1、英语高考专题复习,短 文 改 错,Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?,1. 看不出句子有错。2. 看出句子出错的地方, 但无法改正。3. 知道改正句子错误的地方, 但答案不正 确。,How to correct？,Any skills？,Any rules？,How to correct a composition,短文改错,11年浙江卷短文改错,.,I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys
2、 than I did. There was one on particular Id always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasnt looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know Id done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she d
3、ropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.,Steps of correcting a composition:,Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .,2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes. (语法错误，逻辑错误),
4、3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones.（检查核对，攻克难点）,11年浙江卷短文改错,.,I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular Id always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasnt looki
5、ng. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know Id done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she tha
6、nked me and ever mentioned it again.,Missing word,Unnecessary word,Wrong word,改错命题统计,11年浙江卷短文改错,.,I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular Id always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasnt looking. I guessed, e
7、ven at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know Id done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever
8、 mentioned it again.,名词,形容词,介词,代词,动词,动词,副词,形容词,动词,副词,动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。,短文改错口诀：,一、动词形,主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。,She liked it very much and reads it to the class. Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. ,read,are,1. I remembered
9、 her words and calm down. 2. Charles and Linda were seeing near the top of the building. 3. The librarian will write to you, and let you know when the book you want has returned. 4. Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them. 5. What your favourite sport? 6. By the way when you come
10、, please take your sister here.,calmed,seen,been,costs,is,bring,二、名词数,指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。,so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. Their word were a great encouragement to me. _,subjects,words,We often watch football match on TV together. _,matches,三、还要注意形和副,1.But Mr. Brown was doing
11、quite good for a dog. _ 2.He asked angry if we had finished the work. _ 3. Im sure well have a wonderfully time together. 4. Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family.,angrily,well,wonderful,Unfortunately,(1) After an hour or so we began to feel very frightening. (2) Last Sunday, police ca
12、rs hurried to the taller building in New York. (3) As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.,frightened,tallest,查形副,名前系后应是形 动前动后应是副 形副等级要判断 修饰等级副要记,四、非谓语，细辨别,主要有现在分词, 过去分词，动名词, 不定式及and 前后一致的错误。,1. My parents love me and will do all they can make
13、 sure 2. Play football makes us grow up tall and strong. 3. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. _ 4. Three such cars can fit in the space now needby one car of the usual space.,to,talking,playing,needed,He hurriedly got up, seizing the
14、 bag and left for the station.,seized,五、 代词格，细领悟,I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English this term._ I have a good friend whos name is Liu Mei.,us,whose,1. 人称代词的偷换错误 The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game. 2. 缺少人称代
15、词的错误 The day before the speech contest, English teacher talked to me.,their,we,my,六、介词短语常常考,(1) There are so many places I want to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer. (2) If the book you want is out, you may ask it to be kept for you. (3) Her strength made me stronger and gave to me
16、 courage to try things others thought were impossible. (4) and my dad explained for the rules. (5) Im going to stay in Nottingham by my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy. (6) I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.,as,for,(1) My first one job was to
17、clean the tables in a small restaurant. (2) When he was in his fifty, he moved to France.(3) This big steel plant has a thousand of workers.(4) About three-fifth of the workers of that steel works are young people.,fifties,three-fifths,数词,主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。,catch a sight ofin h
18、urry in Sunday afternoonexpress ussuch many people,a,on,ourselves,so,七、习惯用法要记住,八、句子成分多分析,不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。,I dont know that they don like to talk with me. _ I live in Beijing，where is the capital of China. _ She set such a difficult problem that we couldnt wo
19、rk out. _,why,which,as,1、I told Mother, Father, Sister and all my friends here that a great time I had. 2、Many of those do voluntary work are young people , and the number are growing.3、 It is on arable land where the farmers produce food for the whole population.,what,who,that,4、I laid my bicycle i
20、n front of his car and then I told him what a bad driver whom I thought he was .,九、逻辑错误须关注,与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。,The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. _Some students may also save up for our college or future use. _,everyth
21、ing,their,(1) I was only about six that he held his hand out to me. (2) So I didnt lose heart and kept running. (3) We liked the dishes you had cooked but we were happy to learn the English songs you taught us. (4) I love basketball. Therefore, my father loves football. (5) It was about noon we arri
22、ved at the foot of the mountain.,when,But,and,However,when,十、冠词、连词常光顾,查连词,错用and与but 勿连so与becauseAlthough不与but连 肯是and否是or,短文改错应注意的问题,四不改:标点符号不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改。一词不能改为两,Dont forget!,【解题步骤】,1 浏览全文，掌握大意,2 分句阅读，逐句找错,3 检查核对，攻克难点,4 规范答题 不留空白,短文改错口诀：,动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误
23、须关注，冠词连词常光顾。,My swimming experience has been extreme interesting. It was a time when I swam like a rock. This went on till one day while I was fishing with a friend at nearby pond. I slipped into it. If my friend has not come to my rescue, I would have been drowning. Ever since then, I have known th
24、e importance of learning to swim. I didnt attend any training class but learned it all by my own. Now I have no difficulty swim at all. Though my self-invented styles look awkward, but at least they can keep my floating. Thinking of this, I am more than satisfied.,Attention please, everyone. We have
25、 accepted the weather forecast on the radio this morning that there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure shut the windows and doors until you leave your classrooms. A sports meet that we planned to hold on tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes fine, we will make other announcement. They will have classes on Wednesday as usual. Since it is colder tomorrow, please dress on more clothes in time. Those who came to school by bike, dont keep your umbrella open while riding.,
