1、这篇习作所用的语言知识比较普通，学生都能看得懂，而且里面的每一个句子大多数学生也都能写。而且这篇小短文几乎把一个六年级学生所学过的关于描写人物的所有语言都用上了，可谓是一篇典范之作。再者，这名学生在文章的结尾还抛给了读者一个问题，让读者猜猜她的好朋友是谁，这也是学生所热衷的事。于是，我就把这篇习作发到学生手中，学生边读边猜，兴趣盎然，在读的过程中还学习了写小文段的范例1、My FriendI have a good friend. She is a girl. She is tall and thin. She has long hair. She is very active. She li
2、kes playing the piano and listening to music. She goes to school on foot, because her home is near our school. We are in the same class. We often play together after class. We like each other very much. Who is she? Can you guess?2、A Great Man Teacher: Would Shakespeare be a great man if he were stil
3、l alive today? Student: Of course. He must be a great man, for so far nobody has lived to over 400 years. 译文：一名伟人 老师：如果莎士比亚还活着，他会是一名伟人吗？ 学生：当然。因为到目前为止，还没有人活到 400 多岁。3、It is very hot in the summer.people dont like going out on summer afternoon because the temperature is high.sometimes it is raining a
4、fter sun,that is cool!maybe on a summer night.it is thunder and lightning.it is make people scary,and dangerous!so please dont go out when it is thunder.Though the weather in summer is hot,but I think summer is interesting,because we can swim in the poor!that is great4,My Friends Birthday Today is m
5、onday. It is also my friends birthday. I sent a beautiful gift to him. He is very happy!We played games at his home. We danced,sang and so on. His mather bought a big birthday cake. It is very delicious! I like it very much! This day Im very happy! 5,My Dream I am a 5th class elementary student. Alt
6、hough I very am also young, but I have my dream! I after hoped I grow up may work as a singer. Because I like singing very much. It may give me to bring to pull many joy. 6,My Good Friend My good friends name is called SARA. me and she together grows up since childhood. Is the very good very good fr
7、iend. She is very lovable. Has a pair of enchanting big eye, small cheek, long hair. Her all are such perfect as if. Her personal connection unusual good! Sometimes I also very much envy her!7,A Happy Day Last Sunday, I visited my grandmother. We listened to music and planted flowers. I counted the
8、flowers. There were ten Then I helped my grandmother cook lunch. When we finished, I washed the dishes and she cleaned the kitchen. In the evening, I watched TV and played the violin at home, It was fun. 8,My Dream I am a 5th class elementary student. Although I very am also young, but I have my dre
9、am! I after hoped I grow up may work as a singer. Because I like singing very much. It may give me to bring to pull many joy. 9,My Cat I have a cat named Mimi. Its hair is as white as snow. I often play games with it. It amuses me a lot and I treat it as a little friend. Every morning, I would say g
10、oodbye to it before I go to school and Mimi would wave its front-legs to me. It brings me a lot of pleasure. But it takes time and costs money to keep the cat. My parents and I spend much time taking care of it, feeding it and cleaning it. We have to clean the house from time to time, or the cat wil
11、l make them dirty and smelly. 10, Im Jack.My school day in China is quite different from my school day here in America.School in China starts at 8:00.I get up at 6:00 at weekdays,and I leave home at 7:15.I go to school by bus.We finish school at 5:00 in the afternoon.I stay late at school because Im
12、 in the football team. I play football for one hour.I go home at 6:00.我叫 Jack,我在中国这里的教学日不同于我在美国的教学日。中国的教学日在早上 8 点开始，我在周末 6 点就起床和我 7 点 15 就离开家搭巴士去我的学校上学。我们在下午 5 点放学。我会留在学校晚了是因为我参加了足球队。我花了 1 个小时在足球上。我 6 点就回家。11, My Mother I have a nice mother.Shes tall and thin.Shes active and smart.Shes very stict.Sh
