electricity and Our Daily Life”.Electricity is essential in our daily life.If there were no electricity，. Therefore，.【 Outline】 电的用途:提供动力/照明/日常生活。假如没有电: 生产/生活，都会受到影响。因此，我们要节约用电。Electricity is essential in our daily life.It runs the machines in factories;It starts the vehicles and light the
32、streets and rooms.With it， we can watch TV，listen to the tape recorder，cook meals or store food in the fridge.In a word，it helps us a lot in our daily life.If there were no electricity，all the machines would stop working.At night， it would be very dark.We would have to wash our clothes with our hand
33、s.Students would use oil lamps to do their homework.We would live as our ancestors did centuries ago. Therefore，electricity is very important to us.O(本文来自：www.bdFqY.cOM 千 叶帆文 摘:英语四级作文写偏题)ur life cannot go on without it，not to mention the construction of our country.Our country is short of electricit
34、y，now. So，everybody should try to save it.（三）提纲列出之后，下一步就是用比较标准的英文将你想要说的意思表达出来，这就需要有较好的英文基本功底:包括单词、句子结构、语法、词组等等。下面，大家先看两篇作文，其思路还算清晰，文章比较切题，层次也很合理，但是，单就其语言文字方面，有哪些主要问题呢?【例】 Traffic in Big Cities1.Traffic has become a social problem in big cities.2.One way to solve this problem is.3.Another way is.Traf
35、fic has become a social problem in big cities. Of course，have a car is a good thing， but if every person own a car，the streets will became too crowded. So，traffic jams occurred during the rush hours and accidents happened more often.One way to solve this problem is develop public transportation syst
36、em.For example，we should buy more buses and we should built more roads，especially round-the-city roads And underground trains is also a good solution. Another way is to reduce the big city s population.Our country population control is a wise and necessary policy.If big city people reduce，traffic wi
37、ll less crowded.第一句抄起始句，无问题。第二句，作者想说:“有车是件好事。 ”于是就采取了汉语的表达方式:“have a car is a good thing”，但英文就大错特错了。须知，英文的主语一般只能是四部分组成:名词（含代词） 、动名词 ving、动词不定式 to 及句子。动词 have是万万不能当主语的。所以，至少应改为“having” 。接下来，every person 那动词 own 自然应该加“s”了。streets will 后面动词用原形 become，第三行 so 大写“s” ，Traffic Jams occurred and accidents ha
38、ppened.动词完全不需要用过去式，那样，就给人以一种:“事情已过去了，现在已经不堵车，也没有交通事故了”的印象。所以，切记，议论文中使用过去式一定要合理，不要滥用。第二段“One way to solve this problem is to develop.”才行。一般来说，每句话只应有一个谓语动词（并列时当成一个看） ，所以，有了“is” ， “develop”必须消掉（消动词有三招，to v，ving， ved 过去分词） 。We should build.，And 应小写。underground trains is.主谓语不协调或改为 trains are，或改为train is，
39、后者更好些，因为此处不是在查数，而是在讲一种情况:“地铁”这种形式，是一个好办法。末一段可改为:Our country s population control is a wise and necessary policy.If the number of the people in big cities is reduced，traffic will become less crowded.综上所述，一篇英文要想写得很地道，起码应注意以下几个方面: 主语是上述四部分之一吗? 谓语动词是一个吗?（每句话一个，从句也算一句话）这个动词时态、语态、语气正确吗?若是在shall， will，must
40、，may，can 等情态或助动词后，用原形了吗?除了这个谓语之外的其它动词消掉了吗?（叫做动词的非谓语形式） 主语与谓语一致吗? 及物动词或介词后，使用宾语的形式了吗?（主、系表除外） 定语或状语的位置放的合理吗? 从句的引导词使用恰当吗? 单词有没有拼写错误?（四）现在，我们已经知道了作文大体上怎样写: 审题并列出提纲（约 5 分钟） 开始写:（1）切题（2 ）干净（3）少犯错误（ 4）开门见山（5 ）闪光点（约 20 分钟） 交卷前检查（ 1）拼写错误（2）语法错误等（约 5 分钟）2013 年 6 月大学英语四级考试作文标准版点评The importance of doing small
41、 thingsFrom the carton, we can clearly see that the boy is worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father tells him to empty the dustbin first. This carton reminds me of a Chinese saying:If you dont clean the room(solve your problems), then how can you control the world. However, most pe
42、ople always attach great importance to something big, but neglect small things.In my opinion, it is necessary and important to do small things. On the one hand, doing small things well helps us to develop good habits, which set a good foundation for our future development. There is no doubt that one
43、 of the greatest differences between success and failure is the importance placed on little things. On the other hand, the big is the little. If something needs to be done, it is big. No matter what kinds of task, if it is worth doing, it can be big.Taking all these into account, we can easily notic
44、e that it is reasonable to do small things before big ones. So before doing important things, lets empty our dustbin first!【 点评】本次四级作文是一篇图画作文，大家对于这样的作文形式应该不会陌生吧，历年考题中也曾出现过类似题型，所以这也算老生常谈了。图画作文题目怎么写呢？首先要确立文章的基本思想，这是最重要的。我们要确定图画给我们传达的是一个什么样的信息。本次作文的重点就在这一句话”the importance of doing small things before u
45、ndertaking something big”。从图画中男孩与父亲的对话篇三：大学英语四级优秀作文范文 11. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做Attend Your Classes RegularlyNowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip o
46、ut of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers.In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpfu
47、l to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, atte
48、nding classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future.Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day well benefit from it.点评：2008 年
49、元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008 年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本预测题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。范文 21. 宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况;2. 一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性 ;3. 如何创造和谐的宿舍生活。On a Harmonious Dormitory LifeDormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory be disturbed in one way or another.As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members. On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. On the other han
