1、书面表达训练,日常训练,考试说明心得,一. 书面表达四要素 内容要点的完整性 语言交际的得体性 语言表达的得体性 语篇结构的连贯性,二. 高分6大特征,1.条理性. 文章思路、组织材料、叙述顺序. 2.准确性. 时态、语态、用词和句法. 3.流畅性.连接词.,二. 高分6大特征,4.多样性. 句式多样、语言简洁. 5.思想性. 情感因素、感情色彩. 6.美观性. 卷面布局、书写.,2000年高考满分作文,At 7：15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th，2000，I was heading east on the south side of the Park Ro
2、ad，taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.,He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car
3、hit the elderly hard.,I thought the driver would have stopped to help，but she didnt. Instead，she just drove off，leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.,Fortunately，I noted down the details：it was a yellow car，the plate number of which was AC864，and the driver was a young lady. After t
4、hat，I went over to check out the old man.(30分),三. 容易扣分的环节,标点符号和大小写. 出现汉语拼音. 时间分配不合理. 构思混乱、涂改现象严重. 字数不够或超过最高要求.,写作中常见的句法错误,主谓不一致Ten years are a short time in a persons life. 时态不一致They walked and walked and soon they come to a small river. 词类不一致Their mother is honestly and friendly,逻辑不一致The teacher wa
5、snt looking at me, but I copied something. 代词替代不一致He had many pictures taken during the holidays and showed it to me. 介词多余At the first time I saw him, he was playing football.,连词多余Because he was very careless, so he made many mistakes in the exam. 冠词多余The teacher told his students not to write silly
6、 things in the public places. 句子成分残缺Some people against the suggestion.,及物动词和不及物动词误用Man depends water for many years. 非谓语动词误用The man admitted to break the glass. 词语搭配错误As the days going on, he was beginning to realize his mistake.,汉语式表达I like table tennis and it is my most favorite sport. The hotel
7、is 12 miles far away from here. I went to the theatre yesterday night.Your letter has received.,主语不及物动词,主语vi.状语,主语vi.状语,主语vt.宾语,主语vt.宾语,主语vt.宾语,主语vt.宾从,主语系动词表语,主语vt.双宾语,主语vt.双宾语,主语vt.复合宾语,主语vt.复合宾语,主语vt.复合宾语,主语vt.复合宾语,日常训练方法,1. 缩写 The farmer and the snakeThe snake made the farmer die. 2. 改写 第三人称单数改写
8、 换角度改写 3. 续写,日常训练方法,4. 摘抄 The year 1949 witnessed the foundation of the New China. 5. 日记、周记 Accuracy fluency Copying doing exercises guided writing free writing 6. 连词成句,日常训练方法,7. 合并句子 8. 补全单词练习 9. Controlled writingdictation struggle, strike, fear, unforgettable, naughty,I have an unforgettable expe
9、rience when I was a little boy. I was so naughty that I always do something dangerous. Once, I went to a river to swim alone. I didnt know how deep the river is. When I swam happily, I felt something striking me. I struggled hard to get out of the river but I was very tired. When I feared I would di
10、e, a man helped me.,10. 变化句式,1. 简单句并列句复合句 Please start early. You can get there in time. Start early, or you cannot get there in time. You cant get there in time unless you start early.,2. 主动语态被动语态 Someone saw him studying hard in his study. He was seen studying hard in his study.,3. 正常语序倒装语序 It did
11、 not stop raining until midnight. Not until midnight did it stop raining.,4. 一般句式强调句式 Her coming delighted me. What delighted me most was her coming. It was her coming that delighted me most.,5. 一般句式感叹句式 My father is a great man. Such is my father. What a great man he is!,6. 完整句式省略句式（状语/定语紧缩） Look o
12、ut for cars when you are crossing the street. The words which are written on the blackboard are too small.,7. 插入语 He didnt come on time and he didnt do his homework. To the teachers surprise, he didnt come on time. And whats worse, he didnt do his homework.,8. 替代词、同位语 Meeting my uncle after all thes
13、e years is a great experience for me, one I will treasure for ever.,9. 非谓语动词 We can see a little boy in the picture, and he was standing in front of a mirror. We can see in the picture a little boy standing in front of a mirror.,10. With复合结构 There is a woman on the bus. She has a baby in her arms. T
14、here is a woman on the bus, with a baby in her arms. (baby in arms),11. 推测句 You didnt hand in your exercises in time. You should have handed in your exercises in time.,12. 合理使用动词 There was a small river at the foot of the hill. There flowed a small river at the foot of the hill.,Ill inform you of th
15、e news that Beijing TV Station is to have a talent show. Ill tell you about the news that Beijing TV Station is to hold a talent show.,Walk out of the room Slip out of the room Sail out of the room Dance out of the room Stagger out of the room Struggle out of the room,13. 短语优先 They say large crowds
16、of tourists to the zoo will cause traffic jam. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jam.,11. 扩展句子,Wordy better concise 使用形容词 The little girl was at the corner of the street. She is cold and she is hungry. The little girl was at the corner of the street, cold and hungry
17、.,使用副词 Im lucky. I got a well-paid position in that company. Luckily, I got a well-paid position in the company.,使用介词短语 It used to be a beautiful place. And it was covered with green trees. It used to be a beautiful place with a lot of green trees around it.,使用复合句 I am a student. My name is Li Hua.
18、Ive just returned to my hometown from the college. I find that great changes have taken place in my hometown.,I am a student whose name is Li Hua. Returning to my hometown from the college, I find that great changes have taken place in it.,13.适当的使用修辞,Now is the time to forget everything in the past.
19、 Now is the time to get down to business. Now is the time to work hard for the future.,What had been experienced in the past was always in memory like a picture. He has a heart of stone. The pen is more powerful than the sword. Im reading Shakespeare.,The old man lived a year in a minute. Necessity is the mother of invention. He is as welcome as a storm. There was something simple, sincere in that voice.,研究性学习,Write real letters Publish their own newsletters Advertise around the school Write questionnaires Computer word-processing,