13、e favourite fruit is orange.She like English best.beef is she favourite.She play Ping-Pong,read books,watch TV,use a computer on satdays and sundays.She helpful very much.She can sweep the floor,cook the meals.You love she?12, My mother My mother is nice.Shes tall and thin.She has big eyes and small
14、 nose.Shes funny.Shes very strict.But shes very kind.She favourite day is Sunday,because she can watch TV,Monday to Saturday she no time watch TV.Her favourite fruit is potato,because ther are tasty.Her favourite food is green beans,becose ther are healthy.Shes helpful,she can cook the meals and she
15、 can wash the clothes.I love my mother very much. 13, Pandas There are some pandas in the zoo. They look like a bear, but they are not a bear. They live in China. They have a small tail and fat body. They are black and white. Theyre very clumsy, but they can climb trees. They like to eat bamboo very
16、 much. Look! The baby panda is under the mother panda, they are sleeping. They look very lovely. Pandas are my favourite animals.14, Breakfast or Lunch? It was Sunday. I never get up early on Sundays. I sometimes stay in bed until lunch time. Last Sunday. I got up very late. I looked out of the wind
17、ow. It was dark outside.”what a day!”I thought. ”Its raining again.”Just then,the telephone rang. It was my aunt Lucy.”Ive just arrived by train, she said.”Im coming to see you.” ”But Im still having breakfast,”I said. ”What are you doing?”she asked. ”Im having breakfast,”I repeated. ”dear me,”she s
18、aid.”Do you always get up so late? Its one oclock!” 这是星期天。星期天我从不早起，有时候我一直睡到吃午饭。上星期天我起得很晚。我向窗外看去，外面一片漆黑。我想：“倒霉的天，又下雨啦！”就在这时电话铃响了，是我姑妈 Lucy 来的电话。她说：“我刚下火车，我准备来看你。” “可我正在吃早饭哩！” 我说。 “你在做什么？” 她问。 “我正在吃早饭呢。 ”我重复说。 她说：“哎呀！你总是起得这么晚吗？现在一点钟啦！”15, 我的书包 My Backpack I have a backpack. It is large and it is blue.
19、 It is a birthday gift from my parents. I love it very much. It is very “hard-working“, because I keep all my school things in it. It is very heavy. It is with all the time during school days. It is a good friend of mine我有一个背包.它非常大 , 绿色的. 他是我的父母作为礼物送给我的.我非常喜欢它.它非常能干,因为我把所有的学习用品都装了进去 ,所以非常沉甸甸的.它伴随着我在
20、学校的所有时光, 是就是我的一个好朋友.16, My favourite fruit My favourite fruit is apples I like apples，because they are delicious There are many kinds of apples，and they have different colours：red and greenThe red apples are sweet，but a lot of green apples are not very sweetSo，many people dont like green apples at a
21、ll 17, This is a photo of elephants.The elephants are big.Their noses are very long.I like them very much. 这是 1 张大象的照片。这些大象很大，它们的鼻子很长。我非常喜欢它们。elephants noses very long.they eat plants. they walk very slowly.besaur they very heavy.l see their at Animall Land. l like them very much.阅读分析 1. My name is
22、Tom. My birthday is June 2nd. The weather is sunny and hot. Its my favourite season. On my birthday, I usually have a birthday party. Sometimes we have a picnic. Tomorrow is my birthday. I am cleaning the room now. My mom is making a birthday cake for me. 根据上面短文的意思判断下面的句子是否正确，正确的在句子前面的括号里打“”，不正确的打“”
23、 ( )1.Toms birthday is on Childrens Day. ( )2.Its warm and sunny in summer. ( )3. Today is June 1st. ( )4. Toms mother can make a birthday cake. ( )5.Usually there is a birthday party on Toms birthday. 2. Look!This is a picture of Mr.Brownt family. The man in a biack coat is Mr.Brown.The woman near
24、him is Mrs.Brown,The little girl in a red coat is Sue. The tall boy behind her is Jim,her brother.The family is now inChina.Tomorrow is Childrens Day.MR brown wants to buy some presents for his children. Sue wants a new skirt,but Jim wants a new bike. How happy they are! 1.Whose picture is this? _.
