1、经历感受,主题：叙述你或你的朋友类似“揠苗助长”的经历和感受The story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. He was once badly ill and went to see the doctor. The doctor gave him some pills, telling him to take them three times a day.,However, he failed to follow the doctors advice and took them 6 times a day. To his g
2、reat surprise, he became worse. Just as the old saying goes, “more haste less speed”. No matter what we do, we should obey the law of nature. It is the same with our studies. Only by learning step by step can we achieve something.,灵活运用超级模仿,一、写作技巧经历感受通常只需包含“谁？干了什么事？结果如何？”等, 然后再谈谈本人对此次经历的看法及感受或是从这次经历中
3、得出了什么经验教训。写经历时, 可用借鉴原文法。因为写经历就是写记叙文, 将记叙文的几个要素替换就行了, 但一定要注意主题与原文故事一致。如: 原材料是一个女孩因牙齿太大被别人嘲笑, 但她通过努力最终取得了成功。我们就可说张三因身材矮小被人瞧不起, 但他通过努力取得了成功。,二、句式模板 引出经历： (1)The story reminds me of my experience. 这个故事让我想起了我自己的经历(2)This story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. 这个故事让我想起我朋友的一次相似的经历。,(3) I al
4、so had an unforgettable experience.我也曾有一次难忘的经历(4) Take my personal experience in learning English for example. Three years ago, I. 就以我的亲身经历为例吧, 三年前, 我,(5) After reading Alans story, I recall the experience of my friend. 看了Alan的故事后, 我回想起我朋友的那段经历,感受启示： (1) From this experience I realize that its not e
5、asy but meaningful to be a journalist.通过这次经历, 我意识到做记者是不容易但又有意义的。(2) Only by learning step by step can we achieve something. 只有通过循序渐进地学习, 我们才能有所成就。,(3) I benefit a lot from this experience and realized that it is honesty that wins us the respect from others and brings us real happiness. 这次经历让我受益匪浅, 我
6、意识到正是诚实才让我们赢得他人的尊重, 也给我们带来快乐。(4) Therefore, I learned to cultivate myself to be strong-minded. 因此, 我学会了要将自己培养成意志坚强的人,A similar example jumps into my mind. Last year, my friend Lily was admitted to a famous university in Beijing.,三、超级仿写 1.以你自己或他人成长的某次经历, 说明父母过度照顾子女的影响。(2010广州一模),Having been under the
7、 complete protection of her parents for many years, she felt lost when dealing with some complex situations and found it hard to go on with her study without her parents care. In this case, being over loved gave rise to great harm and made it difficult for the child to achieve success.,2.以你的经历说明合作的重
8、要性。,I think the story can teach us that when we work together we can achieve more than when we compete. The story reminds me of my experience when I first came to this school. My classmates, Michael showed great talent in science studies while I was pretty good at history and economics. I feared tha
9、t Michael would outperform me in the exams so I avoided helping him and viewed him as my competitor.,It was not until Michael suggested that we work together that I understood the importance and benefit of cooperation. We shared learning methods and helped each other. As a result, we both made progr
10、ess in our studies and became top-ten students. In a word, working together is a win-win method.,3.叙述你或你的亲友通过勤奋创造奇迹的一次真实或虚构的经历。,This story reminds me of a similar experience of my cousin. He was nothing but a football fan. So you can imagine how angry and disappointed my uncle and aunt were every ti
11、me the result of an exam came out! He had been the last in the list of the whole grade! Everybody around my cousin thought him hopeless.,However, when he became a student of Senior Three, for some reason, he began to study very hard, or rather, day and night. In spite of the fact that he was quite o
12、ften laughed at, he kept on studying. To everybodys surprise, he was finally admitted into a famous university. From this story, we can see that nothing is impossible and that hard work creates miracles!,4. 读写任务 阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Share your journey with someone and half your fuel costs.
13、The high price of fuel may be persuading tens of thousands more people to change their trip to work by sharing the driving duties. Those who do share lifts with other people are being told they can save up to 2,000 a year in fuel costs and help prevent pollution.,For those who persevere, there can b
14、e great social benefits. Lift-sharers Jane and Steven, for example, it is not only lifts they are sharing now, but a house as well. Share books. Mr. Smith has made it a habit in the past year or so to pass on books after hes read them. As he is reading, he thinks of someone who might enjoy the book
15、next, so he hands it on.,Not only does it share the love of reading, it lets that person know Im thinking of them. Share anything. Many famous films stars share experiences of joys or sorrows by writing blogs. Ordinary people also share their family photos or opinions about work, studies, health car
16、e, friends and so on.,写作内容 1.以约30词概括短文的主要内容； 2.然后以约120个词就“分享”的主题发表看法, 内容包括： (1) 你愿意与人分享吗？为什么？ (2) 说说某一次分享的经历； (3) 分享的利弊。,The passage encourages us to share with others because people get lots of benefits by sharing cars, houses, books and experiences. People can save money and spread happiness and l
17、ove.Personally, I am too willing to share with others. As a student, I not only share the good moments but also all the difficult moments with my classmates.,Just as the saying goes, “Share your happiness with others, happiness doubles; share your sadness with others, sadness halves; share your love
18、 with others, love spreads.” So sharing plays an important role in our daily life.,Once, my classmate Tom forgot to bring his money for lunch so I shared my serving with him. We enjoyed the meal， talking and laughing. The shared meal often reminds us of the friendship between us in later life and we
19、 will never forget the happy time. It is sharing that strengthens the friendship between us.,Sharing with others has its own benefits. For one thing, it is money-saving. For another thing, it can to some extent strengthen the tie between people and spread love and happiness among them. The only limitation is that your private things sometimes may be exposed to others.,
