1、,Writing,(分析建议类),(划线部分可替换),下一页,写作模式(分析建议类),1) As is known to all, sth. does bring a lot of benefits to sb. / sth. else. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen , thereby changing for the better.(正面分析I) 3) Besides, it can make /render sb. / sth. else better able to (正面分析II) 4) And best of all, it can hel
2、p sb.(正面分析III) 5)But all the above does not mean / follow that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects sth. brings about. 6) If, as a succession,Back,(划线部分可替换),下一页,上一页,of scientific studies reveals / implies / suggests, there are more chances that (负面分析I) 7) In addition, the more ., the wors
3、e. (负面分析II) 8) And worst of all, (负面分析III) 9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of sth. 10) On the one hand, (建议I) 11) On the other, . (建议II) 12) In sum, sth. can do sb. / sth. else good or harm, all depending on (结论句),Back,1. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的益处。 2. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的坏处。 3. 给出如何参
4、加体育锻炼的建议。,The Effects of Exercise on Our Health,下一页,上一页,Back,1) As is known to all, exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles, thereby changing our whole health for the better. 3) Besides, it can make our brains bett
5、er able to react to what is going on around us. 4) And best of all, it can help us breed optimism about our tough life.,Reference model:The Effects of Exercise on Our Health,下一页,上一页,Back,5) But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects exercise brings about. 6)
6、 If you are normally inactive and then, contrary to your usual habit, start a program of undue exercise, as a succession of scientific studies reveals, there are more chances that you have yourself injured. 7) In addition, the more exercise those on a fat-reducing diet take, the more loss of iron th
7、ey will suffer and the worse their health will get. 8) And,上一页,下一页,Back,worst of all, continual as well as excessive exercise can result in sudden death. 9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise. 10) On the one hand, our physical exercise must be based on both progressiveness and regularity. 11) On the other, we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own. 12) In sum, exercise can do us good or harm, all depending on how we make use of it.,上一页,THE END,