25、2.Wheres the family now? _. 3.Who is the little girl in a red coat? _. 4.What presents do Mr Browns children want to buy? _. 5.Which festival is tomorrow? _. 3. Betty and KittyBetty and Kitty are twins. Theyre 12 years old. They look the same. But they have different hobbies. Betty likes collecting
26、stamps. She has many beautiful stamps. Theyre from different cities and countries. But Kitty likes growing flowers. The flowers are all very beautiful.Betty and Kitty both like reading books. Betty likes reading storybooks. But Kitty likes reading science books.On Sunday,they usually ride bikes to t
27、he park. They can play with their friends there. Sometimes their parents go there, too. 根据短文内容，判断下列句子的正误，正确的写“T”，错误的写“F” 。( ) 1. Betty is Kittys sister. ( ) 1. Betty likes growing flowers. ( ) 2. Kitty likes reading storybooks. ( ) 3. Theyre twelve years old. ( ) 4. They usually take a bus to the pa
28、rk on Saturday. 4. Lovely pandasfaces look like cats, but their fat bodies and short tails are like bears. Pandas are very lovely and they are friendly to people. People likes them very much.Most Pandas live in China. The northwestern part ofSichuan Province(省) and southern part of Gansu Province ar
29、e their hometowns. Pandas like to climb trees. They usually live in the forests of high mountains, eat bamboo and drink spring water. 根据短文的意思，选出正确的答案。 ( )1. The panda mainly lives in. A. America B. Shanghai C. London D. China ( )2. Is like a cats. A. The panda B. The pandas face C. The pandas body D
30、. The pandas tail ( )3. Where are the pandas hometowns? A. Guangdong and Gansu. B. Sichuan and Suzhou.C. Gansu and Sichuan D. Hubei and Sichuan ( )4. Whats the pandas main food? A. Rice. B. Meat. C. Bamboo. D. Grass. 5. Four Good FriendsMary, Nancy, Ron and Kate are good friends. Marys favorite numb
31、er is 3 and her favorite country is France. 16 is Nancys number, and America is her favorite country. Ron likes Japan very much. 30 is his favorite number. Whose favorite number is 60? Oh, it is Kate. Kates father works in Chinese food very much and they also like Chinese people. Kates lucky number
32、is 6. All of them hope that one day they can travel the world together. 阅读短文，回答问题。 1. Whats Marys favorite number? 2. Whats Nancys favorite country? 3. Whats Kates fathers job? 4. Does Kate like Chinese food? 6. Hello. My name is Millie. Im thirteen years old. Im a good boy. I often play volleyball
33、so .Im fit and healthy. For breakfast, I always have some bread and an egg and I drink a glass of orange juice. I sometimes have rice with fish and an apple for lunch. I really love apples, because “An apple a day keeps the doctor away（离开） ”. In the evening, I sometimes have a glass of milk or a cup
34、 of green tea and some biscuits. For dinner, I often have soup, meat and vegetables. I like vegetables because they are fresh and healthy. They are good for me. Look at me! How tall and strong I am now! ( )Millie is 14 this year. ( )Millie likes football very much. ( )Millie often drinks orange juic
35、e for breakfast. ( )Millie likes apples because theyre healthy. ( )I often have vegetables for dinner. 7. Zip:Whats your favourite food, Zoom? Zoom:I like beef, but Im heavy now. I have to eat vegetables. What about you, Zip? Zip:I like chicken. Its tasty. Do you like fruits, Zoom. Zoom:Yes, carrot
36、juice is my favourite Its fresh and healthy. Zip:I like fruits. But I dont like strawberries. Theyre sour. 1、Beef is Zooms favowrite food.（ ） 2、Zoom can eat a let of meat.（ ） 3、Zoom likes carrot juice because its fresh and healthy.（ ） 4、Zip likes strawberries because theyre sour.（ ） 5、Zips favourite
37、 food is chicken.（ ） 8. Jane is a student. She is fifteen. She lives with her parents and her grandfather. Her grandfather is seventy years old. He has got a backache. He needs to see a doctor. But Janes parents are very busy. Her father is a policeman. Her mother is a teacher. So Jane wants to go t
38、o hospital with her grandfather after school. She hopes her grandfather gets better soon. （ ）1. Whats Janes job? A. A teacher B. A policewoman C. A student （ ）2. Who needs to see a doctor? A. Jane B. Janes parents C. Janes grandfather 9 Liu Tao: Hi, Mike. Nice to see you. Mike: Nice to see you, too.
39、 Liu Tao. Liu Tao: What day is it today? Mike: Its Thursday. What lessons do you have in this morning? Liu Tao: We have Maths, Chinese, Art, and Science. Mike: Oh, I like PE very much. But we dont have PE today. Liu Tao: We have PE and Computer Studies this afternoon. Mike: Great! Do you like PE? Li
40、u Tao: No, I dont. I like English very much. Tomorrow we will have an English lesson in the morning. Mike: Its time for class. Lets go! 阅读理解，并判断。 ( )1. Liu Tao has PE in the afternoon. ( )2. Liu Tao has six lessons today. ( )3. Liu Tao doesnt like English. ( )4. Liu Tao will have English lesson on F
41、riday morning. 10 Mr Brown lives in a nice house in a small town with his wife(妻子) , Mrs Brown. From Monday to Friday he works in an office near his house. He is free on Saturdays and Sundays. He has a nice garden beside his house. He likes growing flowers and he often works in the garden on Saturda
42、ys and Sundays. The flowers are very beautiful and Mrs Brown likes them very much. She often helps Mr Brown. ( )1. Mr Brown lives in _with his wife. A. a city B. a small town C. a big town ( )2. He works_ days a week in his office. A. four B. five C. six ( )3. He isnt _on Saturdays and Sundays. A. f
43、ree B. busy C. happy ( )4. He likes _ on Saturdays and Sundays. A. working in his garden B. walking in his gardon C. looking at his garden ( )5. Mrs Brown _ the flowers. A. like B. doesnt like C. often helps一. 连词成句 1.do pumpkin they lanterns need 2.masks lets sone boy horse 3.put you on a grape your
44、 nose can 4.of the shop are lots in there vases 二.填空 1.wheree your new photo?Its_thewall. 2.here are some puppets_you. 3.I cant find my umbrella.look,its_the door. 4.Its seven oclock.Time_go to school now. 三.翻译 1.what shape_ 2.draw a triangle_ 四.根据首字母提示完成短文 It is halloween tomorrow.We want to doy so
45、me things fot a p_.We n_ a pumpkin,a vase c_,some flowers,some masks and so on.So we go to the s_. We go there by car. I like the r_ mask very much.My mother likesthe h_mask. We have a big g_.It is b_our house. There are many beautiful f_in it.We p_them in the vase. We have many things to eat and d_
46、.DO you like our party?Cone to our horse.At seven i_the evening tomorrow! Happy Halloween!一. 连词成句 1.do pumpkin they lanterns need They need pumpkin do lanterns. 2.masks lets sone boy horse 3.put you on a grape your nose can can you put a grape on your nose? 4.of the shop are lots in there vases Ther
47、e are lots of vases in the shop. 二.填空 1.wheres your new photo?Its_on_the wall. 2.here are some puppets_for_you. 3.I cant find my umbrella.look,its_behind_the door. 4.Its seven oclock.Time_to_go to school now. 三.翻译 1.what shape_什么形状 _ 2.draw a triangle_画一个三角形_ 四.根据首字母提示完成短文 It is halloween tomorrow.W
48、e want to doy some things fot a party_.We need_ a pumpkin,a vase c_,some flowers,some masks and so on.So we go to the shop_. We go there by car. I like the _rabbit_ mask very much.My mother likes the _horse _mask. We have a big garden_.It is behind_our house. There are many beautiful flowers_in it.We put_them in the vase. We have many things to eat and dr
